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From His Eyes To Hers
Part 1 Unpleasant Birthday
The day was as dull just as it was outside cold and musky it had add the touch to today's raining forecast.
"It's going to be a good day" Sasuke sarcastically muttered to himself quietly, while looking out the window mindlessly from a jail cell.
It was a dark cell, cold from the concrete floor that was stained by his violent punches and kicks. The stone wall was not in good condition either, it was more indulged in flames which made it pitch black. The only time light had ever entered it, was when it was a sunny day in konoha. Each day was worse than the other sometimes he thought it best to just kill himself, but he never could. His reason always held him back, every minute was "Find him, Kill him, and make him suffer".
Kakashi, who had visited him every day since sasuke came back, was not here on his usual time. If sasuke was lucky he wouldn't have to put up with Tsunade's constant yelling from the room next door. Tsunade had thought it best to keep the "Cold hearted bastard" next to her office for safety reasons. Sasuke hated being rescued by naruto from Itachi, his one chance to kill him and he was beat by Itachi effortlessly. He just put his head back on the cold stone wall and sighed, his fingers shivered from the icy floor but he remained there as if his soul left him leaving him dead.
There was a sudden clash of lighting from the outside thunderstorm. The lighting had lit up the room for a brief second. Sasuke remained silent and still, closing his eyes slightly as he darkness hovered around his eyes.
"Hey sasuke…" Someone said poking sasuke on the shoulder
Sasuke jerked awake with a reflex that was to attack the person. Unfortunately he was face to floor in a second, kakashi was quicker when it came to surprise attacks. Sasuke groaned angrily trying to get out of kakashi's hold on him.
"Calm down" Kakashi said while letting him go.
Sasuke said nothing but a grumble. He was repositioning himself again on the wall to continue sleeping. Not that he got much sleep anyway, he had dark rings under his eyes and a pale look. Kakashi noticed this ever since he stopped eating the food he was offered. Kakashi went on with today's activities and then gave him a good look and said.
"You should be happy, today's your eighteenth birthday" Kakashi said.
"Another year older, now leave me alone" Sasuke said with a deadly tone.
That was the end of the conversation, the only noise left was the slow calm rain fall outside. Kakashi walked out of the room, just outside the cell. You could tell kakashi was talking with naruto, saying how he needed to bring sasuke to tsunade's office.
"I don't need to see that old hag that won't shut up right now" Sasuke thought.
Naruto had entered the cell, just as he did sasuke saw a flicker of sadness in his eyes. Then the look had turned into a serious glare as if he could just tear him apart. Naruto had said nothing while cuffing him with charka chains. It was dead silent the whole two minutes while walking into the hokage's office.
"Sasuke…I have a mission for you" Tsunade said crossing her arms while lying back in her chair.
Sasuke didn't say a word, but just kept staring at Tsunade until she spoke again. Shizune hated sasuke's glare at the hokage.
"You have partners also, which is only for safety reasons" She continued.
"As you see Naruto will be one, and the other should be coming shortly" She said.
Sasuke thought of who this other person was, and what mission. He
wished the old hag would get to the point.
"The mission is to find some hidden nins around the village, they have been torturing the incoming travelers and leaving travelers for information" She said.
Sasuke thought of the idea and had an answer prepared.
"No…" was all he said.
"It's not your choice to accept the mission or not, you are going" Tsunade said acidly.
Just then the door creaked open and a kunoichi walked in with an apology bow.
"I'm sorry Hokage-sama, I didn't mean to come in so late" Sakura said taking off her rain coat.
Tsunade had smiled and said it was ok. She had naruto explain the mission to her. Sakura understood and didn't even give sasuke one glance when she came in. Sasuke really didn't pay attention until he thought of the Hyuga's.
"Wouldn't the Hyuga's be the primary one for this mission, they have the byakugan" Sasuke said to Tsunade.
"True, but Hinata and Neji are out on missions and the others already said no" She replied
"Well make them do it you old hag" He muttered under his breath.
Luckily Tsunade was too busy conversing with shizune. He remained
silent for the time being.
"Alright it's done Sasuke, Sakura, Naruto, you are all this mission three
days from now no go home and get ready" She demanded
Sakura left in a hurry and naruto walked towards sasuke. Kakashi had walked behind sasuke and looked at naruto an said.
"I'll take him back to the cell, you get ready" He ordered
Naruto just nodded and went home.
--4:00 in the morning in Konoha--
Sasuke sat on the couch in the bland room waiting. He was at Kakashi's house getting ready for the mission two days from now.
"That should be all for now, we just need more weapons and food" Kakashi said.
Sasuke didn't say anything but the casual "Hm" every now and then it was "…".
Kakashi went off into the kitchen to make breakfast. Until a sudden knock stopped him.
"Sasuke answer that will you" He said continuing on to the kitchen
Sasuke Stood up and walk to the door and opened it. He saw a girl standing at the doorway. She seemed to be in a hurry, she was constantly looking over his shoulder. Then looking down at the floor.
"Um..I-is K-k-kakashi-sensei h-here?" she said looking down at the floor not sparing a glance at him.
Sasuke just pointed at the kitchen and then went back to sitting on the couch thinking, also fiddling with his blue charka chain on his neck.
The timid girl entered the house and rushed into the kitchen.
"Ah Hinata-chan, glad you could come over at this time of the morning" Kakashi smiled under his masked
"Oh um…sure no p-problem" she replied
"Well here you go" Kakashi said while handing something to Hinata
Hinata bowed and went on her way to the door, just then a figure stood covering the kitchen doorway. Suddenly bumping into the figure, Hinata gasped and flinched. Sasuke just looked down at her then turned towards kakashi and said.
"I thought she was on a mission" Sasuke said with a death defying tone.
Kakashi gave sasuke a blank stare then finally managed to say.
"She is" he said
Sasuke moved and went back to the couch. Hinata still sort of freaked out got up, and looked at kakashi sensei then at the stove.
"K-kakashi-sensei" Hinata said.
"What is it Hinata?" he replied
She pointed at the stove to show the burnt mush.
"Dammit! Oh well guess no breakfast for the two of us today then.." He said dumping the mush in the trash.
"I-if you w-want I could ma-make break-breakfast for you and U-uchiha-san" she stammered.
Kakashi smiled and thanked Hinata
"That would be great if you did that" he said with his hand behind his head.
She smiled and Hurried to the fridge looking for something to cook. Kakashi went into the living room
Sasuke looked up at kakashi.
"I hate this damn chain"he muttered
Hinata managed to cook breakfast and left the two alone to eat. She went back to the household with the ring kakashi gave her.
"Kakashi..." sasuke said putting his chopsticks down
"What?" kakashi replyed
"Hinata...you gave her a ring, it looked like a wedding ring to me" he said with an intense tone
"Oh that...I plan to elope with hinata-chan" he said with a smile
At that moment sasuke choked on his food, he grabbed his water and drank it.
Cough cough "E-elope...wit..with...Hinata!" he said
Kakashi laughed at the suprised sasuke
"You still act like a child sasuke" he said still laughing and walked out of the room
Sasuke was beyond confused at this point
"Is he really planning to elope with hinata?!" he thought
"No no he's 32 or something and she's 18 is that possible?" he thought again