This is my first chapter of my first story that I've ever done on fanfiction, its realy short and it might need improving but I hope you enjoy. :)
Chapter one:
I stared out of the window watching the forest of trees blur across it as Pete's car drove on. Why did it have to be like this? My life would last forever now. To be honest I was looking forward to death, but I guess humans would love to be seventeen forever. But I can't go near a human can I? I'd probably kill in the first second, there scent would indulge me. The smell of blood. I tried to keep the thoughts out my mind, but they wouldn't disappear. I'm a vampire now, my heart had stopped beating, I didn't need to breath. I used to live in a small town near Florida, in an orphanage; my parents died a year after I was born. Most of my life had been full of school work, bullies and me getting into as much trouble as possible, even though I had avoided it as much as possible. But there's no point of me living before me becoming a vampire if it had to be turned around like this, I went missing last week on Sunday.
I never want to relive that night.
I was in the park when I felt an icy hand grasp my shoulder. I heard a whisper in my ear, and saw a man with white skin and sharp dazzling teeth. His face like sculpted marble, he looked at me with stinging emerald eyes, piercing into me.
"Hello" he murmured, his eyes fixed on my neck. I stood there, frozen.
"Are you meant to be anywhere?" he said ignoring my silence.
"Err, yeah" I stuttered, noticing the little distance between us.
"Ah, your parents?"
"Um, no" immediately regretting that I told the truth.
"Where then?" he said, tilting his head and inhaling the air.
"Err…" I mumbled taking a step back. He instantly grabbed my arm crushing it in his hand. I weakened at the pain, stumbling back on the tree behind me.
"Little…" He muttered angrily, forcing his fist into my shoulder.
Pain broke through and bolted up my neck. I screw my face up in pain. He left it there. Hot tears ran down my cheeks, stinging them. To piercing needles stabbed my neck. My blood drained out.
I woke up in the Forrest with a burning in my neck. My shoulder was numb; I was covered in blood and rain. Suddenly a sharp pain hit my neck, instantly replacing the burn. I grew through my body. Waking my every nerve. It punched down my arm, and surged through my waist. The pain charged round my body killing every part of me.