I have cool plot for it (co-done by my brother. He will be in this story posing as... my older brother).
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN STAR WARS. I WILL ONLY PUT THIS ONCE!!!! Though I wish I did.*thought of kidnapping someone enters mind, is placed in back for later use*
(Hey! I like these!! *****) ( OK, I'll stop now)
OK, here it is,hope you like it!! R&R!!
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Shadow
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Shadow sat in a corner where a normal passer by wouldn't notice him, his black cloak concealing him. He had been waiting there for hours, but he didn't care. In fact he enjoyed it. Listening for rumors, or information. Some called it spying, what he was doing, his talent. He rather liked being called hidden, unseen, a shadow.
His keen black eyes scourged the market for anything interesting. Suddenly, he saw two men standing by a vendor stall. One had brown hair, the other, blonde. They both wore cloaks, which was understandable for a cold day like this. Even though his humanoid species wasn't affected by cold, he'd be wearing one anyway. Along with his dark hair and eyes, his clothing helped him do his job better. Something felt odd about the men but no one else seemed to notice. As Shadow watched they walked causally to the left. As they did, there was a slight gust of wind and a shiny glint of something under the brown haired ones cloak. A lightsaber. Any normal person would have taken the flash as a blaster hilt, but Shadow knew better. His heart jumped to his throat. He couldn't wait to tell everyone about this.
Maybe his excitement alerted the jedi or maybe it just made him stand out more. Whatever the case, the blond haired one whispered something to the other. He nodded and they began slowly waking in his direction. Time to go. He smiled to himself and stood up. They walked faster. He looked over their shoulders as they advanced. Good, Marian was here, the waiting was over. He knew as they did he had no where to go, but he'd escape anyway. He leaned back in his niche, they we almost thirty meters away; he'd wait till it was ten. Ten meters came quickly. Already in the shadows, he blended in perfectly as he became one of them and scaled up the wall to the roof. There he reappeared and signaled to Marian to meet him at Master's Club. She nodded and drifted into the oblivious passers. He "shadowed" from roof to roof suddenly hoping they hadn't seen enough of him to track him down. Not knowing that even with his clever escape, he was still being followed.
Marian
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Marian watched with her green eyes as Shadow reappeared on the roof. He signaled to her. She nodded, knowing to meet at Masker's Club. As he turned to go one of the men that was after him threw something. As it clasped on to Shadow's cloak she knew what it was. A tracker. She had to get to Masker's Club first. The man with the blonde hair took something out of his pocket, looked at it, and started to go in the direction of Masker's Club. Suddenly the man with the brown hair looked at her. She cursed herself and ran. She had given herself away, watching so obviously.
It was beginning to go dark. She had planed to be back hours ago, but her mission had taken long than she had anticipated. Her shoulder length blonde hair wisped in her ear and her brown cloak flowed behind her as she ran. Speed was not her strong point. She'd never make it, unless... Of course! Marian grinned. Her smile widened as she turned to find no one after her. But what for and why did they want Shadow? She shook the thought off. She'd find out soon enough. With that Marian changed her coarse completely and ran down a dark and cold alley. A plan was already brewing in her mind.
Ballick
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The tracker had clasped on to the runner's cloak perfectly. He was fairly easy to track so far with only a few minor setbacks. Ballick hoped they had found the right humanoid. He fit the description. Tall with dark eyes and hair, wearing black cloak, and most importantly, known to disappear into the shadows. He was named Zather Doner.
Ballick had seen Zather's friend run off. He didn't care; it didn't matter. Just as long as they got the jewel. Hopefully, the sith didn't know where it was yet. If they did, whoever had it was in unspeakable danger. The jedi knew Zather was in possession if it at one time. Hopefully he still had it now. If they were lucky they might find the jewel, if they were luckier they might find the wielder alive. But if the sith found them first... Ballick shuddered he didn't want to think about it. The jedi followed the undeniable lead; the race had begun.
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I will take any good character ideas. They MUST include #1 name (please not super long) #2 job (need bounty hunters, sith, and 1 jedi. Also any other person that could fit in here somewhere).
PLEASE R&R !!!!!!
Thanks to the reveiws I've got *BIG Smile* I have now made the 1st three chapters 1 chapter. Tada!!This is how I felt before- "I KNOW I'm weird (and proud of it) but For crying out loud Reveiw!!" and this is how I feel now" :) " THANK YOU!!!
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN STAR WARS. I WILL ONLY PUT THIS ONCE!!!! Though I wish I did.*thought of kidnapping someone enters mind, is placed in back for later use*
(Hey! I like these!! *****) ( OK, I'll stop now)
OK, here it is,hope you like it!! R&R!!
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
Shadow
~*~
Shadow sat in a corner where a normal passer by wouldn't notice him, his black cloak concealing him. He had been waiting there for hours, but he didn't care. In fact he enjoyed it. Listening for rumors, or information. Some called it spying, what he was doing, his talent. He rather liked being called hidden, unseen, a shadow.
His keen black eyes scourged the market for anything interesting. Suddenly, he saw two men standing by a vendor stall. One had brown hair, the other, blonde. They both wore cloaks, which was understandable for a cold day like this. Even though his humanoid species wasn't affected by cold, he'd be wearing one anyway. Along with his dark hair and eyes, his clothing helped him do his job better. Something felt odd about the men but no one else seemed to notice. As Shadow watched they walked causally to the left. As they did, there was a slight gust of wind and a shiny glint of something under the brown haired ones cloak. A lightsaber. Any normal person would have taken the flash as a blaster hilt, but Shadow knew better. His heart jumped to his throat. He couldn't wait to tell everyone about this.
Maybe his excitement alerted the jedi or maybe it just made him stand out more. Whatever the case, the blond haired one whispered something to the other. He nodded and they began slowly waking in his direction. Time to go. He smiled to himself and stood up. They walked faster. He looked over their shoulders as they advanced. Good, Marian was here, the waiting was over. He knew as they did he had no where to go, but he'd escape anyway. He leaned back in his niche, they we almost thirty meters away; he'd wait till it was ten. Ten meters came quickly. Already in the shadows, he blended in perfectly as he became one of them and scaled up the wall to the roof. There he reappeared and signaled to Marian to meet him at Master's Club. She nodded and drifted into the oblivious passers. He "shadowed" from roof to roof suddenly hoping they hadn't seen enough of him to track him down. Not knowing that even with his clever escape, he was still being followed.
Marian
~*~
Marian watched with her green eyes as Shadow reappeared on the roof. He signaled to her. She nodded, knowing to meet at Masker's Club. As he turned to go one of the men that was after him threw something. As it clasped on to Shadow's cloak she knew what it was. A tracker. She had to get to Masker's Club first. The man with the blonde hair took something out of his pocket, looked at it, and started to go in the direction of Masker's Club. Suddenly the man with the brown hair looked at her. She cursed herself and ran. She had given herself away, watching so obviously.
It was beginning to go dark. She had planed to be back hours ago, but her mission had taken long than she had anticipated. Her shoulder length blonde hair wisped in her ear and her brown cloak flowed behind her as she ran. Speed was not her strong point. She'd never make it, unless... Of course! Marian grinned. Her smile widened as she turned to find no one after her. But what for and why did they want Shadow? She shook the thought off. She'd find out soon enough. With that Marian changed her coarse completely and ran down a dark and cold alley. A plan was already brewing in her mind.
Ballick
~*~
The tracker had clasped on to the runner's cloak perfectly. He was fairly easy to track so far with only a few minor setbacks. Ballick hoped they had found the right humanoid. He fit the description. Tall with dark eyes and hair, wearing black cloak, and most importantly, known to disappear into the shadows. He was named Zather Doner.
Ballick had seen Zather's friend run off. He didn't care; it didn't matter. Just as long as they got the jewel. Hopefully, the sith didn't know where it was yet. If they did, whoever had it was in unspeakable danger. The jedi knew Zather was in possession if it at one time. Hopefully he still had it now. If they were lucky they might find the jewel, if they were luckier they might find the wielder alive. But if the sith found them first... Ballick shuddered he didn't want to think about it. The jedi followed the undeniable lead; the race had begun.
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I will take any good character ideas. They MUST include #1 name (please not super long) #2 job (need bounty hunters, sith, and 1 jedi. Also any other person that could fit in here somewhere).
PLEASE R&R !!!!!!
Thanks to the reveiws I've got *BIG Smile* I have now made the 1st three chapters 1 chapter. Tada!!This is how I felt before- "I KNOW I'm weird (and proud of it) but For crying out loud Reveiw!!" and this is how I feel now" :) " THANK YOU!!!