so this is a really awesome story and im really excited about it!
background story time: this is an excert from the last chapter. i don't know the rest of the chapter and im not even really sure who this is talking about (although i have an idea and im sure you do to). im going to write this completely backwards, and then the verry last chapter will be the rest of the actuall last chapter, but the next to last chapter will be the "first" chapter. does this make sense to anyone? it will trust me, and its going to be awesome!!!! pease R&R. and if my spelling sucks, im sorry.
The End
The shot rang through the air and suddenly he was hyper aware of his surroundings. The other officers flooded in behind him, arms at the ready. He looked left and right to his team. The young girl they were trying to save was slumped against the far wall with her hand over her face. He stood there waiting for the bullet to hit, but it never did. He turned to his left and met his partner's eyes. Realization ripped through his brain, as terror poured over him, he was not the target.
She shuttered on at the sharp connection the bullet made with her body before falling to the ground in an almost graceful manner. He froze, every inch of him completely numb. His mind rushed toward her but his body was unable to move. The dark crimson began to spread out like a blooming flower, sprouting from with-in her chest.
Finding his legs again he rushed to her side. He placed his hands over the spreading red blossom in an attempt to stifle the bleeding, but to no avail, she had already lost so much blood. She was beginning to fade. She reached up and grasped at his shirt. Her breathing was ragid and shallow. "hold on" was all he could say.
She gasped out his name in a plea.
"I'm here, I'm always here, I will always be here" he said as tears began to blur his eyes.
"Please," she gasped, "don't leave me."
"I'll never leave you, you just need to work on not leaving me."
A small, humorless smile graced her lips. "You know I would never do that."
Her breath grew more and more ragged with each breath. Her strength was escaping her fast. She looked up into his eyes, and pulled him down to her. "I love you" is all she could say before her eyes closed and her head fell back on to the concrete. The sirens from the back up and medical team could be heard. He realized that he had no idea what had been going on around him, all he knew was her. he looked up to see someone approaching them "help is here, your going to have to move back."
so let me know what you think. i want to know if i sould really persue this like i want to. oh and what i have pland out so far, nothing is what it seams. just keep that in mind threw the entire story. show me your love! :)