hi guys im new riter an i want t tri n wriht a stroy of min. i hop u lik it and revew nicly plz!

also m frien omlet n presnt n hegehog hlped m makk desc (but thoses rnt twir rel nems don worrty)

Cheptr 1

once upin a tim, ther was a butiful shcat tat lived in tunderClan. That shecar hd the pweor t save the frost. sh was blesed by starclan but she dintd kno the med cats wer told a profecy bout her butt the didnt tll er. They thuoughtt she would taka teh poower to the head of her and be the vrry evil they feered. Byt she wuldnt so they wer stopid.

Tee she-at was nemed… aqupaw.

she was a stuninng booty with a shin blue cote with a turckoise ting. Er orbs wer a vivvivd porpoe, as brite as th nite sky. & on hr chest, sh woar a ginat pinc splotch that luked lik a hurt.

Aqpaw worked vrry hard as n prentice. Sh did lal her chures, allways compleetd trining, and did vry best. But she got bulld by bulls u see, shes the kitten off tiggerstar (nOT TEH EVIL 1) and lavendrpul, teh med cat. Oth pprentices jered at her for being a forbid luv chilled.

1 day, aquapawpaw was mindin er on busness, eatimngn a thrush, when sudenly1! blud paw and hsi enturage cme up.

Bloodpwa was teh must evile cat aquauapaw knew, and her bro. His redstined fangs reveled temselfes when he smerked.

ey fox-dum" he snearled and his red tail wit a black tail tip lased bend him like a snke. "Did u fill at unting again?" did uscare all prety away with ur fatty pas'"?

Behd im wer oakpaw, embrepaw, snowpaw. Emberpaw & snwowpaw grined visiciously. okpaw just frowned.

Aquapaw culd fell ters prick a her ees. She bliininkinknked tem way. o, she wuuld NoT let b/Luodpaw d tshi to her!

w"ell at lest im nut teh 1 wit betle brian, betetelte brian. the she at fealt fictory.

Blodopow flet defted on teh ooother paw 9GETIT). Es hurt was shertered frum bein called an incest. hes ers flitteneeed n he quick scmpampered way.

gud 1 auquauaupawpaw." okaypaw gtined at er. Whil teh oterh two caits stalk away

Achepaws heert swilled ta la coplimenta. Sh fell hr skinny grew hit nd sh blushed madly and oakpaw was cuhsh an mazing caat he was ets ctat. Aquapa knew. Ndd dtatsha wey she licked him. 'Tanks you okpaw'.

Sunenly, tigerstar called fo clan1 aquapaw look up at ur fatha with a smil. She lept over.

Id lik to make sum cats wars. aquapa oakpaq bludpaw, step" bludpaw was called last of course no one like him

Aqpawaupaw stud belly the blaze orangatang ledre, hed rised prodl she had no need to groom her fur befurpaw (gEt IT?!) cuz shes always boetiful.

Tiggerstar kept tlkaing. 'Do u all cept teh rooles and promis to protct te clan?"

Yes" aquapaw shooted. Seh culd here okpaw do teh sam. But bloodpaw didnt, he mouth words

Aquapaw uwld hav sid sumthin abut tigerstar kontinued.

Then i gve u ur wrarrior nems wit teh power of starclan and me and auquapaw will be known as aquheart for heart and buty! Okapaw ull be known as oaksorm for braveyr and courageness ! Boodpaw ur bloodtalon"

Boodtaln narrjwed is eees as tigstar didnt list is virtues. Not like he hadny haaaaaaaaaaaaaah

Aqqaheart on teh other paw (geT IT!?) bemed se grened at okastorm who stodo beside her. He pushed up against her with purs, bean friendly. "Yey we're warriors"

Sudenly bludtaln was climing hirock! He shuved tigerstar of the stone with a snarl

teh red toms toweered over te clan wathing orang leader splat on flor. He was ded.

woa clifanger

ok i rot a lto so il writ shortr so thre can b fast updties

i hop u enjoy, pls reveiw nice n shar if u like