This was my first story. It sucks, but whatever~
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It was a cool winter day. It was the very first week of January and the weather was getting warmer little by little. Because of this weather, three certain chipettes decide that a certain song would prepare people for warm weather coming up. At an auditorium in Los Angeles…
All: Girl, put your records on, tell me your favorite song
They pulled their hair from out their scrunches.
All: You go ahead, let your hair down
The familiar chipmunks stepped forward.
All: Sapphire and faded jeans, I hope you get your dreams,
They shook their heads. They were, of course, Brittany, Jeanette, and Eleanor.
All: Just go ahead, let your hair down.
Brittany stepped forward.
Brittany: Oh, you're gonna find yourself somewhere, somehow.
The audience applauded following the Chipettes performance. They took their last few bows and headed to leave.
Brittany, who was smiling and posing for pictures, was pulled off by her sisters. They headed to the limo. The limo would drop them off at a special spot where Dave would pick them up and bring them home.
"That was a job well done girls" Brittany said "We're coming closer and closer to getting a name for ourselves."
The Chipettes had been trying for a while now to be called something other than "the Chipmunks and Chipettes" or "those girl versions of Alvin and the chipmunks". They were steadily, however approaching their goal.
Because of the Chipettes small size, they were able to change back into their regular clothes in the limo. Ever since being adopted by Dave, they performed in the clothes that Ian had let them perform "Single Ladies" in. Also, Brittany demanded a changing room. While changing, Brittany noticed Jeanette combing her hair. Jeanette barely ever combed her hair if she was just staying home. Brittany grinned and walked over to her.
"Ooh, Jeanette, your hair looks fabulous, almost as fabulous as mine!" Brittany exclaimed, taking over the comb. "Do you think you-know-who will notice?" she asked.
Jeanette blushed. She knew Brittany was referring to the huge crush she had on Simon.
"Well, maybe. I don't know. He might, but that doesn't mean he likes me, which he probably doesn't anyway." Jeanette said in a quiet voice. Brittany put her paws on her hips for a second, and then continued combing.
"Why on Earth would he not like you? She asked. Eleanor looked over for an answer, too.
"Because I'm so clumsy, and I'm not exactly what you'd call pretty, Brittany" Jeanette answered.
Eleanor put her paw on Jeanette's shoulder. "Don't talk down on yourself, Jean, you are pretty, and who cares if you're clumsy. It makes you who you are." Jeanette smiled at Eleanor.
"Thanks Ellie. You too, Brit" she said. Brittany just finished with the combing and apparently decided that she was a beautician because she started on Eleanor's ponytails, too.
"If Simon likes what I did to Jeanette's hair, let's see what Theo thinks of yours, Ellie" Brittany said.
Eleanor giggled. "Okay, but Jeanette and I will have to do your hair for Alvin" Eleanor said, stressing Alvin's name.
Brittany wrinkled her nose at the thought of Eleanor and Jeanette doing her hair, but she was in a good mood and agreed. "But don't get the idea that I want Alvin to notice!" she argued. Eleanor and Jeanette rolled their eyes.
"Please, Brit. You've got just about the biggest crush on him I've ever seen." Eleanor argued. Jeanette nodded. "You're very much in common" she added.
Brittany wrinkled her nose. "Oh really? Well at least, I have a regular sized ego. Unlike Mr. Alvin Seville" she said fluffing her own hair.
Yet again, Eleanor and Jeanette rolled their eyes.
"Yeah, sure you do!" they said.
Meanwhile, at the Seville home, Dave was getting ready to pick up the Chipettes. That is if Alvin would stop bugging him.
"Dave, can I just play ball in the backyard, then" Alvin asked.
After being refused the kitchen, Dave's room, The Chipettes new room, the living room, and the bathroom, you'd think he'd decide to play a video game or something right? Well you aren't thinking of Alvin Seville.
"Alvin, can I please pick up the Chipettes? Fine go play ball, but use the small one." Dave said, putting on a sweater. "How am I supposed to get things done around here with you?"
Simon and Theodore joined Alvin. "Don't worry Dave; nothing will go wrong while you're gone." Simon reassured Dave.
"Thank you Simon, oh where are my keys?" He started looking for them. Simon and Theodore were about to help look for them, but Alvin dragged them away as if this game of ball were a matter of life and death,
"Come on guys" Alvin had pulled them into their room and got the big beach ball.
Simon stopped him as he was about to exit through the back doggie door Dave had set up for them. "Didn't Dave tell you specifically, not to use that ball" He asked with folded arms.
But Alvin was slick. "Not at all Simon. All Dave said was to use the small ball, he never said how small or even what small was" He said and hopped out through the slot. Theodore followed.
"Come on, Simon" he called.
Simon sighed, but went through the doggie door.
Alvin was kicking that ball around to Theodore and Simon who were in a triangle formation. He could only believe he was a soccer champ.
"Here, Theo!" He called kicking it to Theodore.
Theodore stopped it and kicked it to Simon, using full force on the ball that was much bigger than him.
"Here Simon" he called. Simon, who actually started enjoying the game, kicked it back to Alvin.
"Catch, dude!" he called. Alvin had jumped in the air and kicked it full force. Simon covered his eyes in fear if what it would hit. Luckily, it had only hit a tree. They went over to get it, when something, or someone, had pushed it back to them.
"Huh?" they wondered. Suddenly the person who had kicked it over to them appeared from under the tree, only it wasn't a human, clearly. It was a chipmunk. No, a chipette! And it wasn't just one. It was three! Three, fully clothed chipmunks were in their backyard, now slowly approaching them.
Alvin noticed the one in the front. She was wearing a magenta jacket with a tiny letter "m" stitched in the right hand corner were a zipper would go, if she had one, and a letter "y" directly on the opposite side. She had on a light pink shirt with a giant "A" on it and the same colored skirt. The skirt had the letters "L and M" sewn in it. She wore a belt an even lighter shade of pink. It had a huge "M" shaped buckle on it. Alvin also noticed her ponytail, similar to Brittany's, except it was at the bottom of her head, instead of the top. The only thing weird about her was that unlike the other two chipmunks, she was a pure white, no spots, no stripes, chipmunk. Alvin knew there was a special name for it, but was too shocked to think of it.
Simon noticed the tallest one. She had on a cerulean tank top that was ruffled at the shoulder. The top also had the letters "L and M" sewn in. She also wore an indigo skort, but the pants part was cerulean like her tank top. The skort had a tiny letter "J" sewn in at the bottom of the skirt. Her hair was similar to Jeanette's, except it was a tad bit longer at the sides and the ponytail on top was also slightly longer and went backwards as it should. She was pure black. Simon looked a little shocked like Alvin.
Theodore was the only one who looked remotely happy. Looking at the shortest one, he instantly noticed that she wasn't very chubby. In fact, she looked a tiny bit smaller than Eleanor. He also noticed that she was wearing light green shorts, not a skirt. Sewn into the left leg of the shorts was the letter "S". She also wore the same shade of green tank top with a green cobalt duel-flap tie (See Cream the Rabbit). On the tank top were sown in the letters "L and M". Her hair was just like Eleanor's, but instead of ponytails, she had plats (short thick braids). She was also pure black.
Simon and Theodore looked at their big brother, waiting for him to do something. He slowly walked over to the magenta wearing chipmunk, wondering if she could speak English.
"Well, well, well. Who do we have here?" Alvin smiled, shaking her paw, wondering if she spoke.
She could. "May" she answered, returning the shake. "I'm May" Alvin noticed that she had a Hispanic accent.
The cerulean wearing one walked over to Simon. She extended her paw for him to shake. "I'm June." She had a less sharp accent.
Simon slowly took her paw and shook it.
The one in green ran up to Theodore and shook both of his paws herself. "I'm September!" she announced, barely any accent.
"Hi, I'm Theodore." He said happily.
"Oh, we know. You're Alvin and the Chipmunks!" she said. "This is a huge honor!" That was all Alvin needed.
"Why don't we continue this conversation inside?" he suggested, feeling like a star. Simon pulled him back by his arm and whispered to him, "What! Are you crazy? We can't just let them in. We just met them!"
"Relax, it'll only be for a second" with that, he led all three of them in, Simon and Theodore, following.
The chipmunks looked around the house, but didn't touch anything, as if they were the children of a beggar in the house of the President.
"Wow! Such a nice house!" They muttered to each other.
"Isn't it?" Alvin asked as if it were his house.
May looked over at Alvin. "Uh, I know that this is like really sudden, but could we stay here for a while? We don't…we don't have a home." June and September nodded sadly.
"Sure" Alvin said which made Simon almost explode.
"Alvin, Dave would NEVER approve of this and…" he as cut off by Dave himself.
"Okay, guy I found my keys and-GAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!" he noticed the extra chipmunks. "WHO-WHAT-WHEN-WHY-HOW-ALVIN!
"Hey Dave" Alvin whispered. "So ya found your keys?"
"Alvin, who are THEY!" Dave demanded.
"We found them in the backyard and they needed a place to stay so…" he was cut off again.
"Alvin, NO! I got used to you guys, then you just spring the Chipettes on me, and now you meet three more and think I'll let them stay? This isn't a zoo Alvin!" Dave could've gone on longer but June interrupted him.
"Sir, we'll only need hospitality for a month, 31 days. That's it." She explained
"We'll clean up after ourselves and cook our own food, too" September added.
Just a month, Dave thought, Cooking and cleaning up after themselves. "And NO trouble?"
"Absolutely none" they promised. Dave gave in.
"Well, okay. But Alvin, NO MORE GUESTS, EVER. Got that?"
"Cross my heart Davey" Alvin replied. Dave walked towards the door. "Well okay then. I'm going to go and get the Chipettes. OH Brittany's gonna have a fit if I'm late" He hurriedly left.
THE CHIPETTES! In all of this commotion, the munks had completely forgotten about their crushes. (I know, weird huh?) What were they gonna think about this?
"This could totally ruin our chances with them. Good job Alvin." Simon said angrily.
"Don't sweat it Si-man. Nothing's gonna go wrong" Alvin said, trying to keep his cool, though obviously worried, too.
Brittany was that type of girl who always liked to be notified of things. How was she going to handle another female chipmunk in the house? Hopefully, Alvin thought, none of these girls are that bossy, attitude type or else Brittany would…He shuddered to think about it. Brittany ALWAYS had to be the boss. On the only bright side, what if Brittany was not mad, but jealous? That would mean that she liked Alvin, right? Alvin blushed, thinking about it. Brittany…liking him! But, there was still that other thought of her anger that made Alvin feel less cool and calm.
Simon was horrified. He met Jeanette not only a few weeks ago. He had a major crush on Jeanette, who he could barely talk to without blushing or looking away. Now, a few weeks later these new girls move in. What if Jeanette felt replaced by these new girls? He didn't want to hurt her. Worse, what if he started liking one of them? How would she take this?
Theodore was extremely happy. All he thought about were new friends. He thought he could be friends with September because she seemed to be the youngest. He and Eleanor could teach her all of the fun things they do every day and play games together and be friends.
Over all, three very different thoughts were now going through each chipmunk's head.
Will Brittany be mad?
Will Jeanette be sad?
Won't Eleanor be glad?
Well the first chapter is done, I'll update pretty soon. If you don't have an account, you may still review.
