this is my story of my RWBY own character I have been working on for a while I finally got it together and decide to see what you people think.
I do not own RWBY but my character Crim is my own ideas.
I will hopefully keep updating my stories but I might stop and need time to think of some ideas. so please bare with me.
Full Name: Crim Se Deng- Crim= crimson, se Deng = color red (in Thai)
Age: 16
Gender: male
Height: 6"3'
Weight: 180 lbs.
Physical appearance: wolf Faunus. Short Black hair, long hair over left side of face, mutton chops, one black colors eye, left red artificial eye. 3 claw scars over left side of face, 5 claw scars on torso. Decent buff. Sharp eyes.
Personality: defense others in need, paranoid, quick to adapt, prefers to stay hidden not center of attention,
Hobbies: tinkers,
Dislike: bullies, people who think their superior to everyone,
Weapons: Burning Claw- Katana sword\ rifle, magazine in handle, switch at thumb on handle, and 2 muzzles can switch between the long barrel for forward shooting and a short barrel that points backwards the blade is also built with condensed with dust, where the magazine would go he can put one of his final fangs that when inserted turns into a but for the rifle, part of the sharp side of the sword turns into a triangular scope so he can hold the blunt side, the blade can twist at a 180 degree angle at a flick of the thumb, knuckled hand guard, shoots his custom bullets,
Final Fangs- are dual tonto knifes with built in revolvers, knuckled hand guard, shoots his custom bullets,
Custom bombs- sometimes likes to tinker with dust crystals and makes bombs out of them,
Handedness: righty mostly
Semblance: controls his special bullets, controls/fire-summons fire, throws fire balls, fire resistant,
Fighting style: quick and accurate attacks, very adaptable, prefers to snipe target at a range, when unarmed (rarely) uses his semblance of fire,
Crim goes outside to feed the farm animals so he heads to the barn. When he enters the barn he hears a very deep and menacing growl so Crim instinctively grabs a nearby pitchfork from a hay pile and quietly tracks down the sound to the cow stalls. Right away he notices a large figure standing over one of the few cows they have it stands up and turns around to face him. Crim realizes it's a Beowolf and is struck with fear but then he notices the cow has a gouge in it and is alive somehow. Crim thinks he could save it if he is fast enough so he musters up all the courage he can to attack. The wolf howls and Crim yells while charging with the pitchfork the Beowolf cleanly cuts the forks off of the pitchfork so that Crim is left with a sharp stick and the forks are in the wall to the right of him. But that doesn't stop Crim he continues to charge and aim for the wolfs heart and thrusts with the pitchfork handle he makes contact its tough he thinks to himself. The wolf slashes at Crim he jumps back but not fast enough the wolf leaves deep claw marks on his stomach and chest Crim doesn't think about it with the adrenaline in him. The wolf starts examine the stick sticking out of its chest Crim realizes he either missed or it did not go deep enough to kill it. So while the wolf is distracted Crim gets up and sprints straight at the wolf. It notices Crim charging it swipes at Crim but much slower than before so before he gets hit he jumps to his right onto the wall with the fork grabs it and jumps off of the wall taking the forks with him and aims for the neck of the Beowolf with it. He stabs the wolf in the neck and lands on its chest throwing it backwards onto the ground and with all his weight forces the forks deeper into the throat of the monster. On the way down the wolf swings wildly and gouges Crime's left eye out. Crime's mother rushes in to see the last of the Beowolfs life slip by and rushes to her son to see if he is ok. He is gravely injured she notices he is clutching his eye and picks him up and rush to the cabin. She puts Crim into the truck then she goes into the cabin and grabs a first aid kit and writes a note to Crim's dad that they're going to downtown vale hospital and that Crim was injured in a Beowolf attack and that he killed it but be Careful for more. So she then rushes to the truck with the first aid kit and gets in and applies aid to Crim and tries to stop the bleeding. She starts up the truck and drives to Vale. On the way once she was able to get a signal she called ahead to the hospital to let them know they need help so the hospital sends out a medical airship to get Crim since it was at least over an hour drive at full speed to vale. In about a quarter of an hour the ship gets to the speeding truck the truck stops and the bullhead hovers over the truck. Side door opens and a squad of guards secure the area and watch for Grimm as a field medic in a retrieval-basket is lowered Crim's mom quickly gets him and brings him to the medic to receive urgent care. The medic tends to Crim while telling his mother to get into the truck and follow the guards will escort her with that said two guards on bikes launch from the ship and land they come back around to the truck two other guards get into the bikes and the other one get into the back of the truck and the last one offers to drive the truck she agrees and takes her rifle out of the truck cabin and get into the back the guards are surprised at first but continue to get in and drive off with a motor bike escort. Crime's mother warns the guards that they might get attacked since they made so much noise so they stay on guard as they speed down the road to Vale. Half an hour later Crim's mother is alerted by a low howling she warns the guard next to her and he warns is squad mates. Crim's mother hears the first Beowolf looks and aims there it is she aims for its heart and fires hit it. It died before it hit the ground and rolled into a tree. She quickly turns to the forward left since she heard another Beowolf getting close she spots it, its jumping at the motorcycle she fires and kills it and with enough force to send it flying back so it does not take out the bikers. The next thing they all notice is that there surrounded by Beowolfs keeping pace with them everyone starts shooting even the drivers with their hand guns but there's to many. One jumps onto the hood of the truck it swerves but straightens out she climbs over the cabin over to the hood the driver is shooting it but it won't budging he notices Crim's mom and stops she shoots it once in the head and tries to shove it off nothing she takes her rifle and wedge it between the wolf and the hood and uses it as a lever it works the body goes tubing off the driver gives her a thumbs up and she climbs back over she realizes that the other guard is gone he must have gotten ripped out it's too late for him all she can do is hope he died quickly and continue. They have been fighting many wolfs they never end. Crim's mother aims right shoots kills but at the same time she is pounced from the left she jams her gun sideways in its mouth so it can't bite her but it's stronger. It's getting closer but then she is blinded and loosens her hold and is almost bitten but then it's gone. Not even a second later she hears a loud echo it sounded like a high caliber gun it must be one of the sentries of vale she gets up to see a tall wall with an open gate with many solders securing a perimeter the truck and the motorcycles enter and she hears gun fire and howling as solders quickly but cautiously back into the wall as the gate shuts. Finally safe from creatures of grim right away she and the five surviving guards are checked for passports there all clear to go so they head for the hospital. They enter the hospital the guards say there good bye she says sorry for their loss they leave and check in she heads to the front desk and asks where Crim. Is the person at the front says he is in the royal wing getting surgery Crim's mother objects to that he should be here in the commoner wing the lady replies that has been transferred to the royal wing after he had been deemed stable but the mother asks why is he in surgery aging? The desk lady has no clue so the mother leaves to go to the royal wing and gets a call it's the father she ask him what's going on he tells her that he called in a favor someone owed him to get their son treatment she ask why they put him in surgery again he tells her that their son lost his left eye so he requested he gets an artificial eye to replace the dead one but she ask how are they going to afford this. This brought up the deal that he had made with the royal family to get treatment for their son he has to be a hunter again and go out on missions for the royal family to hunt creatures of grim so right now I need to go find some Ursas that are threating the wall. But why now she ask because the sooner the artificial limbs are attached the better the body can adapt to it better he replies. No I mean why do you have to go now she restates I have to go do this favor for them so they would take care of Crime. So if you do this one job he gets the best medical care? Yes, then why do you have to do other jobs? I have to so that they would give Crim the artificial eye fine but make sure you come back we need you, don't worry I've haven't said bye after all.