Sup Guys ;)
This is my FIRST EVER fanfiction, so I'm not a pro at it :P i recommend reading the whole list of allegiances, especially the SacredClan part. Chapter one is after the allegiances, so read that afterwards :) Here's the full summary: PrideClan, BlindClan, ScratchClan, BreezeClan, and PineClan are no ordinary Clans. They each have one leader, deputy, medicine cat, warriors, and elders. But the queens and their mates and kits are sent to SacredClan- a sixth Clan of secrets. No kit knows which Clan their mother and father came from. The leaders of the five Clans come to SacredClan when there is a litter of kits six moons, and they allow the kits to separately decide which Clan to train as an apprentice in and become a faithful warrior of.
When two sisters, Bumblekit and Wispkit, choose different Clans which are at war, their loyalties vary- they refuse to hurt each other, but know if they are to stay loyal to their Clans, they may someday have to. One sister receives a prophecy about herself and other cats- she must find out who these other cats are, at the cost of a broken relationship with her sister and betrayal to her own chosen Clan.
Its my first summary so it sucks :P Good luck reading :) Any criticism is welcome as long as it isn't rude, and you explain the mistakes in my chapter :)
DISCLAIMER- Erin Hunter owns the Warriors series, but I own these Clans. Mistybreeze belongs to PeaceLoveWolves, the first person I met on this website (her stories are good check them out!)
ALLEGIANCES-
PrideClan
Leader- WINGSTAR- reddish brown-and-white she-cat
Deputy- STONECLAW- dark gray tom
Medicine Cat- DEWLEAF- purple-gray she-cat
Warriors- COCOASPLASH- dark brown she-cat with white spot on muzzle
Apprentice, OCEANPAW
WINTERBREEZE- pale gray she-cat with white spots
CLIFFSIDE- brown tabby tom
LIONCLAW- golden tom
CORALPOOL- pale ginger-and-white she-cat
Apprentice, BRANCHPAW
MISTYBREEZE- white she-cat with light gray paws
SNAKESLITHER- orange tom with black tabby stripes
WASPFLIGHT- pale gray tabby tom
Apprentices- OCEANPAW- dark gray she-cat
BRANCHPAW- brown she-cat
BlindClan
Leader- JAYSTAR- gray tabby she-cat
Deputy- MOONSPLASH- silver-and-white tabby she-cat
Medicine Cat- WINDSTREAM- gray she-cat
Apprentice, HAILSTORM
Warriors- VIOLETFLOWER- dark gray she-cat
Apprentice, LIGHTNINGPAW
SHADOWCLAW- black she-cat
Apprentice, SOOTPAW
BLAZEFUR- ginger tom
WEEDTANGLE- brown tom
SALMONFLIGHT- silver tabby she-cat
TOADWHISKER- black-and-white tom
Apprentices- HAILSTORM- blue-gray tom
LIGHTNINGPAW- brown tabby she-cat
SOOTPAW- dark gray tom
BreezeClan
Leader- SMOKESTAR- black tom
Deputy- CEDARLEAF- gray tom
Medicine Cat- LITTLEFLAME- amber-red tabby she-cat
Warriors- BEETLELEG- brown-and-black tom
CLOUDWILLOW- silver she-cat
Apprentice, RIPPLEPAW
SMOKECLOUD- gray-black tom
Apprentice, SNAKEPAW
KINKSPOTS- pale brown she-cat with darker spots and fur that stands up
IVYSTONE- tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat
MOTHFALL- amber tabby she-cat
TOADNOSE- brown-black tom
RUNNINGMOUSE- light brown tom
Apprentices- RIPPLEPAW- gray tabby tom
SNAKEPAW- black tom
Elders- ROSETHORN- cream she-cat
THISTLEFUR- fluffy brown tom
PineClan
Leader- MISTSTAR- bluish gray-and-silver she-cat
Deputy-FURZETAIL- gray-and-white she-cat
Medicine Cat-FINCHFEATHER- tortoiseshell-and-cream she-cat
Apprentice, CLEARPAW
Warriors-WHISPERLEAF- pale gray tabby she-cat
LILACSTREAK- gray tabby she-cat
TROUTSTRIPE- gray tabby tom
LIGHTSPLASH- pale brown she-cat
CLAWPELT- brown tabby tom
HONEYBRIAR- pale gold tabby she-cat
BRACKENSTRIPE- golden-brown tabby ton
WINDWHISKER- white tom
Apprentices-CLEARPAW- white she-cat
Elders-BREEZEFUR- brown tom
ScratchClan
Leader-ONIONSTAR- gray-and-white tom
Deputy-WATERSPLASH- silver she-cat
Medicine Cat-SEDGESTRIPE- reddish brown tabby tom
Warriors-RIVERSCRATCH- gray tabby she-cat with silver stripes
ICESTORM- white she-cat
SPLINTERFOOT- brown-and-white tabby tom
PINECLAW- black tom
RATFANG- white tom
ROSEBLOSSOM- white she-cat with tortoiseshell spots
BROWNHEART- brown tom
BARKFOOT- brown tabby tom
BRAMBLEFLIGHT- brown-and-gold tom
ECLIPSEHEART- black-and-white she-cat
SacredClan
Medicine Cat-NETTLELEAF- brown tabby she-cat
Warriors(Fathers of Kits)-LEOSTORM- gray calico tom. Mate is Peridew
SUNSTORM- gold-and-ginger tom. Mate is Maplebreeze
SCARPELT- brown tabby tom with missing eye and many scars he was born with. Mate is Creekfrost
TIGERSTRIPE- orange-and-white tom with black stripes. Mate is Lilacflame
SMOKEWHISKER- gray-and-silver tabby tom. Mate is Hazelcloud
MOUSELEAP- gray and brown tom. Mate is Swallowfoot
RATWHISKER- black-and-white tom. Mate is Seaweedpelt
Queens-HAZELCLOUD- pale gray-and-white she-cat. Mate is Smokewhisker. Kits are Wispkit and Bumblekit, 6 moons old
MAPLEBREEZE- sandy-colored she-cat. Mate is Sunstorm. Kits are Cougarkit, Amberkit, and Leopardkit, 4 moons old
SWALLOWFOOT- gray she-cat. Mate is Mouseleap. Kits are Graykit and Oakkit, 2 and 1/2 moons old
PERIDEW- gray calico she-cat. Mate is Leostorm. Kits are Arieskit, Aquakit, and Emeraldkit, 1/2 moons old
CREEKFROST- blue-gray tabby she-cat. Mate is Scarpelt. Kit is Hawkkit, one day old
LILACFLAME- pale gray she-cat with darker spots. Mate is Tigerstripe. Kits will be born in 1/4 moons
SEAWEEDPELT- brown-and-white tabby she-cat. Mate is Ratehisker. Kits will be born in 1 moon
Kits-WISPKIT- pale silver she-kit with white stripes
BUMBLEKIT- gray she-kit with black stripes and white paws
COUGARKIT- pale gold tom
AMBERKIT- ginger she-kit
LEOPARDKIT- pale gold tom with darker spots
GRAYKIT- dark gray tom
OAKKIT- gold tom
ARIESKIT- dark brown tabby tom
AQUAKIT- light brown she-kit with gray-light blue eyes
EMERALDKIT- light gray she-kit with white paws and emerald green eyes
HAWKKIT- brown she-kit
CHAPTER ONE
Wispkit finished gulping down the tiny mouse she was given- icy leaf-bare wind scratched her fur. It was the beginning of another twelve-moon; these were what cats called a time period with twelve moons. Even twolegs used them to mark time. A new twelve-moon always started on the second moon of leaf-bare.
The night before, the exploding stars could be seen. Exploding stars were like yowls of triumph and celebration for two-legs- they usually did it on the eve of a new twelve-moon and in the middle of green-leaf. Wispkit had to admit she enjoyed the sight- the exploding stars were bright and packed with many colors. But she always shrunk into the frosty grass whenever the thunder-like booms exploded in her ears, sending chilling snakes slithering down her spine.
Yet Wispkit couldn't wait for the middle of green-leaf. Not only would the weather and prey be better, but there'd be bound to be more of the exploding stars flying in the sky. Wispkit's mother, Hazelcloud, notified that Bumblekit and she may become warriors around that time, as most cats earn their warrior names when they're about a twelve-moon old.
"Watch out!" Wispkit heard a squeal from her sister as Cougarkit and Leopardkit wrestled directly in front of her treading paws. "Great StarClan, be more considerate of other cats trying to get to the fresh-kill pile!"
"Bumblekit, be patient," Wispkit scolded her sister. "They're just playing. Plus, you already ate today."
"But I'm still hungry!" Bumblekit wailed impatiently. "My stomach will eat me up if I don't get another mouse soon!"
Wispkit sighed as she spotted Hazeldcoud trotting up to her two kits. "Remember to be on your best behavior in your new Clan, Bumblekit," their mother reminded calmly. "You're both leaving tomorrow."
Wispkit was struck with anxiety as she remembered the dreadful day- since she opened her eyes, Wispkit dreamed of becoming an apprentice and helping her Clan as a loyal warrior, but now that the day was so close, she regretted ever longing to become one. What if Bumblekit and she ended up in different Clans? Wispkit couldn't imagine even padding on her paws without her sister close by.
"Cheer up," Hazelcloud purred, licking Wispkit's forehead. "You may be with some old friends. And there will be plenty of Gatherings to attend. And borders to patrol-"
"-and battles to fight and a warrior code to follow!" Wispkit inturrupted her mother. "If we all are in different Clans I won't know what to do anymore!"
Amberkit looked up from sharing a squirrel with Leopardpaw, who was not settled down and nibbling eagerly. "Stop complaining," she snorted. "You should be glad to get away from your siblings." The ginger she-kit began licking her paws.
"Wait till you're six moons!" Bumblekit snarled. "You're only four, you should be thanking StarClan for that!"
Amberkit rolled her green eyes. "Why don't you both go to StarClan?"
"Amberkit!" Wispkit felt a rush of relief as Maplebreeze stomped ove towards her daughter. "That is a very rude thing to say! You may be four moons but you're acting as young as Hawkkit!" Her mother's words sent Amberkit's eyes glaring at the ground. "Apologize! Now!"
Amberkit looked up, her eyes enlightened with anger. "Sorry!" she spat venomously. She didn't sound as if she meant it at all.
The she-kits behavior often infuriated Wispkit to the point where she could slash her claws across the brat's ear. I don't see what her problem is, Wispkit sighed inwardly. How can her brothers and parents stand it?
Cougarkit was shrieking on the other side of camp, bringing Wispkit back from her thoughts. The pale gold tom was wrestling with Arieskit, and both kits were getting too competitive as they always did.
Wispkit spotted Arieskit's father rush over. "Come on, Arieskit," Leostorm meowed encouragingly. "Your sisters are trying to hunt beetles!"
"No!" Arieskit grunted as Cougarkit pinned him. "They need to go without me! I'm on an important mission!"
"And what is that?" Peridew emerged from the group of gossiping queens to watch her son fight Cougarkit.
"This kit"-Arieskit threw Cougarkit into a tree- "is a traitor to SacredClan!"
"Hey guys!" Emeraldkit squealed, jumping into the fight with her sister Aquakit.
Soon Leopardkit was clawing in the midst of the fake battle.
"You guys will be useless as warriors!" Amberkit teased ruthlessly. "Watch this." She dragged Emeraldkit out of the fight and flung her to the ground.
"Hey..." Emeraldkit was cut off as Amberkit placed a paw on her throat.
"No! Emeraldkit!" Aquakit whined as her sister was flipped over.
Amberkit dug her hind claws into the light gray she-kit's back and attempted to slice one of her opponent's ears. Before she could succeed, Bumblekit raced across the camp, sending dirt spraying, and flung Amberkit away.
"What are you doing?!" She let out a snarl. "You don't unsheathe your claws on a kit! Especially if its not a real battle!"
"Get out of this Clan already!" Amberkit screeched. "You're not my mother!"
"I am!" Wispkit held her breath as Maplebreeze went up to her kit. "Into the punishment den now!"
Amberkit walked to her destination, her paws dragging across the ground and her head low. Her father, Sunstorm, was glaring after her, looking a bit dissapointed and outraged at his daughter.
"You stay in there till sun high," he called after her demandingly, glancing at the dawn sky.
Amberkit was the only reason other than apprenticeship Wispkit wanted to leave SacredClan. I hope she gets under control soon, so she has a chance at being a loyal warrior. Although the kit was an irking burr in every cat's pelt, she, like all other cats, should be given a chance at becoming an excellent warrior for her Clan.
Stifling a sigh, Wispkit padded over to her sister, ears laid back against her head. "Can you believe her?" she muttered into Bumblekit's ear.
"She's an annoying furball alright," Bumblekit agreed, lashing her gray tail with black tabby stripes. "She doesn't deserve to be an apprentice."
Before Wispkit could scold her, Bumblekit skipped away. Wispkit stared at the punishment den, wondering exactly why Amberkit acted the way she did.
Then she glanced around at the other dens- the three sleeping dens, the medicine den where Nettleleaf slept and treated her patients, and the two playdens kits used when it was too cold outside. Branches criss-crossed the den and mossbolls scattered across the grassy ground.
I'll really miss kithood, Wispkit thought with a shudder across her pale gray spine. I wonder what the dens are like in a real Clan. Hopefully they're still warm and cozy like the sleeping dens.
Arieskit and his sisters tumbled over to Wispkit. "Catch beetles with us!" Arieskit begged. His siblings pelted Wispkit with other hopeful yips.
"It'll be fun! Show us a move!"
"Chase beetles into our claws!"
Wispkit flattened her ears, then sighed. "Alright, fine," she growled to the younger kits, wishing soon afterwards her voice would've been more calm.
But the kits took no notice in her aggression. "Let's go!" all three of the litter wailed, flailing their paws and making their way towards a patch of rocks and logs at the corner of SacredClan camp.
I should enjoy my time with them, Wispkit demanded to herself. Because, in four moons, they may be your enemies.