Love comes by suprise

by daneonpony

this story is about my character Devin he meets rainbow after she crashes into the woods and how they fall in love with each other. warning there might be clop later in this story.

1. Chapter 1

Love comes by surprise.

See you tommarow Keith! Ok Devin! After my friend Keith left I ran up to bed for some well deserved rest. BOOM! Ahh! I got up as quickly as possible and ran to look out the window. In the woods near my house came a big puff of smoke. Crap! I better see what's there. I got all my cloths on and ran out the door. It took me fifteen minits to get there but at a good cost in front of me was about a ten inch deep crater I took my first step slowly to make sure I don't fall in. as I reached the center of the crater I realize something. Is that rainbow dash from MLP? I go closer to inspect it more when I see faint breathing coming from her I look down and see a pool of blood. Shit need to get her to the house fast!

Well this was my first fanfic chapter a story but before I continue I need advise and critasism. Soooo R&R PLZ!