Hey everyone* Its been a while since this story was published... I was not quite sure if I should update this story simply because I felt like the story was not a good one as said in some of the reviews.
Any how I've been thinking of a way that I could improve this story so I simply re-wrote the first chapter and made the plot in modern Tokyo and not in Sengoku- jidai.
So please read Chapter one again ( for the people who read the old one, and please do because its totally different ) and review so I can improve the story* (_) Thank you**
*yes yes I don't own Inuyasha and co.*
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Dilemma
Chapter One-
ViRgO
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It was mid August. It's hot and sticky weather was one of the
things that Sango Kikuchi hatted the most about that time of the year.
But it was nothing that would bother her from going to work. She worked
in a day care center (A/N where I work over the summer ) where teenagers f
rom 15 to 19 year old worked as an assistance to take care of the small
children over the summer. Sango was assigned as as the helper of the 4 year
old class who were known as the most loudest and the most annoying class
that could be assigned to someone.
"Sango!"
She heard someone call her name from behind.
"Hey Miroku." Sango said to the tall, handsome guy that ran next to her.
Miroku Yamada was a guys she knew ever since she was in
7th grade. He was the helper for the sports period that all the students
had once a day. He was a really nice person and she really liked him.
"Run Sango, were ganna be late."
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Miroku and Sango where getting closer and closer every day. No
one would be surprised if they said they where going out. People where
doing a mental countdown for when the two would start going out. Probably
Sango was also waiting for Miroku to ask her out.
During the break time Sango was going over her memories
with Miroku. They only became really close for the past few months.
Sango had gone out with a few guys ( A/N why not? )before but she never
really loved them as much as she loved Miroku right now. She blushed
a bit when she remembered the day they went to the movies together.
She and Miroku were holding hands most of the time during the movie.
She was amazed how fast her heard was beating for a thing like
holding a guys hand which was nothing for a teenage girl. I mean
she has done way more then that with a guys but she never felt like
that about it.
"Sango,"
It was Miroku again.
"Whats up? You look really tired."
" Yea, kids, their a real pain."
" I know but their really sweet plus think how much your ganna
get by working here?"
" I just cant wait till I get my cash... im broke right now..."
"Same..."
They both sighed at the same time.
" Oh yea, my mom and I are ganna go to Osaka for a while to visit
my grandparents." Said Miroku.
" Oh really... When?"
" Tomorrow."
" Are you serious? When are you coming back?'
" In two weeks time, right before school starts again."
" I'm ganna miss you..." Sango said with a little blush.
" I'm ganna miss you too."
"Sango-sensei, Sango-sensai" (A/N sensei- teacher) came running a girl.
She grabbed on to Sango's hands pulling it.
"Sensei lets play."
"Sure" Said Sango with a little smile on her face.
The little girl ran back to her class Sango following her.
"Sango," Miroku called her back.
"Hm?"
" While I'm gone don't flirting with other guys ok." Miroku
said winking at Sango.
"Same with you Miroku."
To be continued...
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Sorry this chapter was kinda short... well yea the stories basically
the same as the one before.Thankyou for reading until the end of the
1st Chapter.
I would really appreciate it if you reviewed this fic.
So if you have some time please tell me what you
think about the story and how I can improve it.
I also write Inuyasha/Sango stories for people who are interested
so please go check them out too.
Once again Thank you for reading this chapter.
ViRgO*
Any how I've been thinking of a way that I could improve this story so I simply re-wrote the first chapter and made the plot in modern Tokyo and not in Sengoku- jidai.
So please read Chapter one again ( for the people who read the old one, and please do because its totally different ) and review so I can improve the story* (_) Thank you**
*yes yes I don't own Inuyasha and co.*
****************************************************
Dilemma
Chapter One-
ViRgO
********************************************************
It was mid August. It's hot and sticky weather was one of the
things that Sango Kikuchi hatted the most about that time of the year.
But it was nothing that would bother her from going to work. She worked
in a day care center (A/N where I work over the summer ) where teenagers f
rom 15 to 19 year old worked as an assistance to take care of the small
children over the summer. Sango was assigned as as the helper of the 4 year
old class who were known as the most loudest and the most annoying class
that could be assigned to someone.
"Sango!"
She heard someone call her name from behind.
"Hey Miroku." Sango said to the tall, handsome guy that ran next to her.
Miroku Yamada was a guys she knew ever since she was in
7th grade. He was the helper for the sports period that all the students
had once a day. He was a really nice person and she really liked him.
"Run Sango, were ganna be late."
******************************************************************
Miroku and Sango where getting closer and closer every day. No
one would be surprised if they said they where going out. People where
doing a mental countdown for when the two would start going out. Probably
Sango was also waiting for Miroku to ask her out.
During the break time Sango was going over her memories
with Miroku. They only became really close for the past few months.
Sango had gone out with a few guys ( A/N why not? )before but she never
really loved them as much as she loved Miroku right now. She blushed
a bit when she remembered the day they went to the movies together.
She and Miroku were holding hands most of the time during the movie.
She was amazed how fast her heard was beating for a thing like
holding a guys hand which was nothing for a teenage girl. I mean
she has done way more then that with a guys but she never felt like
that about it.
"Sango,"
It was Miroku again.
"Whats up? You look really tired."
" Yea, kids, their a real pain."
" I know but their really sweet plus think how much your ganna
get by working here?"
" I just cant wait till I get my cash... im broke right now..."
"Same..."
They both sighed at the same time.
" Oh yea, my mom and I are ganna go to Osaka for a while to visit
my grandparents." Said Miroku.
" Oh really... When?"
" Tomorrow."
" Are you serious? When are you coming back?'
" In two weeks time, right before school starts again."
" I'm ganna miss you..." Sango said with a little blush.
" I'm ganna miss you too."
"Sango-sensei, Sango-sensai" (A/N sensei- teacher) came running a girl.
She grabbed on to Sango's hands pulling it.
"Sensei lets play."
"Sure" Said Sango with a little smile on her face.
The little girl ran back to her class Sango following her.
"Sango," Miroku called her back.
"Hm?"
" While I'm gone don't flirting with other guys ok." Miroku
said winking at Sango.
"Same with you Miroku."
To be continued...
******************************************************************
Sorry this chapter was kinda short... well yea the stories basically
the same as the one before.Thankyou for reading until the end of the
1st Chapter.
I would really appreciate it if you reviewed this fic.
So if you have some time please tell me what you
think about the story and how I can improve it.
I also write Inuyasha/Sango stories for people who are interested
so please go check them out too.
Once again Thank you for reading this chapter.
ViRgO*