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"WHO USED MY COMPUTER!" Jo shouted from her room.
Jo had gotten home from school and just wanted to relax by watching some movies on her computer, she also had a big project coming up for her science class ,but that was the last thing on her mind.
Jo plopped down onto her bed excited to watch movies online when she found out in wasn't in its rightful place. She didn't think too much about it just thought she was too tired to move it last night. She booted it up and typed in her password to see her computer was totally REARRANGED! She nearly screamed out loud from all the anger that had just washed over her.
"Me and my friends used it to play games." Her little brother said
"WHY IS EVERYTHING REARRANGED!" Jo couldn't help but yell at her little brother because she hates when people touch, rearrange, or anything to her stuff she didn't do.
"Oh, me and my friends got bored so we just starting moving everything on your computer, hope it's no big deal." Her brother said it like he had already knew she was going to get mad over the situation.
Jo ran down the stairs , jumped over the kitchen counter and tackled her brother , she was just so mad she didn't see what she was doing and the unthinkable happened…Jo ended up breaking her brothers nose because she jumped a little too high and landed on his face.
Her brother was crying and screaming, but Jo didn't feel bad, or guilty she just thought to herself at least he knows not to touch my computer, and without a word she ran upstairs to her room and that night she slept better than ever.
Even if she did get her computer taken away.