Disclaimer: I apparently don't own anything related to Naruto according to my doctors even when I tell them that I won it from Kishimoto in a bet, oh well.
Warning: ahead there is yaoi (sasunaru style) and bad spelling and grammar if you haven't read my profile then I'll tell you English is my second langue sorry
Now let the story begin
(Sasuke POV)
I stare at my brother's slumped, unmoving form. It's finally over, he's dead. I look down at myself, I'm covered in blood my clothes are ripped and I have a couple of kunai sticking out of me most of them are impaling my stomach. I feel very dizzy from blood loss and I know I'm going to die.
"Sasuke." I hear Naruto calling me; I know I'm hearing things again. I take a step away from Itachi and I fall on my back and close my eyes.
"SASUKE!" I hear again but this time I hear running and a loud thud as someone drops beside me and starts shaking me.
"SASUKE, SASUKE WAKE UP, OPEN YOUR EYES, SASUKE!" they yell as they continuously shake me.
After a while they stop and lay their head down on my chest, "Please Sasuke, don't leave me." They whisper, I can't figure out who it is but their head is heavy on my chest, so heavy that I have to cough. They hear me and get off and I finally open my eyes.
I see the most beautiful and sad face I have ever seen in a long time. Blonde hair and tear filled cobalt eyes. Naruto. My Naruto.
"Sasuke" he whispers in that beautiful voice of his before he bursts into tears.
"Shhh" I say as I slowly reach up and brush his tear away. He closes his eyes and rubs his head into my hand; we stay like this for ages before I look at him.
"Naruto," I whisper, "Kiss me."
"I can't I have to get you help, you'll die." Naruto says starting to cry again.
"Shhh" I sooth, "You've help me as much as you can, all I want is for you to kiss me."
"Sasuke….." Naruto slowly leans in and kisses me gently on the forehead, then the cheeks and then the lips. He was being so gently so he would hurt me. I could feel silent tears falling on my face from Naruto as he kissed me. Then he pulled back and looked at me as tear fell silently down his face.
"Why did you leave Sasuke, you knew I would help you?" Naruto whispers breaking the silence.
"To protect you, Itachi was after you and I couldn't let him, I couldn't let him hurt you" I gasp
"Why? Why couldn't you let him Sasuke?"
"Because I love you, Naruto Uzumaki. Because you saved me from the darkness, because you gave me a new meaning to life." I start having a coughing fit.
"Sasuke, SASUKE DON'T TALK I'LL GET HELP JUST PLEASE DON'T DIE!" Naruto is crying even harder now.
"Naruto it's too late for me please don't cry – cough cough – just stay with me and take me back to the village – cough – with you and live after I'm gone, be the greatest ninja – cough – ever and I'll wait for you on the other side."
"Sasuke please don't leave I can't live without you."
"Naruto promise me that you will."
"But – "
"Promise me!" I say with as much force I can muster.
"I-I promise Sa-sasuke"
"Good." I breathe, "Kiss me again, please Naruto."
Naruto leans in and we kiss a last time.
"I love you…." I whisper as he pulls away for the last time.
(Nobody's POV)
Naruto pulls away from Sasuke's empty shell and cries over it for hours. Finally getting the courage to get up and carry Sasuke's body back to the village where they bury him and engrave his name on the stone right next to Obito Uchiha's name.
Many years pass and Naruto makes it to Hokage and a very old age, one night Naruto dies quietly in his bed. Many people wonder if he and Sasuke found each other after so many years, they all hope they did.
End note: Sorry for the terrible ending, be nice and review this is my first story on so I hope it's okay thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy my next story if I write one and I'll only write it if I get nice reviews - Fallyn
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