Hi everyone! This is my first ever fanfic so please don't hate me if I don't do to well! I hope I improve as I get used to other people then my close friends reading my work! Please enjoy!

Disclaimer: James Patterson owns Maximum Ride! Not me! Fan fiction, remember!

Jeb as the Voice

Angel in people's heads

Responding to Angel

Thoughts

Ages

Max, Fang, Iggy, Dylan: age 16

Nudge: age 11

Gazzy: age 10

Angel: age 9

Please enjoy! R&R pleeeease!

Just to let you know, the world has already been saved! Also if I get things wrong, don't blame me, I still haven't read Nevermore or Maximum Ride Forever! I have heard bits and pieces but this is Fan FICTION remember. FYI do not read if you think Dylan is cool and wish he got together with Max! Or if you like Maya and Fang's relationship! Or if you think Fang leaving is a good idea!

Chapter 1

POV-Max

"Ahh!" Angel screamed. Then someone else screamed, but this time in pain. Oh, wait, that was me! Not now! I practically screamed in my head, half hoping to get the Voices attention. Then everything went black.

POV-Fang

Max screamed and fell. I didn't want to but I left Max's side. We had stopped at a hotel on our way to Max's mom's house. The one place we always where save! This time we would be there to stay, maybe. Luck for us, the entire flock is getting really good at fighting the last few rouge M-Geeks.

POV-Angel

Thank you, Fang. He had just taken out the last one. Max is waking up! I thought he needed to know! But as always, his face is emotionless. We all followed him to check on Max.

POV-Max

We finally touched the front yard as we did Angel thought Talk to Fang and Jeb! As if on que Fang put his hand on my shoulder and Jeb walked out. Did I forget to mention Mom and Jeb got married, if so sorry! The next 10 minutes was a hug fest with Ella and the Flock. I also actually hugged Jeb. That surprised everyone! Thank you! Jeb popped in my head.

POV-Jeb (AN thought this would be cool! Tell me if you want more of Jeb or others. I am open to ideas!)

Wow, Max hugged me! I really hope this means she is starting to trust me! Then I heard an ear splitting scream!

Hope you enjoy! No more posting till I get 3-5 reviews!

~Maximum Everdeen