The Rose among Thorns!

Chapter 1-The rose!

A sleeping girl waited in the damp dark forest. She was waiting for her saviors, that she knew wouldn't come. They wouldn't make it on time and both she and them knew it. It was the end and she wasn't ready. She had decided that when they came for her, she would fight. Because, of course, her life depended on it.


Four bright black eyes watched as a young girl did her own laundry. She was only fourteen and she lived alone. The state government didn't know that or else she would be in foster care. Her parents were never reported as dead and no one knew she lived alone.

Well except for the four that were watching her now. She was short and tiny with long, light brown hair. The four watching knew that she hated her hair because of hair dresser. It was not only brown, it was a mix of red, blonde, dark, and light brown. She hated her hair dresser because she was all ways telling her that she wished she had hair like that.

Anyway the girls name was Chloe. She had been living alone for three years now. Ever since the night of her eleventh birthday. She was very mature and smart for her age, so her teachers would have ever guessed. They would've never guessed that her parents just up and walked out on her.

She was able to trick everyone into believing that she was happy and loved her parents very much. Al though she did worry about money and food, she was content. But unbeknownst to her, she really was being taken care of. By four gorgeous males. They were the ones that made sure she had enough money in her account and food on her table.

She also had a lot of friends. Being abandoned had not made her bitter. Actually it had the opposite effect on her. She opened up more and was friendly to everyone. When she left people were really going to miss her. Although her selflessness sometimes bordered on stupidity, she was very much loved.

Though they worked in secret Chloe did have an idea that someone was helping her. As she did the laundry she felt the sensation of being watched. By what or who she didn't know. She shook her head and went back to folding towels.

After she was done she placed them into the bathroom and headed towards her room. When she shut the door, put on pajamas, and fell asleep; it was time for the boys to do their job. Tomorrow night was Chloe's fifth teen birthday. That was the day the boys deemed they would take her.

Even though she was happy, the boys saw real hardship in her future. They decided long ago that she didn't deserve that. As a solution they were going to take her far away. They were going to give her the comfortable life she deserved. They were going to save her, before it was to late.

So they snuck in and grabbing a spare back pack they filled it with clothes. They knew she wouldn't miss them until later. They already had all the arrangements made with her school and neighbors. Everyone thought that this little girl was going to spend the rest of the year with her grandma. It would take sometime before they found out that she was missing and the house abandoned.

With that thought in mind the boys took her 'borrowed' things and headed for the woods that they had come from. None of them knew that Chloe had gotten a peek of one of them. She had herd noises and peeked open one eye. Just in time to catch a beautiful brown haired boy walk out of her room. She quickly shut her eyes, afraid of the god like boy and soon was asleep. The brown haired boy forgotten.

When she awoke the next morning she wouldn't remember him. She would be to upset that it was the day her parents had left her. Never had the little girl thought that someone would save her. She was sad on the inside and happy on the outside. How was she to know that her time to shine would soon be coming.


"You're coming with us" He told her. She vaguely remember him from somewhere. He was beautiful and had brown hair. The others were just as gorgeous as they picked up her things. While she struggled to grasp the situation. 'Run or scream'…


A/n- Well what do you think. It's different from twilight but she will met Edward and Bella later. Well this is my first Twilight fic so… Go easy on me. Please! Now review and tell me some names you think would be great for the four 'normal' boys. Please submit them before June 23. That way I can update! Now click the pretty blue button!- K.U. :P