This is a paper I'm writing for school and wanted to it put on here. Maybe you guys could critique me (in a non-brutal way) in what could be changed or just what you think:) This is my first fanfic, so I hope you enjoy! So far, it is the unnamed story for the obvious reason of I don't know what to name it yet. It shall have a name though! - ImagI0510

Almost forgot the *DISCLAIMER*: Keeping it simple, don't own anything.

The Unnamed Story

Chapter One

My name is Red X. Typical thief... No, I'm better. Actually, I'm the best. The only time an alarm goes off is when I want it to, just to see her. Who is "her" you ask. You'll find out.

It was 2:30, perfect time to start the fun. I didn't know what to hit until I came upon Jump Jewelry. Seriously? Who would name a jewelry store that? Oh well, thought I might as well check it out. It was actually a beautiful place. What is this I see? A diamond and sapphire necklace - I wonder how it would look on her? Let's trip the alarm and find out.

*BEEP BEEP BEEP* "Now, time to wait for the prize."

"Titans, go!" I hear the voice of a Boy Blunder, how annoying. If only the alarms would draw her, not the rest, but I'll take what I can get. Now to eliminate the competition.

Beast Boy transforms into a tiger and attacks. If only he knew the meaning of patience. I throw my famous red goo, and suddenly, "Nooooo! My hair! I hate you."

"Well, Grass Stain, I'll admit that I don't share much affection for you either"

Cyborg points his sonic cannon towards me, how typical. I teleport to behind him and give an X to shut down his system. Now, there's that alien princess. I'll admit, she's pretty, but not my type. I think I'd kill myself if I had to live with her everyday. I'm looking for the prize. I don't even give the princess a chance. I teleport right in front of her and punch her in the face. Maybe it'll knock some of that pride down, not that I can say anything about that. Now for the traffic light. Has he ever thought of a costume that blends in the night? He sticks out like Beast Boy would in a crowd of people.

"You won't get away with anything tonight." Robin growls. Now, if only I had twenty dollars every time I heard that. I'd be rich! Wait, I am rich. Actually my dad is."Tell me something I haven't heard, Boy Blunder."

He growled and went for a roundhouse kick and, of course, I blocked him. I took a left upper hook, and he blocked me. I teleported behind him and placed him in a choke hold and knocked him out. Cheap, I know, but my goal is the prize. I see her, and though expected, to my disappointment, her hood is up and cloak is over her. Why does she hide her beautiful features? I'm not sure why. Lately, her urge to slash me has become less. Is it possible that she loves me back? Maybe she only attacks me to satisfy the team. Her sarcasm and growls have lessened. Now, let's see how that necklace looks on her.

"Hello, my beautiful sunshine." Her hood falls, and she is blushing yet trying to glare. That's good news to me. "I found something I feel was made just for you."

Chapter two will be in the making tomorrow, with the help of my boyfriend! Best boyfriend ever^_^