Inspired by Petraverd's Narnia stuff… Go read those poems and such. Amazing writer. Just… go read the Narnian stuff. Before I go crazy-mode on you.
Rawr.
Written by moi, June 2007, after reading a few of Petraverd's Narnia poems and such.
Two...alliterations/references to a couple of things.
See if you can spot them.
A cold stone table
Atop a pile of rock;
A pair of young girls
Alarmed at what they've just seen.
So shocked are they,
So agonizing was the scene,
So hard do they cry,
Sleep comes as a welcome relief.
Little noises awake them,
Loud bangs soon follow;
Lion stands before them,
Larger than life itself.
Awed at his return,
Amazed that he's alive,
A pair of blue eyes
Alive when he approaches.
Never will he leave them,
Not ever completely;
No longer will Evil reign:
Narnia shall always be safe.
Started out kinda crappy, but I guess it turned out okay.
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