This is my first story and I would like for you to give me constructive criticism. I am only a teenager, so I really don't know much of writing, I only know the basics. Please enjoy and review.
Magic speaking
Flashbacks
Disclaimer: I do own nothing and all characters belong to J.K. Rowling.
{Harry Potter}
Magic had watched as Albus Dumbledore for a long time, she was never seen of course but she was always watching. Magic knew just how power hungry the man was to be on top again after the defeat of Gellert. She had watched as he turned a blind eye to the abuse of Tom Riddle that had made him into the one and only Lord Voldemort. She had watched as Albus gave a slap on the wrist to the Maduaders as they tortured young Severus Snape, which made him into a bitter man. When she heard about the prophecy of Harry Potter, she took action.
She couldn't bare to see another one of her children be neglected and ignored, no more will she just seat and watch as one of her children's life be shattered. She will not watch another second of her children being used but only to be thrown away after their job was done. No, this will end now! Albus Dumbledore will rue the day he ever turned away from his students.
{Harry Potter}
Magic watched as Albus Dumbledore and Minerva McGonagall talked over the supposed end of the first war. They were located at Privet Drive, Little Whinging. She was hiding behind a tree but she couldn't here them, so she cast a listening charm.
"Albus, do you believe this place will be okay for Potter?" She heard the voice of Minvera ask
"Of course my dear! The blood wards will protect him and so will Lily's love! He will be well treated and be loved, I promise Minvera." Albus said with his fake grandfather tone.
Magic heard the woman sigh. "If you say so Dumbledore but I don't not trust these muggles, I mean Petuina hated Lily for being a witch. Do you believe she could have changed after all these years?" She asked.
Magic scoffed at that, as if that was possible, she though. She had seen Lily and Petunia grow up and when Lily showed signs of being a witch, maybe it was jealously perhaps but Petunia started to hate her sister. The jealous sister had called her many horrible names but the one that stood out that stuck the most was 'freak.' Magic could still remember that day even after all these years.
{Flashback: Coreworth, England 1969}
"Come on Tuney, catch me if you can!" Lily Evans shrieked as Petunia ran after her, they were playing a game of tag at the playground. Far in the distance was Magic watching them with a gentle smile gracing her dark face. She loved when she saw siblings getting along, it always had seem to make her smile.
Magic watched with amusement as the two sisters played, giggling and laughing all the while. The woman never had the chance to have siblings and she was alone. That was one of the reasons why she had created witches and wizards, muggles, and magical creatures. In some weird way, these were her children and no matter how much bad things a few of them have done, she stilled loved them.
"Hey Tuney looked at what I found!" Magic was brought out of her thoughts when she heard Lily yell. She looked over to see the redheaded girl crouching on the ground, in her hands was a dead flower. Petunia looked at her sister with disgust when she had reached her and saw what was in her hands.
"Come on Lily put that down, it has germs on it." The older sister scoffed.
Lily just shook her head and looked at her sister with beautiful emerald eyes. "Isn't it sad that it died, Tuney? Poor thing probably didn't even had a chance." Lily said with a pouted lip. Petunia rolled her eyes and crossed her arms over her chest.
"Who cares about some stupid flower, it is not even alive." Petunia whined.
This made Lily glared. "Yes it is alive! If isn't then why did it die? Only living things can die." Lily said passionately.
Magic smiled at the younger sister, Lily was smart and she had liked that. She obviously had logic and reason but probably would want to seek justice for those who were wronged.
'Yes, she would make a wonderful Ravenclaw or Gryffindor.' She thought.
Petunia glared back at her sister. "It is not alive and you know it isn't Lily!" She yelled.
Lily suddenly jumped up and held the dead flower close to her chest. "It is alive Petunia, you are just too stubborn to know it is! Why can't you just say it is alive?" Lily asked as she stomped her foot.
Petunia then shoved her sister making her stagger backwards. "Because it isn't alive and how would you know if it is? You're just a stupid kid and you don't know anything!"
That comment made tears fill Lily's eyes however not from sadness but anger. "I hate you Tuney, you're so pig-headed and I hate you!" She screamed.
The older sister faced turned red and gave her sister another shove. "Shut up you stupid kid! I am not pig-headed, you are pig-headed!"
All the while during this fight the flower that was being held started to rise to its full height and regain its pure white color. Magic's golden eyes widened in shock but she was ecstatic, Lily Evans was a witch. Magic nearly shrieked with happiness at this revelation but kept quiet so the fighting sisters didn't know she was watching.
Petunia finally saw the flower and looked at Lily with shock. "L-lily l-look a-at t-the f-f-flower!" She stammered.
The younger sister looked down at her chest and gasped, the flower had been brought back to life and by her, of all people! Lily then smiled and looked up at her sister.
"Tuney look, I brought it back to life!" She said cheerily and tried to bring the flower in front of her sister but the older sister just stepped back.
Lily raised her an eyebrow. "Is something the matter Tuney? Why are you backing away from me?" She asked and tired to get closer but her sister kept stepping back until she hit something and fall on her bum. Lily ran over her to sister and tried to touch her but Petuina flinched away from her.
"Don't touch me!" She shrieked and tried to scoot away from her sister. Lily whimpered and looked at her sister with sad eyes.
"You are freak Lily! Look at what you did with the flower and I can't be related to someone like you!" Petunia snarled as she got to her feet.
Lily felt tears prick her eyes again and this time they fall, rolling down her cheeks. "Why, aren't we sisters?" She asked.
Petunia gave her sister a disgusted look before turning away from her. "My sister isn't a freak or a weirdo and you are a freak, so you aren't my sister anymore." She said and stomped away to go back home.
She had left Lily alone and didn't see her shocked face or hear the sob her sister started to do or maybe she did but didn't want to pay attention to her.
Lily fell on her knees and held the flower close to her chest. "I'm sorry Tuney! Please come back, I can change." She yelled after her.
Magic watched the whole scene and felt her magic swirl around her, pulsing with anger. She couldn't believe this, Lily's own sister had turned her back on and left her! How dare she treat her sister like that beacause she was different, she would never understood why her children treated each other like that.
{End of Flashback} The
Magic was brought out of her memories when she heard the roar of motorcycle and pocked her head out from her hiding place to see Rubeus Hagrid hoping off the bike with a small bundle in his huge arms. Magic assumed it was Harry Potter and smiled with glee.
"Yes, finally he has come!" She thought.
The 3 adults talked for a while before Hadrig gave the little baby to Albus Dumbledroe and he left. This now left Albus and Minvera, who were getting ready to leave.
"I hope you are right about this decision Albus." Minvera warned him and he just nodded. He walked up to the Dursleys door and placed the baby on the on the steps. He placed a note inside of the baby's basket and with that both he and Minvera apparted away.
Magic smirked and walked up to Dursleys, she crouched down and picked up little Harry. Magic smiled and played with his little tuff of black hair and saw the thin lighting bolt on his forehead.
"You are so cute little one." She cooned as she bounced him around. This woke up little Harry, who looked up at Magic with big green eyes, just like Lily's.
She smiled and wrapped her magic around him. "Would you like a song my sweet." She said softly. Harry just smiled back and rise his tiny fist. She grabbed it and kissed the fist, making him giggle. Magic laughed and hummed a song
Multiply humanity
Harmonize insanity
Shedding light of remedy
Pulling tides of clarity
Shattered glass in flower beds
Humanize inhumane ends
It's all the same for the dreamers
It's all the same
For us
Magic sung quietly, her voice soft and harmonious. She saw Harry's eyes began to slowly close his eyes.
Float on to the painted sky where dreams will be unified as I'm swept inside
Multiply humanity
Harmonize insanity
Shedding light of remedy
Pulling tides of clarity
Shattered glass in flower beds
Humanize inhumane ends
It's all the same for the dreamers
It's all the same
For us
Harry feel asleep by the second verse but Magic kept on singing as she walked away from the Dursleys house and into the woods of Little Whinging.
Float on to the painted sky where dreams will be unified as I'm swept inside...
Where butterflies
Utilize surrendering
When silence falls, to you it sings
Sterilize your mentality
Compromise your reality
Restful mind and peaceful eyes
When sound is gone, then you will find
It's all the same for the dreamers
It's all the same
For us
For us
She then apparted herself and Harry to Spinner End where Severus Snape currently lived and placed the child on the doorstep of the house. She looked through the windows to see him sitting in a chair, slouched and a bottle of fire whiskey in his hand. He was asleep.
Float on to the painted sky where dreams will be unified as I'm swept inside...
Hold on to the painted sky where we will be unified as I'm stand inside...
Where butterflies
Never die
We'll never die
Where butterflies
Magic smiled and knocked on the window, this made Severus startled out of sleep and he looked around to where the noise came from. She knocked again and this time he walked over to the window, Magic quickly left the window to hide in trees. Severus looked outside and saw nothing. He opened the front door and looked around to until he looked down to see a bay Harry. He gasped and picked up the baby and went inside the house.
Magic nodded with approval and left to go to Hogwarts, she still had an old coot to deal with.
A/N: Well part one is done and like I said this isn't my best work, so constructive criticism is taken with very well and I would like to here from you. I hope you enjoyed and please read and review.