My first Fullmetal story so please bare with me. And review of course. Yeah call me a pervert on some of this stuff but it would actually happen if you were Ed.
TASTING DEATH
PROLOGUE
Edward opened his eyes. His head was pounding hard; pain was streaking up his legs and chest. He saw a white ceiling. He felt something pushing in his left arm. He turned his head and saw his veins were swollen, and a tube was in his arm. He turned and looked at his automail arm. The metal was torn and twisted, three fingers were missing, and there was a black stain across the once polished metal. Blood. The metal was dirty and a few shreds of leaves were in the cracks and a piece of a stick was shoved between his remaining fore finger and thumb. He tried to lift his arm to pull it out but weakness exploded in his shoulder, he felt pain as the bones scrapped together. He moaned and then felt warmness in his pants like he'd wet himself. Dear God, what's happened to me? He thought.
Suddenly he developed an erection and moaned a little, feeling strain and his legs were twitching, his toes raising. His left arm was twitching and his fingers were curling, his face began to twitch and his chest began to flex, the muscle scrunching together and relaxing. His muscular system began twisting and his spine erected, he sat up and then fell.
"What the hell's going on?" He managed to shout.
Immediately, the door burst open and a female nurse and doctor burst in.
"Stabilize him!" the doctor said urgently, rushing to Ed's side.
The other nurse rushed to a control panel by his bed and turned a knob on it. Sudden shocks began running through every nerve in his body. He screamed loudly as it met his muscles and bone.
"It's okay, sweetie," the doctor said, taking his hand and squeezing it. "It's almost over."
He continued to scream and suddenly the shocks dulled and the nurse turned the knob back to its original position.
"There," She said comfortingly, and then looked up at the nurse. "You can let them in now, Darla."
The nurse went over to the door and opened it, Alphonse and Winry bursting in. Winry immediately through herself on to Edward's bare chest, tears bursting forth.
"Are you alright, brother?" Al asked, looking at him from the metal suit that was his body.
"What's happened to me?" Ed asked managing to lift his arm and lay it across Winry's shoulders.
"It's a long story." Al said, lying his hand on Ed's left shoulder. "And it's not pleasant."
"What's wrong with me?"
"We're not entirely sure in all truth, some kind of alchemy, something so dark, we think it might even be some kind of demon and it's definitely alive inside you."
"How can a demon be alchemy?" Edward asked, trying to pat Winry's back.
"We don't know but there's something living in you and it is, if not created, by alchemy."
That's the prologue, please review and let me know what you think.