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Naruto of the crimson rage
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A nine year old Naruto was laughing from his spot atop a torri gate he had just scared some kids with a cape and a fox mask he had got when the semester started now the year was almost over and Naruto was planning on taking the graduation test when he passed he would become a ninja of the village and be on his way to becoming the most respected ninja in the village the Hokage
"well I'd better get home" Naruto thought leaping down and started walking to his apartment Naruto was almost to the gate "come on big brother that loser Uzumaki is in here" one of the kids he had pranked said Naruto gulped 'time to hide' Naruto thought suppressing his fear of ghosts and hiding behind a grave Naruto looked to see a bunch of feet run by
"don't worry little brother when we find that pipsqueak I'll pound him into the dirt" "awesome big brother that'll teach the little loser can you belive he actually wants to be a ninja"
"heh no way a dunce like him would ever be a ninja at least not a living one" the brothers laughed and continued looking for Naruto
"Grrr" Naruto growled "those bastards they don't know me but I'll show them I'll show them all" Naruto said slamming his little fist into the ground at the last part red light shined from somewhere underground as Naruto fell into a hole when Naruto came to he was in what looked like an old tomb dust covered everything and cobwebs hung from the walls
Naruto looked to see lying atop a stone slab was a skeleton on it's left ring finger was a red ring and under it's right bony hand was a red lantern "gah I gotta get out of here this place is creepy"
"hm what an interesting little human you are" a voice called
"Whose there" "Don't be afraid little one I mean you no harm" Naruto turned to see a blood red ring "Your rage has awakened me with my help you will become a shinobi so powerful that all will know your name" Naruto instinctively held out his hand and the ring went onto his ring finger from the ground
"Say the oath Naruto Uzumaki and learn to use your rage"
"The power of the crimson red Can lead your soul away from dread And heal the deepest wounds of hate Let no one else decide your fate"
said Naruto from the ground a red lantern rose from the ground and into Narutos hand "And now let your training begin"
A week later Iruka looked at Naruto he had cut class for a week probably to train Iruka added as an afterthought he still wore orange shorts and a black t shirt with the Uzumaki swirl on it But in place of the orange vest he was now wearing a red vest and a strange logo on the back and a ring on his left hand with the same logo Iruka looked at his written test score it wasn't perfect but better than Iruka had expected
"All right Naruto now to pass the exam you have to perform a clone jutsu" "Can it be any kind of clone" asked Naruto "Because I have too much chakra to do a normal clone" "Sure as long as you can make three clones" Naruto then performed his signature hand sign "multi shadow clone jutsu" a huge explosion of smoke when the smoke cleared the room was filled with at least one hundred Narutos
"Nice job Naruto you passed from now on we're comrades" said Iruka before giving Naruto a headband "Thanks Iruka sensei can you still treat me to ramen" Iruka laughed "Sure thing Naruto sure thing"
The next morning Iruka was assembled in front of the full shinobi and civilian council along with various Jonins from his chair Sarutobi sat with his two former teammates flanked him "Well Iruka how did Naruto Kun do" asked Sarutobi
"Naruto had an average score on his written test and in the practical exam was able to create one hundred shadow clones I passed him and treated him to ramen"
"Umino how dare you pass that thing it is unworthy to be a shinobi" said Koharu "Any nine year old who can make a hundred clones with a B rank ninjutsu can be a ninja" said Shikaku Nara "Besides he already had his ninja id picture taken to revoke his license would be wrong" said Inoichi Yamanaka
"Why not everyone knows what he is" said one of the civilian council members "He is a boy not the nine tails" growled Tsume Inuzuka
"The small minded opinions of the civilians is not the problem right now what should be focused on what team Naruto Kun should be placed on" said Sarutobi "But what about the uchiha" said Koharu
Sarutobi looked at Koharu suspiciously he doubted Koharu wanted Itachi's brother to graduate early for any reason that wasn't for her own purposes
"Sasuke didn't take the exam so why are we even discussing this Naruto is the only one in my class who even attempted to take the exam and is the only one who passed so we are not discussing Sasuke" said Iruka
The shinobi council fought a losing battle not to laugh at the gob smacked expressions on the old bats face but soon realized they couldn't hold it back and laughed "How dare you shinobi laugh at our great elders" shouts Asuka Chang the leader of the civilian council "Pretty easily" said Choza Akimichi "they look like they swallowed a salmon whole"
"It's troublesome but Choza is right" Shikaku laughs "Where are going to put Naruto"
The next day Naruto walked into a room in the academy full of twelve year olds wearing their headbands "Look at him" one of the girls said "He's so cute" another one said before they surrounded him "Run Naruto Run!" Naruto heard in his head and that's what Naruto did hiding behind a kid in a red hoodie and black pants under the desk next to him was a blood hound puppy "I feel sorry for you kid" the kid said
"I'll never understand why girls like cute things so much" "I actually feel bad for Sasuke Teme" Naruto said "Oh god I'll have to wash my mouth with soap" Just then the instructor walked in "alright everyone in their seats and zip it"
The students were all in their seats "All right team one will be Gin Inuzuka Akemi Chang and Naruto Uzumaki your sensei will be Kizashi Haruno" Naruto zoned out while the rest of the teams were announced
Once the other teams cleared out for lunch besides Gin his dog Gao and a girl wearing a red tank top black shinobi pants and ninja sandals with a katana strapped to her back she had brown hair that went to the middle of her neck she wore her head band around her forehead like Naruto and Gin She walked over to them
"Hi my names Akemi but you probably already knew that" "The names Naruto" "The name is Gin Inuzuka and this is my partner Gao" Gao barked from his place under the desk
"So since we're going to be teammates I say we learn about each others skills so we can work together as a team" said Akemi "Yeah that makes sense I'll start my name id Gin Inuzuka I'm from the Inuzuka clan my strengths are coordinated attacks with my partner Gao and genjutsu I like meat playing with my partner and my clan I don't like vegetables cats or people who don't take being a shinobi seriously my goal is to one day be a Jonin like my old man"
"Okay I'll go next my name is Naruto Uzumaki I'm an early graduate my talents are ninjutsu and my ring" "Your ring" asked Gin "I found a week before I took the exam it lets me challenge my rage and turn it into a weapon the problem is it has to be recharged with a battery I keep in my apartment I like ramen my sensei Iruka and training I don't like how long it takes to make ramen the last Uchiha Sasuke Teme and a good chunk of the villagers in this village my dream is to be Hokage and gain everyone's respect"
"Well I guess it's my turn my name is Akemi Chang my family was once from the land of mushrooms but immigrated here during the third great ninja war my talents are taijutsu and samurai style sword techniques I like my family and training I don't like fan girls or the elders on the council and my goal is like Narutos to be the first female Hokage"
"Then I guess we're rivals Akemi Chan" "well don't be sad when you lose Naruto Kun"
"I won't lose i'm awesome" Gin rolled his eyes and Akemi giggled before petting him on the head
Just then a man on the instructors desk wearing the usual Jonin uniform the odd thing about him was his hair it was a dark pink and shaped like a lotus blossom "Congratulations" "On what"
"Well you passed I was going to have you do the test the other genins have to do but then I said Nah if you three can talk openly with each other than the test is pointless" "So does that mean" asked Naruto "Yep you are all shinobi of Konoha meet me at training ground 44 for training at noon" "Hai Kizashi sensei"
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