Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha

Gone a Bit Too Far

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"What's that?" Nanoha asked innocently. "I didn't hear you, Fate-chan."

"Na.... Na..." Fate tried to say. "Na-noha..."

"Now now, that's not what you're supposed to say, Fate-slave," Nanoha told her sternly, yanking on the other girl's leash. "Isn't that right, Raging Heart?"

"Call her, My Master," the staff chirped happily.

"M.. my master..." Fate breathed with some difficulty.

"She didn't sound too sincere," the master remarked sadly. "I think she needs to be punished."

"It's so," Raging Heart agreed.

Fate cried out, partly in pain, and partly in something else, as multiple Divine Shooter orbs hit her body. She collapsed to all fours, quivering and panting.

"I'm sorry, my master," Fate told her, tears in her eyes. "I'll be good, I promise. Anything you want!"

Nanoha smiled, tenderly petting the girls head. "Now that's more like it. Perhaps you deserve a reward. What do you want?"

"I-I want..." Fate tried. "St... Sta..."

"Hmm? What's that, Fate-slave?"

"Let's shoot it," Raging Heart offered. "Starlight Breaker."

Nanoha raised an eyebrow. "Oh? Is that what you want, Fate-slave?"

The other girl's eyes went wide, and she swallowed slowly, but then nodded hesitantly.

Nanoha tenderly traced her staff down Fate's backside, taking aim as soft pink light began to gather. Fate's legs began to shake in anticipation.

"Knockout by Breaker," Raging Heart informed her. "Right before that, orgasm."

"Starlight..." Nanoha began.

Just then, the door flew open. "Nanoha, are you okay? I sensed the barrier in your room as I came in and-"

Yuuno paused, taking note of the positions of the two girls, the high heel shoes, the black leather that didn't leave much to the imagination, Nanoha aiming her staff at Fate, and did the only thing he could possibly do.

He collapsed backward as his nose produced a long stream of blood.

Nanoha sighed and canceled her attack. "Raging Heart, release Dominatrix Mode Barrier Jacket."

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Author's notes:

Too much befriending can lead to unexpected outcomes. This author does not recommend the use of magical implements in unhealthy ways.

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Bonus Ending:

"And so sometimes we like to spice things up," Nanoha explained, the two girls now in bathrobes and sitting on the couch.

A trembling Yuuno looked at both girls, their faces red, but Nanoha not quite as embarrassed as Fate. This was all too much, he thought, as he picked up his cup of tea and took a sip to calm his nerves.

That's when a communication window opened with Hayate's face. "Nanoha? Fate? Signum and Shamal will be over tonight, so I was asking if I upload your special Barrier Jacket modifications to Schwertkreuz."

The two girls managed to duck as Yuuno sprayed tea.