Hey there I am trying my hand at poetry for spirited away, tell me what you think

Hey there I am trying my hand at poetry for spirited away, tell me what you think. Flames are welcomes as is criticism.

Wondering

I sit here and wonder

If you remember

All the times we shared together.

The friends we made,

Good and bad, all seem

Like memories to me and

I feel sad because I miss you so.

You've touched my heart and

Lingered there. I keep wishing

We'll meet again because, I need

You to make me feel like I'm home

To stay. When I left you a little

Piece of me died inside. So I sit

Here under starry skies wondering when you'll

Take me home. Where are you now my

Beautiful white dragon, with emerald eyes that

Shine. I sit here wishing, wishing that one day

You will be mine.

Review please. Oh I am almost done with chapter 5 of my zetsu's rose story. Stay tuned.