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It was a dark rainy day Hiei, was sitting alone on a park bench making his fire appear and disappear in his hand. After a while he closed his hand causing the fire to vanish, and he got up and started to slowly walk away.
"Whats wrong?" A voice from behind him caused him to stop. Hiei turned round to see a group of four kids following him.
"What?" He asked softly, "Aren't you going to still help protect the city, and kids?" One of them asked as they stepped forward.
"Why? I have nothing left to fight for." Hiei answered as he turned and continued walking. The kids didn't follow, they just as they watched as Hiei walked out of the park. After exchanging glances for a while, they ran after him.
"Wait! What are you talking about, there is plenty to fight for." A kid said as he ran over to Hiei, "Like what." Hiei asked as he turned around. "Like. Umm." He turned to his friends for help. They just shrugged and looked around. "Like, like.Uh. your friends and family, and, um. Your friends and family!" He smiled joyfully at Hiei just to see him turn away.
"I have no friends or family." Hiei replied as he continued walking. "What happened to them?" The boy asked eager to know. Hiei sighed.
"Come with me." He said as he waved the boy and his friends to follow. The boy looked back at his friends and then at Hiei walking away and ran after him. His friends followed.
"Where are we going?" The little boy asked, "You'll see." Hiei answered. "Why do adults always have to be so complicated?" A boy whispered to a girl walking next to him. The girl shrugged with an 'I don't know' as they kept walking. Hiei herd this and laughed slightly as he continued walking.
After about five minutes of walking, the group entered the town cemetery. "Why are we here?" One of the kids asked. "You wanted to know what happened to my friends and family." Hiei answered, "So I am going to show you."
The friends exchanged looks a they reluctantly followed Hiei into the cemetery. Soon enough they stopped in front of a long row of tombstones.
"These are my friends and family." Hiei said as he pointed to the rows of tombstones.
"We're sorry. We didn't know that they. um. well.died." A girl said.
"Its fine." Hiei said.
"So how did they."
"There was a war." Hiei answered. "Well what happened?" One of the kids asked eagerly. Hiei was silent before he answered, "Well you guys know how there was a terrible war not to long ago, right?" They all nodded in unison.
"When my friends and I were about fourteen, the war started." Hiei said. "How long ago was that?" One of the kids asked. Hiei sat down on the wet grass as it continued to rain, "It was thirteen years ago." Hiei answered. "So then you are." The kid counted on his fingers, "Twenty-seven." Hiei smiled from his place on the grass, "Yes, I am."
"So what happened?" A boy asked as he and his friends sat down. "Well, since our job was to protect this planet, we had to fight to keep it safe." Hiei answered. "Was it hard?" They asked, "Very. We barley won, I was the only one who survived. And I barely made it with my injuries. All of my friends and family died from injuries in the hospital or on the battlefield." Hiei said.
What do you think? Should I do flashbacks? Please review!
It was a dark rainy day Hiei, was sitting alone on a park bench making his fire appear and disappear in his hand. After a while he closed his hand causing the fire to vanish, and he got up and started to slowly walk away.
"Whats wrong?" A voice from behind him caused him to stop. Hiei turned round to see a group of four kids following him.
"What?" He asked softly, "Aren't you going to still help protect the city, and kids?" One of them asked as they stepped forward.
"Why? I have nothing left to fight for." Hiei answered as he turned and continued walking. The kids didn't follow, they just as they watched as Hiei walked out of the park. After exchanging glances for a while, they ran after him.
"Wait! What are you talking about, there is plenty to fight for." A kid said as he ran over to Hiei, "Like what." Hiei asked as he turned around. "Like. Umm." He turned to his friends for help. They just shrugged and looked around. "Like, like.Uh. your friends and family, and, um. Your friends and family!" He smiled joyfully at Hiei just to see him turn away.
"I have no friends or family." Hiei replied as he continued walking. "What happened to them?" The boy asked eager to know. Hiei sighed.
"Come with me." He said as he waved the boy and his friends to follow. The boy looked back at his friends and then at Hiei walking away and ran after him. His friends followed.
"Where are we going?" The little boy asked, "You'll see." Hiei answered. "Why do adults always have to be so complicated?" A boy whispered to a girl walking next to him. The girl shrugged with an 'I don't know' as they kept walking. Hiei herd this and laughed slightly as he continued walking.
After about five minutes of walking, the group entered the town cemetery. "Why are we here?" One of the kids asked. "You wanted to know what happened to my friends and family." Hiei answered, "So I am going to show you."
The friends exchanged looks a they reluctantly followed Hiei into the cemetery. Soon enough they stopped in front of a long row of tombstones.
"These are my friends and family." Hiei said as he pointed to the rows of tombstones.
"We're sorry. We didn't know that they. um. well.died." A girl said.
"Its fine." Hiei said.
"So how did they."
"There was a war." Hiei answered. "Well what happened?" One of the kids asked eagerly. Hiei was silent before he answered, "Well you guys know how there was a terrible war not to long ago, right?" They all nodded in unison.
"When my friends and I were about fourteen, the war started." Hiei said. "How long ago was that?" One of the kids asked. Hiei sat down on the wet grass as it continued to rain, "It was thirteen years ago." Hiei answered. "So then you are." The kid counted on his fingers, "Twenty-seven." Hiei smiled from his place on the grass, "Yes, I am."
"So what happened?" A boy asked as he and his friends sat down. "Well, since our job was to protect this planet, we had to fight to keep it safe." Hiei answered. "Was it hard?" They asked, "Very. We barley won, I was the only one who survived. And I barely made it with my injuries. All of my friends and family died from injuries in the hospital or on the battlefield." Hiei said.
What do you think? Should I do flashbacks? Please review!