This story takes place in chapter 10 near the end. I thought there was so much potential, plus the whole ninja returning to interrupt the love scene could have been avoided. I love this series, but they move too slow so I thought I'd spice things up! Here's an alternative ending, hope you enjoy! KatouxHayaka forever!~
As they approached her room, she gently grabbed and tugged the back of his robe near the neckline. "Katou, are you going back to the boys room?" Asked Hayaka. Of course, her words were misinterpreted. She was merely asking out of curiosity; her innocent mind would never think of such intentions.
The boys though, did.
"What?!" Katou said mouth open, with a look of shock.
The other boys having heard this squealed from the new exciting buildup. "The real meaning is stay in my room! Ah! It's an invitation!" They ran and skipped off in glee altogether, leaving Katou and Hayaka in front of their room.
It happened so fast that Hayaka was confused as to why they left and what this "invitation" was. Worried, she asked, "Did I say something wrong?"
Katou sighed, as he saw that in a matter of seconds they all disappeared, "It's not a matter of whether it's right or wrong. It's just the careless way you phrased it that can be very easily misunderstood."
Hayaka tried to understand this. What could be misunderstood about her asking? Again, her innocent mind wouldn't allow that option to be a possibility. Therefore, never reaching the answer. As she tried to think deeper, Katou took the hand that was resting on his left arm.
"And there's a problem with you putting your hand there," he said, adding a little bit too much pressure in its hold to make it comfortable. "You are a woman," he said sternly, trying to force this fact into her mind. As she faced him, he took the other hand as well and walked forward, forcing her to walk backwards into her room. "The way you do that to me," he turned and had her against the wall, "will stir up," his face was an inch from hers. He let go of her hands and softly cupped her face between both his hands. Katou restricted himself from kissing her, despite how much he wanted to. Instead, he settled to have his forehead against hers as he said, "my desires."
Hayaka was blushing a deep red; Katou was so close to her. Her mind was going blank and she was hyperventilating. "D-D-Desires?"
Katou sighed out of frustration. She still wasn't getting it. He'd have to take it one step further. He already knew that he had already lost self-control; he knew that Hayaka was very uncomfortable but goddammit, he needed to get it through her dense head once and for all. He leaned towards her left ear as his right hand went to hold her neck and the other went around her waist. "Quickly understand," he whispered as she nearly squealed," that I am a man."
Hayaka had never felt this atmosphere before; it was so intense. Katou's breath was tickling her neck, and his warmth was radiating from his robe. It was so hot, she felt heavy. It was a good thing that his arm was around her waist; she felt she might fall.
"I want to touch you," Katou continued. He tightened his hold on her, so that she was right up against him. "I want to say sweet things to you." Hayaka couldn't believe what was happening. Her brain couldn't comprehend it, but that didn't mean she didn't like it. Instead, she was making small sounds that she had never made before. Her hands travelled to Katou's back, one around his neck urging him on. He moved from her ear to look into her eyes. "I want to kiss you."
In regular cases, she would've blushed incredulously and would have run away, but this time was different. Katou came closer, so that his lips hovered just above hers. He was making sure that she wouldn't run away, he wanted to make sure that he wouldn't scare her when he did it. Hayaka's chest was rising and falling, and she didn't want to escape. No, she wanted to stay…she didn't know why. All she could look at were those lips. It was aching her that they were so close; he was teasing her without knowing it. She didn't know what overcame her. Maybe it was all that hot pressure in the atmosphere, maybe it was the quivering of her knees and maybe it was the way that Katou made her feel, the way he looked at her. It didn't matter, because the hand around his neck went to the back of his head and pushed, so that her lips could grab his.
Katou was surprised at her initiative, and backed away a little from the shock. She followed though, not letting go. Realizing this, Katou filled with joy. He pushed harder, and shaped his lips to hers. Feeling her lips slipping, he grabbed for them again and her arms wrapped around his neck. Despite the ache for his lips being gone, it was replaced my something new she wanted.
Despite their bodies being right against each other, they didn't feel close enough. Katou's hand on Hayaka's neck went down to bring her leg up around his hips. He took a step closer, and wrapped the other as well, so that the wall was their leverage. Hayaka felt something hot lick her bottom lip and allowed its entrance. She thought her heart would burst from the amount of beats it was going. She had never felt this way before, she had never been touched this way and she had never wanted Katou this much before.
As Hayaka closed her eyes for each kiss, Katou would slightly open his, savoring each moment. He loved her expression, he loved what he was doing to her, and she to him. She needed a breather, and so he went to her neck and her fingers went through his hair. Her skin was so soft, and as he kissed her collarbone, he noticed the looseness of her robe. She hadn't tied it properly, what a surprise. He thought about fixing it but then he saw from the slackness, her chest. That of a man's desire overran his motherly instincts. With a quick pull of the ribbon, her robe came undone and slacked off her shoulders revealing her bare torso, her naked legs and the white underwear she wore. Quickly embarrassed, Hayaka tried to cover herself but Katou's stopped her hands.
"Don't," he gasped, kissing her again. Hayaka turned her face away and Katou was confused. Had he taken it too far? "What's wrong?"
How could she admit it? Everything, everything was wrong. What she was doing was wrong, how she was feeling was wrong, what she was thinking was wrong, and what she wanted…"It's not fair," she mumbled.
Katou tried to decipher what she meant by that. She was looking away, blushing but made no attempt of leaving. When Hayaka realized he wasn't getting it, she looked down at his robe. His eyes followed and while blushing he gave that smile and chuckle of his that made Hayaka's heart flutter to the heavens. "Got it."
Pleased, they began to kiss again. As they did, Katou lifted her from the wall and began to carry her to the futon. Along the way, Hayaka's robe completely slipped off and the thud of it hitting the ground made her nervous. Katou gently set her down underneath him and breaking from the kiss he undid his robe, throwing it off to the side. Hayaka gazed at his nakedness. She had seen him like this before at the beach, but he never wore such a face like that before. He was handsome, well toned, panting, on top of her and she felt her underwear get wet.
As Katou leaned in again putting his weight on her, he felt her wetness. Hayaka felt something hard nudge between her thighs and she yelped. Were they going to…? Just as she thought this, she saw Katou look distressed.
"Hayaka…" he said softly, with eyebrows furrowed and looking concerned. His dark eyes pierced and he gulped. He was asking. Oh god, what should she do? She was overwhelmed with the turn of events and she was at her limit. Her face couldn't get any redder, she couldn't feel any hotter, and her heart would combust if it went faster, the adrenaline rushed through her and she never wanted anything more than Katou. Her hand gently went from his neck to his face, trying to soothe him.
"I love you, Katou," she said. It felt like a weight being lifted off her chest that she never knew was there before. She breathed a sigh of relief.
Katou smiled and kissed her lovingly; Hayaka felt like she flew. "I love you more, Hayaka." In his mind, he promised himself that he would marry her. This, he definitely would do.
She giggled and their lips and tongues met again. It was so much more passionate, much more relaxed. Katou moved lower, lower and Hayaka moaned as he fondled her breasts. He licked the pink mounds, and her hands curled in his hair. They then moved down to his shoulders, his chest. He came back up, and his fingers went up her smooth legs, and then to the inside of her things. Hayaka moaned. Katou cupped her sex and she bit his lips, only to lick over them after. His fingers took her panties off, and Hayaka used her feet to take his boxers. Hayaka gasped as she felt his fingers enter. As they moved around, she nearly screamed.
"Shh," Katou said," They can hear us." He didn't really care though, but he knew Hayaka would. She nodded, and tried to stay quieter.
Katou released his fingers and as he kissed her ear asked, "Are you ready?"
Hayaka nodded and breathily answered, "Yes."
Katou was very worried that he would hurt her and told her that if he did, just to say so and he would stop. He first started with the tip, and was very slow and gentle moving millimeter by millimeter. Impatient, Hayaka used her legs to push him in, right until the hilt. Unexpectedly, it hurt which she didn't see coming. Katou saw her wince and before he could say anything Hayaka said, "I'm okay."
"Are you sure? We can stop-"
"No. Katou, I want you." She looked into his eyes and tried to project how much she loved him. His look of concern dissipated a small bit.
Katou began to move his hips slowly, and her tightness made him moan. It felt so good. Hayaka pushed unto his back muscles, feeling him move. She repeatedly moaned his name and asked him to go harder. He would respond and she tried to remember to stay quiet. Her world was out of control; all she could feel was him. They were one and it felt amazing. She felt pressure build up, and yearned for release. When she couldn't take it anymore, she let go. Soon after, she felt a warm liquid enter her and Katou's collapse. They stayed like that for a while, hearing their panting and feeling the others heartbeat. Katou pulled out and lied next to her. He felt pleased at seeing her exhausted face. Their fingers intertwined, and Hayaka wiggled herself into his arms. Katou smiled and kissed her softly.
"I love you," Katou said.
"I love you more," Hayaka giggled, and felt his chest rumbling from his chuckle.
Her eyes drooped; she was so tired. Katou had said something else to her, but she had fallen fast asleep before making out what he said.