So this is my first malec so be nice. After reading a lot of these I thought I would have a go though I'm feeling a bit dark today so sorry if I depress you a bit.
The city lights shone lighting up the sky. Heavy rain soaked my hair and shirt. I felt silent tears fall down my face. I didn't wipe them away, what was the point; more would just follow. I could hear the band playing softly in the town square even though I was nearly a mile away. The New Year's ball still in full swing. New Year new start my arse! It had only been 2011 for 10 minutes and all ready my life was circling the drain. I ran not thinking of where I was going. Just one foot in front of the other. I stepped in different sized puddles splashing water up my leg. I came to a stop at the old bridge that was cut off because of the ball. I could smell alcohol and hear birds flying high above my head. I stood next to the bar and took of my shoes not caring whether I step in a puddle or not. I climbed up to the top of the bar and looked down and the gentle current. I try and make my last thoughts about my family who would grieve but move on if anyone notices I am even gone that is. However my thoughts drift to the one man I loved the one I trusted the one that broke my heart. So as I muttered a final pray and close my eyes pictures of his beautiful face mock me with his eyes that look like they should belong to a cat and his taunting smirk. I whisper one last thing as my feet slip from the bar.
"Magnus…"
Should I continue or not? Up to you love Lordy100 xxx