okay, this is really short, but its just meant to show you whats going on at first. my other chapters will be better. and im changing the ending to my other story so it fits this one. please R&R :)


The sun burned her face and her bare shoulders as she, Daron, Jak, and Torn waited on the bridges for the Air Tran to arrive. Everyone else was already on their way, including Razor, Ashelin, Daxter, Tess, and jinx. We "accidentally" missed the last one because little miss Daron forgot her jacket and we had to turn around and go back through traffic just for her. Has anyone ever used a jacket in Spargus? Ever?

He's too nice to her. Everyone is too nice to her. She won't last a day in the hot ass desert. She glanced over at her. Her ripped up jeans, her black long sleeve shirt that cut off at her belly button. Her whole outfit looked painted on it was so tight. She's been hanging out with ashelin a bit too long. And she so dyes her hair. I don't care what she says about her past. Wind began blowing her short blue-green locks wildly as the Tran descended. The small group made their way one by one inside, taking their seats inside. It was hot. And it was muggy. And Keira wasn't in the best of moods today.

"Hey Keira, you wanna show Daron down to the beach when we get there? I'll come meet you later, but before I do anything I need to-"

"No. I will not. I am going to meet Razor as soon as we get there. Why don't you take her jak? Or maybe torn would like to escort the little princess down to the beach, since your making it sound like she can't find a damn beach by herself." Pissed off from the heat and fumes of the Tran she turned her back to them and laid her head and the thick, dirty window.

"It's fine. I'll just, um, go find ashelin somewhere or something." Daron replied optimistically, trying not to strike one of the many nerves Keira possesses. She may have stood her ground once, but she knew when enough was enough.

The Tran grew silent. No-one dared to say a word.



"Look, Keira, I know you hate me and-"but before her sentence was finished, the Tran began to rumble and an explosion caused everyone jump out of their seats, except Keira.

"Everyone, sit down and hold on… the engine just blew." the worried voice of the driver annonced over the small innercom.

"No shit, sherlock." Keira mumbled to herself as she prepared for the worst.