I don't Own Kim Possible. Disney does. This is just a story I wrote. Please
don't sue. No cash buddy. None....
Prologue.....
The Stars were shinning down on the little town of Middleton. Everything was so peaceful and quiet. At Middleton High the doors were closed on the lights were off. The janitor was locking up the school for the night and was heading out the door when he saw a Humanoid figure approaching him. The janitor couldn't make out the figure as it approached him. The figure came into sight and it was a boy of about 18. He was sort of tall, long straight black hair, and a tuned body. He was wearing Black Pants and a very lose black silk shirt. On his neck lay a silver necklace with a sapphire in the shape of a tear imbedded within the elegant design of the necklace. But what set the janitor off the most was his very piercing eyes that shown blue and more importantly his skin had a blue tinge to it . A black bag with a strap hangs from his shoulder. And in his hand was a guitar case.
'Handsome guy... must have the girls chasing him all over the place.' The janitor thought, chuckling to himself inside his head.
"Excuse me, don't mean to interrupt but is this Middleton High School?" said the boy.
"It sure is, but you're a bit late or hella early that's for sure." Said the janitor.
"That's all right, ill come by in the morning for classes. Thank you and have a nice night." Said the boy as he walked off. The boy had a smirk on his face and started humming as he walked non chalantly.
End of Prologue ------------------------
A young man was waiting outside of this beautiful house. The young boy put a hand through his Blond uncombed hair. His brown eyes were dull with boredom. He slung his backpack over his shoulder with a face of shear boredom.
'Man where is She' thought the boy to himself. He was getting more and more frustrated. 'I don't want to be late again; Mr. Barkin will have me in detention for the next thousand years. Well maybe but the next thousand but for sure at least 2 days worth.'
Just then the door opened from the Beautiful House, and out walked out and even more beautiful girl. With Perfect Red hair and Dazzling Emerald Eyes. She walked in a perfect manner as well. She walked over to the young man.
"Hey Ron" Said the Girl
Instantly the look of boredom was replaced with a big goofy grin and happiness in his eyes. "Hey KP." Said Ron with a big goofy grin. 'Man does she look pretty today' Ron thought to himself. 'She looks so cute in that little attire.' "What took you so long; I've been waiting here for like 20 minutes. Were gonna be late" Ron protested. As he began to walk with Kim to school.
"Don't worry Ron, got it covered. We'll be fine." Said Kim. "And besides what's the big rush Ron, its not like it ever bothered you before if we were late, what's the bid deal?" Kim said innocently, knowing full well that if Ron were to get any more tardies, he would get detention.
"Are you kidding, Mr. Barkin is going to cream me if I am late again I am so going to spend an eternity in Detention." Ron raised his hands in whining protest.
Kim giggled and then raised her eyebrow with a smug look on her face. "An eternity Ron?" she started giggling again.
Ron couldn't stop noticing how Hot Kim looked, and how cute she was when she giggled. He loved the fact that he could always make her happy. Man was he in love with her. Ron then started feeling down knowing that she was way out of his league, the rules said so. But he quickly perked up knowing that he should just be enjoying the moment, cause after high school there was no way he could make it to college, which just brought him down even more.
"Ron, what are you staring at?" Kim inquired.
Ron, with a look of confusion on his face, immediately realized he had been staring at his best friend. "umm you-y-your uhh Hair. It's looks really good today." Said Ron. 'Man that was lame' thought Ron. "Um ya so Kim, I was just wondering..."
"Ya Ron?" said Kim
'It's now or never bud. No guts no Glory.' Ron said to himself. "I was just wondering if you wan..."
"Hold that thought." Said Kim as she started sprinting down the street.
Ron turned to look and saw Josh Mankey pulling out of his driveway with his convertible. 'Oh great it's Monkey boy.' Ron saw Kim talking to Josh, they both started laughing. 'It's probably a joke about me.' Ron said to himself. 'If Kim wants to be with Monkey boy, let her. She deserves someone better than me. Why do I hate Mankey so much any way, he's been nothing but nice and respectful to me and Kim. It's probably because he's taking Kim away. But that's how live goes according to the Rules.' Ron was severely bummed out now.
"Ron come on, Josh is giving us a ride to school." Said Kim as she boarded shot gun of the convertible.
Ron quickly jogged to the car and then got in himself. After he strapped himself in. He said a quick Thank You to josh in which he replied no problem. As they drove off, Ron could see Kim and Josh talking and joking about things. 'Man do they look happy together' Ron said to himself. 'Well as long as KP is happy, I'm happy. But Ron just couldn't but on his trademark grin.
They arrived at school fifteen minutes later. Ron and Kim went to there first class together, while Josh went off to his class. Ron and Kim went to there locker's and the whole time Kim was just talking about Josh. Ron couldn't help but want to throw up. Not because it was to lovey dovey, it was because he knew Kim would never say those things about him. Ron excused himself and told Kim he would be in class.
After Ron's threw up in the boy's bathroom about four times, he brushed his teeth and went to class, knowing fully that he was late; he didn't even bother trying to run to class. As long as he could avoid Mr. Barkin, he would be okay. He opened the door to class and saw Mr. Barkin in the teacher's desk. Ron froze three steps in.
"Stoppable, this is the fifth time this month you have been late to class." Stated Mr. Barkin in a stern voice.
"Mr. Barkin? What are you doing in Mrs. Stone's English class?" Ron Asked.
"Mrs. Stone's running a bit late today so I'm in charge until she arrives. Now, as for you, your going to get detention after school." Replied Mr. Barkin
"Don't blame him Sir; Stoppable was late because he was showing me around the school. I was lost so Stoppable here brought me to class. Isn't that right Stoppable." Marked a voice from the door. Everyone turned to see a teenager walk in through the door and walked up to Ron and put his Hand on Ron's shoulder. He was sort of tall, long straight black hair, and a tuned body. He was wearing Black Pants and a very lose black silk shirt. On his neck lay a silver necklace with a sapphire in the shape of a tear imbedded within the elegant design of the necklace. A black bag with a strap hangs from his shoulder. And in his hand was a guitar case. His skin had a slight blue tinge to it. He had blue eyes and a smile on his face.
"Umm yep... that's right." Said Ron Nervously. 'Who is this guy?' thought Ron. 'Whoever he is, he just saved my but'. 'He looks kinda familiar... Haven't I seen him somewhere before?'
"Who are you and what are doing here?" said a stern Mr. Barkin
"Oh... I am Satheus Hope; I was transferred here from Upperton High to attend certain electives I require for graduation." Replied The Teenager as he Handed Mr. Barkin Some papers.
Mr. Barkin looked over the papers and then handed them back to Satheus. "Well since Stoppable here is showing you around already he might as well continue with that job. Welcome to Middleton High. I am Mr. Barkin the vice principal." Said Mr. Barkin
"It's a pleasure to meet you sir." Replied Satheus as he shook his hand firmly.
"Stoppable, show Hope here to his seat next to you." Said Mr. Barkin.
Ron walked down the row of seats and sat behind Kim. Satheus sat next to Ron. Ron then noticed that all the girls were looking at Satheus with a dreamy look in there eye's. Ron turned to look if Kim was doing the same. She was. Putting Ron in an immediate state of jealousy. But then Ron remembered that if it wasn't for Satheus he would be in detention. "Hey Satheus Thanks for your help back there." Whispered Ron.
"No problem Stoppable." whispered Satheus back at Ron.
"You don't have to call me Stoppable, my name is Ron." Whispered Ron.
"So Stoppable is your Nick Name then?" Inquired Sathues.
"No it's my last name. It's Ron Stoppable." Whispered Ron Proudly.
"Ron Stoppable, Sort of like Unstoppable. That's pretty cool." Remarked Satheus.
"Ya, and this is my Best Friend Kim Possible." Said Ron to Satheus as his hand reached over and grabbed Kim's attention to meet Satheus.
"Hello, my name is Satheus, it is a pleasure to meet you Kim Possible." said Satheus as he shook Kim's hand. Then he looked confused as he said Kim's name. "Kim Possible? Like Impossible? Neat. Does everyone in this school have these kind of names? Remarked Satheus.
Kim's face then had that Nervous giggling look. Ron knew that look. It was the same one she had whenever she was talking to Monkey boy. Ron was Infuriated. 'Not him too! Man was there anyone Kim didn't have a crush on? Well... except for me any way's.' Ron quickly reminded himself that Sathues hasn't tried to hit on Kim so he was Ok... for now anyways.
"Are you quite done?" Said Mr. Barkin in a stern voice. Barkin saw them stopping and re focus on him. "I was informed by your instructor that you were to present your Poems today about the subject of Love. You will be graded on how I liked your poetry. Be Warned that I am a Tough but Fair critic. Now that that's out of the way we will start alphabetically."
As the first person went to deliver there poem to the class, Satheus took out a Note book and then took out a black pencil and quickly began working on something inside the notebook. Ron noticed this and went to look over at the notebook, but it was quickly shut by Satheus.
"Please don't look in my notebook. Thank you." Satheus Said politely with a smile on his face. He reopened it and went back to doing whatever it was that he was doing.
'That was strange' thought Ron. 'Oh well'
All the Students from A-O to delivered their poems. Finally Mr. Barkin said "Possible Your up."
"Don't choke" said Bonnie to Kim as Kim was getting up and grabbing her paper and heading to the front of the class. To which Kim replied "Only when I see you."
Kim went to the front of the class and delivered a poem about Love. It was the love that she shared with her family and more importantly the Love that she shared with her friends. The Poem was beautiful and yet at the same time, Ron thought it was the most depressing thing in the world. Because Ron knew that he would never mean anything more to Kim then just her friend. After the poem was over everyone clapped (except Bonnie), and Ron even whistle and started saying Encore! Encore! When Kim sat down Ron leaned over to her and whispered
"Good job KP!"
"Thanks Ron." Replied Kim.
Bonnie was up next. She delivered a poem about how much she loved the cheerleading squad and how much they meant to her. Ron turned to look at Kim and saw her face in a state of anger, eye's twitching and her mouth was in a state of shock. 'Man does she look cute when she's angry.
"Stoppable your up next" Said Mr. Barkin.
Ron went into his bag and started to fish out his paper from the mess that was his bag. Quickly realizing it wasn't there, Ron started to Panic.
"Any day now Stoppable." Stated Mr. Barkin
Ron was growing really worried as he jumbled through his mess on his quest for his poem.
"Tell me Stoppable, what does the word love mean to you?" asked Mr. Barkin
The Word KIM just popped into his brain the second he heard the question. But nothing came out of his mouth because Ron knew that if he opened his mouth he would say something that he would regret.
"How about you Hope? What does the word Love mean to you?"
Satheus looked up at Mr. Barkin put his pencil down, and put his hand as a fist under his chin to hold it there. All the Students (especially the female portion) turned to Satheus and eagerly awaited his response. Unfazed by this, Satheus gave his response in a low and serious voice said.
"Love is the simplest and most complicated emotion in the world. While the Heart tells you exactly what you want and why that person means that much to you, your mind tries to apply logic to it. Love is anything but Logical. Love has lifted and crumbled the spirit of every single one of us. It has caused wars that have killed billions, but it has also saved the lives of even more. Love is a very dangerous emotion. No matter how much you want to control it, it will always control you. Your heart sets you on path and no matter how dangerous that path may be, we all walk it like a blind man without a stick praying that everything will be all right. But then your mind interferes, trying to apply logic to your actions, diverting your path from the goal. Even though your path may become easier, you will forever regret it. But that doesn't mean love doesn't pay off, for if you follow your heart and not your mind, whatever happens, you will not regret it."
Mr. Barkin, and the rest of the class, were completely taken aback by the clarity of not only his message, but in how serious and depressingly he had delivered it.
"Well thank you for your insight Hope. Stoppable, what are you waiting for?" Said Mr. Barkin
Ron was about to say he didn't have it when he looked down at his desk and saw a paper on his desk Ron picked it up, it read
'Ron
Here's a poem for you to read to the class. Don't sweat it.
You're Friend
Satheus p.s. It's on the back of this paper.'
Ron looked over at Satheus and he had a smirk on his face. Satheus made his fist into a good job sign and then pointed to the front of the class. "Stoppable, if you don't get up here and deliver your poem in the next 10 seconds, I will give you a zero on this assignment." Said Mr. Barkin with a rather annoyed tune to his stern voice.
Ron picked up the paper and started walking to the front of the class. He didn't really trust Satheus, but he didn't want to get a zero on his poem. He just prayed his poem would not embarrass him in front of the class.
Ron cleared his throat and then began 'his' poem.
End ------- of chapter 1
So what do you guys think so far? I could use some constructive critism. No flaming Thank you.
Hey also I 'might' (key word there is might) need some more characters. One of which is going to be Monique's boy friend and 2 other characters. The characters have to be ordinary teenagers. If you have any cool concepts just post a review with your concept. Please make it feasible and not just spam.
Thanks, expect the next chapter soon.
Prologue.....
The Stars were shinning down on the little town of Middleton. Everything was so peaceful and quiet. At Middleton High the doors were closed on the lights were off. The janitor was locking up the school for the night and was heading out the door when he saw a Humanoid figure approaching him. The janitor couldn't make out the figure as it approached him. The figure came into sight and it was a boy of about 18. He was sort of tall, long straight black hair, and a tuned body. He was wearing Black Pants and a very lose black silk shirt. On his neck lay a silver necklace with a sapphire in the shape of a tear imbedded within the elegant design of the necklace. But what set the janitor off the most was his very piercing eyes that shown blue and more importantly his skin had a blue tinge to it . A black bag with a strap hangs from his shoulder. And in his hand was a guitar case.
'Handsome guy... must have the girls chasing him all over the place.' The janitor thought, chuckling to himself inside his head.
"Excuse me, don't mean to interrupt but is this Middleton High School?" said the boy.
"It sure is, but you're a bit late or hella early that's for sure." Said the janitor.
"That's all right, ill come by in the morning for classes. Thank you and have a nice night." Said the boy as he walked off. The boy had a smirk on his face and started humming as he walked non chalantly.
End of Prologue ------------------------
A young man was waiting outside of this beautiful house. The young boy put a hand through his Blond uncombed hair. His brown eyes were dull with boredom. He slung his backpack over his shoulder with a face of shear boredom.
'Man where is She' thought the boy to himself. He was getting more and more frustrated. 'I don't want to be late again; Mr. Barkin will have me in detention for the next thousand years. Well maybe but the next thousand but for sure at least 2 days worth.'
Just then the door opened from the Beautiful House, and out walked out and even more beautiful girl. With Perfect Red hair and Dazzling Emerald Eyes. She walked in a perfect manner as well. She walked over to the young man.
"Hey Ron" Said the Girl
Instantly the look of boredom was replaced with a big goofy grin and happiness in his eyes. "Hey KP." Said Ron with a big goofy grin. 'Man does she look pretty today' Ron thought to himself. 'She looks so cute in that little attire.' "What took you so long; I've been waiting here for like 20 minutes. Were gonna be late" Ron protested. As he began to walk with Kim to school.
"Don't worry Ron, got it covered. We'll be fine." Said Kim. "And besides what's the big rush Ron, its not like it ever bothered you before if we were late, what's the bid deal?" Kim said innocently, knowing full well that if Ron were to get any more tardies, he would get detention.
"Are you kidding, Mr. Barkin is going to cream me if I am late again I am so going to spend an eternity in Detention." Ron raised his hands in whining protest.
Kim giggled and then raised her eyebrow with a smug look on her face. "An eternity Ron?" she started giggling again.
Ron couldn't stop noticing how Hot Kim looked, and how cute she was when she giggled. He loved the fact that he could always make her happy. Man was he in love with her. Ron then started feeling down knowing that she was way out of his league, the rules said so. But he quickly perked up knowing that he should just be enjoying the moment, cause after high school there was no way he could make it to college, which just brought him down even more.
"Ron, what are you staring at?" Kim inquired.
Ron, with a look of confusion on his face, immediately realized he had been staring at his best friend. "umm you-y-your uhh Hair. It's looks really good today." Said Ron. 'Man that was lame' thought Ron. "Um ya so Kim, I was just wondering..."
"Ya Ron?" said Kim
'It's now or never bud. No guts no Glory.' Ron said to himself. "I was just wondering if you wan..."
"Hold that thought." Said Kim as she started sprinting down the street.
Ron turned to look and saw Josh Mankey pulling out of his driveway with his convertible. 'Oh great it's Monkey boy.' Ron saw Kim talking to Josh, they both started laughing. 'It's probably a joke about me.' Ron said to himself. 'If Kim wants to be with Monkey boy, let her. She deserves someone better than me. Why do I hate Mankey so much any way, he's been nothing but nice and respectful to me and Kim. It's probably because he's taking Kim away. But that's how live goes according to the Rules.' Ron was severely bummed out now.
"Ron come on, Josh is giving us a ride to school." Said Kim as she boarded shot gun of the convertible.
Ron quickly jogged to the car and then got in himself. After he strapped himself in. He said a quick Thank You to josh in which he replied no problem. As they drove off, Ron could see Kim and Josh talking and joking about things. 'Man do they look happy together' Ron said to himself. 'Well as long as KP is happy, I'm happy. But Ron just couldn't but on his trademark grin.
They arrived at school fifteen minutes later. Ron and Kim went to there first class together, while Josh went off to his class. Ron and Kim went to there locker's and the whole time Kim was just talking about Josh. Ron couldn't help but want to throw up. Not because it was to lovey dovey, it was because he knew Kim would never say those things about him. Ron excused himself and told Kim he would be in class.
After Ron's threw up in the boy's bathroom about four times, he brushed his teeth and went to class, knowing fully that he was late; he didn't even bother trying to run to class. As long as he could avoid Mr. Barkin, he would be okay. He opened the door to class and saw Mr. Barkin in the teacher's desk. Ron froze three steps in.
"Stoppable, this is the fifth time this month you have been late to class." Stated Mr. Barkin in a stern voice.
"Mr. Barkin? What are you doing in Mrs. Stone's English class?" Ron Asked.
"Mrs. Stone's running a bit late today so I'm in charge until she arrives. Now, as for you, your going to get detention after school." Replied Mr. Barkin
"Don't blame him Sir; Stoppable was late because he was showing me around the school. I was lost so Stoppable here brought me to class. Isn't that right Stoppable." Marked a voice from the door. Everyone turned to see a teenager walk in through the door and walked up to Ron and put his Hand on Ron's shoulder. He was sort of tall, long straight black hair, and a tuned body. He was wearing Black Pants and a very lose black silk shirt. On his neck lay a silver necklace with a sapphire in the shape of a tear imbedded within the elegant design of the necklace. A black bag with a strap hangs from his shoulder. And in his hand was a guitar case. His skin had a slight blue tinge to it. He had blue eyes and a smile on his face.
"Umm yep... that's right." Said Ron Nervously. 'Who is this guy?' thought Ron. 'Whoever he is, he just saved my but'. 'He looks kinda familiar... Haven't I seen him somewhere before?'
"Who are you and what are doing here?" said a stern Mr. Barkin
"Oh... I am Satheus Hope; I was transferred here from Upperton High to attend certain electives I require for graduation." Replied The Teenager as he Handed Mr. Barkin Some papers.
Mr. Barkin looked over the papers and then handed them back to Satheus. "Well since Stoppable here is showing you around already he might as well continue with that job. Welcome to Middleton High. I am Mr. Barkin the vice principal." Said Mr. Barkin
"It's a pleasure to meet you sir." Replied Satheus as he shook his hand firmly.
"Stoppable, show Hope here to his seat next to you." Said Mr. Barkin.
Ron walked down the row of seats and sat behind Kim. Satheus sat next to Ron. Ron then noticed that all the girls were looking at Satheus with a dreamy look in there eye's. Ron turned to look if Kim was doing the same. She was. Putting Ron in an immediate state of jealousy. But then Ron remembered that if it wasn't for Satheus he would be in detention. "Hey Satheus Thanks for your help back there." Whispered Ron.
"No problem Stoppable." whispered Satheus back at Ron.
"You don't have to call me Stoppable, my name is Ron." Whispered Ron.
"So Stoppable is your Nick Name then?" Inquired Sathues.
"No it's my last name. It's Ron Stoppable." Whispered Ron Proudly.
"Ron Stoppable, Sort of like Unstoppable. That's pretty cool." Remarked Satheus.
"Ya, and this is my Best Friend Kim Possible." Said Ron to Satheus as his hand reached over and grabbed Kim's attention to meet Satheus.
"Hello, my name is Satheus, it is a pleasure to meet you Kim Possible." said Satheus as he shook Kim's hand. Then he looked confused as he said Kim's name. "Kim Possible? Like Impossible? Neat. Does everyone in this school have these kind of names? Remarked Satheus.
Kim's face then had that Nervous giggling look. Ron knew that look. It was the same one she had whenever she was talking to Monkey boy. Ron was Infuriated. 'Not him too! Man was there anyone Kim didn't have a crush on? Well... except for me any way's.' Ron quickly reminded himself that Sathues hasn't tried to hit on Kim so he was Ok... for now anyways.
"Are you quite done?" Said Mr. Barkin in a stern voice. Barkin saw them stopping and re focus on him. "I was informed by your instructor that you were to present your Poems today about the subject of Love. You will be graded on how I liked your poetry. Be Warned that I am a Tough but Fair critic. Now that that's out of the way we will start alphabetically."
As the first person went to deliver there poem to the class, Satheus took out a Note book and then took out a black pencil and quickly began working on something inside the notebook. Ron noticed this and went to look over at the notebook, but it was quickly shut by Satheus.
"Please don't look in my notebook. Thank you." Satheus Said politely with a smile on his face. He reopened it and went back to doing whatever it was that he was doing.
'That was strange' thought Ron. 'Oh well'
All the Students from A-O to delivered their poems. Finally Mr. Barkin said "Possible Your up."
"Don't choke" said Bonnie to Kim as Kim was getting up and grabbing her paper and heading to the front of the class. To which Kim replied "Only when I see you."
Kim went to the front of the class and delivered a poem about Love. It was the love that she shared with her family and more importantly the Love that she shared with her friends. The Poem was beautiful and yet at the same time, Ron thought it was the most depressing thing in the world. Because Ron knew that he would never mean anything more to Kim then just her friend. After the poem was over everyone clapped (except Bonnie), and Ron even whistle and started saying Encore! Encore! When Kim sat down Ron leaned over to her and whispered
"Good job KP!"
"Thanks Ron." Replied Kim.
Bonnie was up next. She delivered a poem about how much she loved the cheerleading squad and how much they meant to her. Ron turned to look at Kim and saw her face in a state of anger, eye's twitching and her mouth was in a state of shock. 'Man does she look cute when she's angry.
"Stoppable your up next" Said Mr. Barkin.
Ron went into his bag and started to fish out his paper from the mess that was his bag. Quickly realizing it wasn't there, Ron started to Panic.
"Any day now Stoppable." Stated Mr. Barkin
Ron was growing really worried as he jumbled through his mess on his quest for his poem.
"Tell me Stoppable, what does the word love mean to you?" asked Mr. Barkin
The Word KIM just popped into his brain the second he heard the question. But nothing came out of his mouth because Ron knew that if he opened his mouth he would say something that he would regret.
"How about you Hope? What does the word Love mean to you?"
Satheus looked up at Mr. Barkin put his pencil down, and put his hand as a fist under his chin to hold it there. All the Students (especially the female portion) turned to Satheus and eagerly awaited his response. Unfazed by this, Satheus gave his response in a low and serious voice said.
"Love is the simplest and most complicated emotion in the world. While the Heart tells you exactly what you want and why that person means that much to you, your mind tries to apply logic to it. Love is anything but Logical. Love has lifted and crumbled the spirit of every single one of us. It has caused wars that have killed billions, but it has also saved the lives of even more. Love is a very dangerous emotion. No matter how much you want to control it, it will always control you. Your heart sets you on path and no matter how dangerous that path may be, we all walk it like a blind man without a stick praying that everything will be all right. But then your mind interferes, trying to apply logic to your actions, diverting your path from the goal. Even though your path may become easier, you will forever regret it. But that doesn't mean love doesn't pay off, for if you follow your heart and not your mind, whatever happens, you will not regret it."
Mr. Barkin, and the rest of the class, were completely taken aback by the clarity of not only his message, but in how serious and depressingly he had delivered it.
"Well thank you for your insight Hope. Stoppable, what are you waiting for?" Said Mr. Barkin
Ron was about to say he didn't have it when he looked down at his desk and saw a paper on his desk Ron picked it up, it read
'Ron
Here's a poem for you to read to the class. Don't sweat it.
You're Friend
Satheus p.s. It's on the back of this paper.'
Ron looked over at Satheus and he had a smirk on his face. Satheus made his fist into a good job sign and then pointed to the front of the class. "Stoppable, if you don't get up here and deliver your poem in the next 10 seconds, I will give you a zero on this assignment." Said Mr. Barkin with a rather annoyed tune to his stern voice.
Ron picked up the paper and started walking to the front of the class. He didn't really trust Satheus, but he didn't want to get a zero on his poem. He just prayed his poem would not embarrass him in front of the class.
Ron cleared his throat and then began 'his' poem.
End ------- of chapter 1
So what do you guys think so far? I could use some constructive critism. No flaming Thank you.
Hey also I 'might' (key word there is might) need some more characters. One of which is going to be Monique's boy friend and 2 other characters. The characters have to be ordinary teenagers. If you have any cool concepts just post a review with your concept. Please make it feasible and not just spam.
Thanks, expect the next chapter soon.