This is my first story so i want all feedback good or bad
disclaimer:I do not own naruto or thor
A new beginning
(Konoha, during Peins invasion)
Naruto lays in the crater hugging Hinata's body,"no, Hina-Chan why did you do it?" " B..b...b..bec...aus...se...i..i...i l...l...love...you," Hinata died in his arms. "Do you wish to save her and your crush, Ino." " what happened to Ino?" "Sakura killed her and joined that treacherous teme, Sasuke Uchiha." "that flat chested bitch. Where is she I'll kill her." naruto said as his features darkened and his eyes slitted,"pein you have taken one of my precious people and Sasuke and Sakura have taken another, Because I wasn't there. You kept me away from them, I couldn't protect them. This means I have to kill you. You bastard." Naruto charged at Pein but got knocked away by the animal path. "b..! I need you out of my way." Naruto started gathering nature chakara and went into sage mode, his eyes still red as he was channeling both natural chakara and the foxes youkii. He swung his fist at pein, only for Pein to try to dodge it. Pein dodged it only by an inch,but not realizing its properties got hit by its aura, burning him and sending him flying. Naruto charged up a Fuuton: Rasenshuiken, and threw it at Pein, the paths of pein dodged it but didn't think about the possibility of it expanding. The rasenshuriken expanded and obliterated the paths.
Naruto's enhanced senses proved that the real Pein was nearby and Sauske and Sakura were with him. Naruto raced off it their direction to see Sasuke arguing with Pein or as Naruto found out Nagato. "what do you mean you can't teach me those jutsus, I deserve them for helping you destroy Konoha." Sasuke said not realizing Naruto could here every word he was saying. "Sasuke you destroyed my home and Sakura, you killed my Ino-Chan while," points at pein,"you killed my Hina-Chan, so by all rights I can kill you. But that wouldn't be fair Sakura you will be able to walk away from this,maybe depends how I feel."Naruto said, as he disappeared.
Sasuke felt his sword being drawn but couldn't see Naruto, but he felt as his arm was stabbed, then his other arm, then abruptly he felt nothing as his head was removed from his body. Sakura looked on in horror as Naruto, the boy who always had a crush on her, so easily tore thru her one true love. "Naruto how could you do this to a man you thought of as a brother, or to me your crush." "Sakura," naruto replied coolly, "you lost your place in my heart when you killed Ino-Chan, you baka."
Nagato looked at Naruto and said, "i will send you back in time if that is what you wish, it will kill me but I will do it." "fine," naruto said while swinging his hand that held Sauske's backwards and cutting Sakura's head off, "I'll take you up on your offer,"
(Konoha, past)
Naruto awoke with a start, realizing that he was in his old apartment kind of scared him, he never thought he would be here again. he remembered that he had the academy today, and that he had the crush on the bitch that killed his wives. 'Kami, i was so stupid during this time, but ino-chan is a fangirl and Hina-chan follows me all over town, but she is so shy that she cant talk to me. how am i going to give both of them back their memories?' Naruto thought but was formulating a way to get both of his wives again. Naruto felt a tug in the back of his mind 'seems like kyuubi wants to talk to me.'
(mindscape)
Naruto looked at the cage and saw Kyuubi behind it, "Kit i have an idea, one that should let you have both of your wives. i will grant you a bloodline limit...
i had to put in a cliff hanger because i know you guys and gals would hate me for it.
