(Hey there! This is my first time writing a fan fic. Hope you enjoy it.
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In Japan, a new school semester was starting. Kids were all rushing to school. Some were happy. Most were distressed.
PITTER. PATTER. PITTER. PATTER. "GANGWAY!!" someone shouted.
BRRRIIINNNGG!! The sound of the bell made everyone rush into school. And it made a certain girl run even faster.
"NO! DON'T CLOSE THE GATES!" she yelled.
She ran with all her might. And by a hair's breath, she made it.
"Hikari? Are you alright?" A girl with beautiful black hair tied up in a pony tail with brown eyes asked.
"Just dandy. But that was too close for comfort, Mikan," replied the girl with blue hair tied up in pig tails,panting as she was out of breath.
Mikan smiled and they both walked into the school. As they walked, they talked about their holiday. How they spent the day, what did they do, and did they thought about anyone special.
"I saw this really cute guy. Oooh! If only he went to this school," Mikan said, saying it in a cute voice.
Hikari just let out a sigh. Mikan never changed ever since the beginning of the holiday. They both went into their classroom. And lessons then started once the teacher came in. Hikari wished today would be a special day on a star last night. Her name means light, to shine like the stars. And today is going to be special, because today is her birthday and her destiny starts that night.
End of school
"Do you think teachers enjoy torturing us?" Hikari asked sounding sarcastic.
"With the amount of homework they gave us, I wouldn't be surprised if they did," Mikan replied.
They both walked home and waved goodbye to each other at the inter-section. Hikari continued her way back and went into a double-storey house. Inside, her parents waited for her and she knew it as well.
"Mom! Dad! I'm home!" Hikari shouted.
"Welcome home," Miaka, Hikari's mother, said.
"Where's dad?" Hikari asked, looking around.
"Getting reservations for dinner tonight. Honestly, why doesn't he just stay home and let me cook dinner?" Miaka said letting out a sigh..
"What a gruesome thought," Hikari said to herself silently.
Miaka wasn't a very good cook. And everyone knew that...except Miaka herself.
"I'm home," someone said.
"Welcome home, dad!" Hikari said running towards her father and giving him a hug.
"Welcome home, Taka," Miaka said coming out of the kitchen with the sweetest smile.
Hikari backed off. Taka and Miaka hugged each other. Taka then went to the living room with Hikari. "PSST. Dad, imagine mom making dinner for my 12th birthday tonight," Hikari said in a low voice.
Taka made a face. "Well, I guess you wouldn't be having such a great birthday then."
Hihari elbowed her father and Taka just smiled.
In the afternoon
Hikari went out from her house. There were still a few more hours before going to her birthday party. She saw her friends at the park, which was near to her house. Mikan waved Hikari to come over and she went towards the park.
"Hello," Hikari said.
There stood Mikan, Shiki (a guy who was friends with Hikari ever since kindergarden. Has golden hair and blue eyes), and Mori (the son of Miaka's best friend Yui and Tetsuya. Has short black hair and eyes). Hikari always hangs out with these three. Mikan and Shiki were with Hikari a long time but Mori was only friends with them these last few months.
"Hikari, why is your hair blue? Did you dye it?" Mori asked holding one of her pig tail.
Mikan and Shiki already knew the answer to that. They giggled. "No, I didn't dye it. It was already like this when I was born. My dad has the same hair color," Hikari answered as if it was no big deal.
"Oh. Sorry," Mori apologized with a very red face. Hikari just smiled.
"It's okay. Everybody asks me that. Even Shiki and Mikan once. Right guys?" Hikari said looking at Shiki and Mikan with those last few words.
That night
"Hurry up! Or we'll be late!" Taka shouted.
"Just a minute," Hikari and Miaka said at the same time. They went down the stairs the same time too.
This was no surprise. It happens everytime. This is the trait that both Hikari and Miaka share. Being late. Hikari wore a blue dress with a few frills at her skirt. Her hair was tied up with ribbons. Miaka was wearing a beatiful dress with pictures of cherry blossoms. Taka was wearing a simple black tux.
They drove to the restaurant and there waited all the guests that were invited, including all of Hikari's friends. The party began that night. Seeing everybody enjoying themselves made Hikari very happy. She walked through her pile of presents and out of the eye she saw a book. A book entitled "The Universe of the Four Gods."
(I updated it a bit. addad a bit more details. Hope it sounds a bit better or at least just as good.)
