Dragon ball Z : The Lost Ones
Disclaimer I do not own DBZ nor any of the characters or trademarks of the real DBZ makers.
A/N this is my first fic so go easy on me but tell me what I could do to make the story better and any major mistakes it may contain.
Chapter 1:Intro
Deep in the depths of space where one large object could be seen flowing at a quick pace. It is a spaceship and one of the inhabitants of this ship are training. Inside the vessel there is on tall spiky haired man. He has jet black hair and a tail. He is a saiyan on mission to clear a planet. Hey has light brown eyes with a light skin tone. His body is built like it was made of rock ad he is in a black jumpsuit. He has two bangs going in to the left on his head and his hair sticks strait up with the exception of the bangs. He was practicing his fighting technique when another person walks in. it is a woman with black hair as well but with deep blue eyes. She is wearing a light purple jumpsuit and some boots. Her hair is spiky and slanted to the left with large bang slanted to the right covering her left eyebrow. She say's "Hey Vetro have you been training this whole time?".
"Yeah I was perfecting some new move I came up with until you walked in." Vetro said with a sheepish grin.
"You should be getting rest we have a tough planet to clear in 1 standard weeks time so don't wear yourself out to much.".
"Don't worry so much Ruka! I wont wear myself out and I will rest if you just help me perfect this move."
"Fine but it better be good. What do you want me to do?" Said Ruka.
"Just Attack me and don't hold back!"
"OK!".
Ruka jumps at Vetro dodges the first few punches before kicking Ruka into the far side of the room. She gets up and rubs the sore spot she has on her ribs from Vetro's kick. "I'll get you for that one!".Ruka proclaims.
She then charges him full speed until Vetro does the unexpected he, charges his right arm with energy then shoots his arm forward a fist sized ball of energy sent screeching out. when it's about to hit Ruka it unexpectedly disperses into smaller ball of energy some twenty in all. On moves and hits Ruka in stomach.
"Ouch! That stings!". Ruka exclaimed with very slight pain.
The all at once the balls are sent at Ruka very quickly. She gets pelted and took her eyes off Vetro which was enough for him to get get a couple power-punches into Ruka's face. Which knocked her down. Vetro helps Ruka back up.
"Thank's for the help Ruka." Vetro said.
"Yeah whatever!What was that move you used it was fairly good.".
'It doesn't have a name yet but I am thinking of them right now ill tell you later. For now lets get to the bridge so we can see how long it's going take to get to our mission objective."Say's.
Ruka sighs deeply"Fine.".
A/N Anyone want to tell me a good name of that attack Vetro uses. And hope you like the story and tell me any and all ideas you have for the story send me a PM. Other than Than that Please Review you feedback helps.