Yo!!! man i am so new to this. so sry if i screw up...sighs

this isn't teh first story i've put up here, but i'm still tryin to get teh freakin hang of doin stories on fanfiction.

well, this is one of my bb fics.

enjoy!!!

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Beaten and battered, a young girl with flames for hair and gleaming blue eyes walked down the street. Her eyes were half-closed and looked empty. Her hair was messed up and her clothes were torn and stained red.

'Where do I go? There's no where for me to stay.' The young girl pondered sadly to herself as she walked

Her eyes began to blur as her walking slowed. She was ready to give up and let go, tonight had cut the final strand of her sanity, self-confidence, and bravery. She was broken.

Flashback

"How dare you come to talk to me like nothing happened?! You're weak and a weak blader is something we have plenty of! We don't want you here anymore!" The figure yelling at her kicked her ribs every time he finished a sentence.

"Boss?" A voice said from the door.

"Have at it boys. She's no use to me now." The man said, leaving.

A group of smirking brutes entered the corridor, armed with many heavy objects just perfect for beating someone with.

Their smirks widening, they raised their weapons and the beating started.

Pained screams, bones breaking, and blood spattering was heard in the night air of Moscow.

End Flashback

"Are you stupid or something?! The hotel is in THIS direction!" A voice yelled, catching her attention. Little did she know that voice she heard will begin her journey back to the path of light.

The red-head turned her head slowly in the direction that she heard the voice.

Down the street came a large group of boys a little older than her and a couple girls.

The girl stood there, unable to move as the group came closer. They were arguing about something or other.

The girl's body began to shut down on her as her world went black. She passed out, falling to the cold cement.

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