Here it is. The first part of my story: Alvin and the Chipmunks: 4Ever Together
If you wish to gain a sneek peek of what the story is about, check out the preview/trailer I made eariler. Hope you enjoy.
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Chapter 1: Huge Announcement
It was a warm Saturday Night in July on the streets in L.A. as crowds were still gathering for a show featuring everyone's favorite 8 inch singers as the crowd starts "Chipmunks" and "Chipettes" chants as they await their entrance for their final song of the evening. Just then...
We built this city, we built this city on rock and roll
Built this city, we built this city on rock and roll
Say you don't know us, or recognize our face
Say you don't care who goes to that kind of place
Knee deep in the hoopla, sinking in your fight
Too many runaways eating up the night
And Simon plays the Mamba,
Listens to the radio
Don't you remember?
We built this city
We built this city on rock and roll!
We built this city, we built this city on rock and roll
Built this city, we built this city on rock and roll
(Alvin guitar rift)
And Alvin plays the Guitar,
Listens to the radio
Don't you remember?
We built this city,
We built this city on rock and roll!
We built this city, we built this city on rock and roll
Built this city, we built this city on rock and roll
Built this city, we built this city on rock and roll
Built this city, we built this city on rock and roll
We built, we built this city yeah
We built this city
We built, we built this city
The crowd erupts as the six are all excited for their sky rocketed success. Backstage Dave is doing the same as just then Ian walks up behind and slaps him on the back getting his attention.
"Ian! How's it going?" Dave greeted him shaking his hand for old time sake.
"What's up big guy?" Ian returned such as the two looked out at the jamming and rocking that was taking place in the sold out venue. "Phew...it's hard to believe that it got this big."
"Yeah...look at them out there...having so much fun." Dave answered back.
Both looked out at the six of them trying to keep the crowd pumped as they take one more bow. Dave sighed at what he was about to do. Ian knew also which is why he showed up.
"You sure you wanna go through with this?" Ian questioned Dave as if he was trying to sway him to change his mind. Which to Ian would be everything he would want. Dave takes one more glance out to his kids before deciding.
"Yeah..." Unemotionally Dave said back and with that Dave then walks out to the stage gets greeted with the same cheer from the crowd as the boys notice him. Alvin hops up onto his shoulder as the others stay close by as Dave grabs one of the mics as he has an announcement to make to the standing only auidence as he waves to the rabid fans.
"Thank you all for attending the show tonight we greatly appreicate it." As he began to announce, but Alvin quickly pulls the mic over to him to give his own announcement.
"And we love you all!" Which the crowd erupts in cheers again. Dave whispers to him give him back the mike which Alvin does confused as to what is going on. Alvin and the other don't understand, but allow Dave to talk to crowd. They knew Dave had never done this before, so this had to be very important.
"Alvin's right... which is why I felt this announcement needed to be said to all of you in person here tonight, because we...or I felt I owed it to all of you say it." Dave takes a deep breath as the kids look on and then goes on. "My father told me when I was young, two very important lessons in life. One being that All good things must come to an end, and that it's always better to get out too early rather than too late. This is why I've decided that the next concert that the Chipmunks and Chipettes perform...will be their last."
The crowd gasps in sorrow at the announcement as the trios are speechless at the words their dad has said as well.
"What?" Britney whined out.
"What do you mean?" Alvin complained. But Dave tried to calm him down.
"Shh. It's alright Alvin. It's okay" As he turns back to the crowd. But it was far from okay to Alvin, this was their life, this was all they ever had done. Now it was being ripped away from them.
After the announcement had been made and the insanity insued, the kids were back in the dressing room. Alvin and Britney are far from happy about what they've heard.
"This is a buzzkill! Why wouldn't he even tell us before hand?" Alvin said as he was imagining kicking something as hard as he could.
"Everything we had...gone. Over! Finished! RUINED!" Britney cries out to the rooftop. All Simon could do is shake his head as Jeanette looks on.
"Come one you two, don't you think you're taking this a little too seriously?" Simon did his best attempt to reason with them.
"Too seriously? I think Dave ripped out my heart!" As Alvin falls to his knees in agony making SImon roll his eyes.
"Alvin...you wouldn't be alive if Dave..." Alvin quickly cuts him off as Simon was about to go into another lecture.
"It's a figure of speech Simon, you of all people should know that." Alvin blankly stared at him. Nothing seemed to be claming either of them.
"Simon think about it." Britney stepped in. "Without the concerts, we're just talking chipmunks, that wear clothes. I just...OH!" Jeanette walked up to her sister knowing a way to get her mind off the matter at hand.
"Britney calm down. You don't want to get a wrinkle." Jeanette said placing a hand on her shoulder with a smile.
"A wrinkle? AHHH!" Britney screamed out running. Britney then runs off as she freaks out at the very utter of the word. Dave then walks in after adressing the public who looks exhausted seeing Britney run by knowing something's still up.
"So how are they taking it?" Dave asked Simon directly asking about Alvin and Britney.
"As well as you would expect..." Simon replied, Dave knew exactly what that meant.
"Utter chaos?" Dave put it frank.
"Yep." Jeanette responded.
Dave knew they wouldn't take the news well, but he felt that telling much soon would result in the same thing for an even longer period. There really wasn't any way around it in his mind.
"I'll get the car ready." Dave heads back out as Alvin is still huffing and puffing hearing the chat between them.
"Utter Chaos" he says...why I oughta..." Alvin says in a mocking "Dave" voice.
SImon covers Alvin's mouth before he says something he regrets. Just then Jeanette gets their attention.
"Hey guys...look up there." Jeanette said pointing up to the make-up table. The three of them look up at their youngest siblings who together in front of one of the dressing room mirrors. Britney then walks up behind the three on the floor. "What's going on up there?" Britney riddled.
"I have no clue." Simon answered.
"That's a first..." Alvin joked still looking up so he couldn't see the look Simon gave him. Meanwhile up top Theodore is helping to fix Eleanor's hair which was done fancy for the show who is just smiling at her counterparts work.
"That's perfect Theodore, you did a great job." She said as Theodore had just finished getting her hair back in it's usual look.
"I tried my best, I hope it looks alright." Theodore then sat down next to her as the two held hands with one another which started to get the attention of their siblings as they listened in. Eleanor then wrapped her arm around his and leaned in. "Theodore, can I ask you something?"
"Mmm-hmm." Theodore replied in a typical fashion.
Their siblings knew something was up and tried to as quietly as he could listen in on the conversation.
"Well, we've been together for nearly two years now, and...we've been through a lot together...and...I was wondering if you felt the same way about me, that...I feel about you." Months ago Theodore would have blushed and stuttered at the very sound of those words, but instead Theodore looked down at her hand and back up smiling.
"I really, really like you Eleanor." Theodore gave with a smile on his face as if he had seen the biggest cookie in the world. The reply put a big smile on her face, plus the fact that Theodore who is usually timid and shy, didn't hesitate in the least before answering put such glee on her face.
"So do I." She said as she nuzzled up on his arm. "So how do you feel about not doing concerts anymore?"
"Okay I guess...I didn't think Dave would go through with it." Eleanor wasn't expecting to hear that and couldn't help but continue on.
"Huh? You mean Dave told you?" Eleanor asked on.
"Well not exactly." Theodore stuttered, Eleanor sensed that Theodore was starting to feel a bit uneasy, but she allowed him to finish if he wanted to. "I...kinda asked Dave if we wouldn't do as many shows. I just don't feel comfortable doing them anymore." This got the attention of the four down low, none more than Alvin.
"Why he? This is all his fault!" Alvin said with passive agression as he began walking away and goes to where they are with purpose as the others try to stop him.
"They wouldn't have understood if I told them." Theodore continued on to Eleanor.
"Told them what?" Eleanor asked with intrig
"I'd like to spend more time with you." The answer that Theodore put a smile on her face which caused him to blush through his fur.
"Oh Theodore..." The two's faces began to get closer and closer as the three on the floor begin to see what is about to happen as Theodore and Eleanor begin to close their eyes and kiss one another...but...
"Theodore!" Theodore's name gets called out by his older brother who comes stomping up to him. Alvin screaming out to his younger brother snaps them both out of it and completely ruined the moment as Jeanette just drops hee jaw shaking her head and as Simon and Britney just face palm themselves at the timing. Eleanor turns to Theodore.
"I guess you can explain it to Alvin now huh? I'll leave you alone with Alvin." Eleanor got up and walked off as Theodore tried to stop her but Alvin held his arm.
"Eleanor! What did you do that for?" Theodore turned around complaining to his brother.
"Me, what I did? It's your fault we're not doing shows anymore!" Alvin couldn't help but let his emotions out as Alvin gets restranded by Jeanette and Simon again.
"Alvin calm down..." Jeanette pleaded with him
"You're acting like a maniac!" Simon continued as Theodore just looked on with concern. Alvin though breaks free and grabs Theodore by his collar pulling him in scaring him a bit.
"Alvin stop!" Britney yelled out.
"Theo, I oughta..." Alvin began... just as Dave then walks in and everyone looks over at him putting Dave on the spot.
"Give you a great big hug." Alvin pulled Theodore in hugging him with Theodore's eyes wide open in confusion as Alvin looks at Dave with a trissure cat grin.
"Well, that's a switch. Come on guys let's head home." Dave headed back out the door as they realized he didn't suspect a thing. Theodore was the first to act breaking out of the hug.
"I wanted that moment with Eleanor, not you Alvin." With that Theodore walks back to Eleanor who looks upset with Alvin has he comes over.
"Are you alright Theodore?" Eleanor asks holding his arm.
"I'll be fine." Theodore replied with an unhappy look on his face
As they walk off, Alvin is confused to what Theodore said.
"Moment? What moment?" Alvin dumbfoundedly asked.
Britney slaps Alvin on the back of the head for his complete blank-headedness
"They were about to kiss you dummy." Britney said looking at him with her typical glare she gave. A response that all Alvin could do was tug on his collar in embarrassment. The four chipmunks watch their youngest siblings still holding hands as they head out.
"It's so sweet how close they've become." Jeanette said in awe of their siblings.
"They're made for each other. I'm so happy for them." Britney was never one to show feelings like that, but maybe it was that it was for her sister. Alvin felt he could take advantage to step in.
"Are you and me made for each other Britney?" Alvin asked her.
"Not a chance." Britney answered as fast as Alvin could ask it.
"Nuts..." Alvin said gloomy snapping his finger.
There you have Part 1. Hope you enjoyed; Part 2 Coming Soon...