so i replaced the first chapter with this one and i put some time into making it good so please review even if it is a flame
Its just like four years after the 3rd movie...
The small dark brown hair boy glared at the red headed baby in front of him. Glancing back at the pair of male babysitters he frowned. The two weren't paying much attention as they were more interested in the football game. The girl next to him was a few months younger then him but since she was a girl, she did talk more then he did. Though it the end to most it sounded just like toddler talk. Her eyes were red on black like her father's as her short brown hair was like her mother's making her evenly like both.
The boy, on the other hand, looked like trouble, like his father, while his little sister looked sweet and kind like their mother. Her green eyes lite up as she saw her big brother approach her. She put her thumb into her mouth, wanting him to play with her. He was only related to the red hair as the other girl was just a friend he'd known most of his life.
He just glared at her, uninterested.
He stretched his foot out then lightly kicked the girl back, causing her to fall backwards onto the pillow with a giggle. The two babysitters looked back, only seeing a nice big brother playing with his sister and going back to their game as the little girl lightly giggled.
The boy sighed then hit the girl on top of her head, causing the laughter to stop and a loud cry to start. Both men turned around, to see the crying baby and the two toddlers drawing on their papers.
"What do we do?" Bobby asked Peter, completely lost.
"Matt, what happened?" Peter asked the boy "I don't know" he answered in a way that was barely understood but still clear by his shrug.Bobby picked up the girl, gently rocking her.
Matt watched as the man in front of him tried to quiet the crying baby.
"It isn't working" he said to the other.Matt started to giggle, finding the whole scene to be funny with Bobby unable to sooth her and Peter panicking.