Author's note: this is the first story I'm writing after reading a lot of the great writing done on here. I decided to try my hand on it. So please give me constructive criticism. So I can get my story as good as possible. This story wouldn't be possible without the help of my friend freakwriter13. Also before I forget eeveechamp99 does not own pokemon only Nintendo owns pokemon. The only thing I own is my character Aron smith. So without further ado lets get on with the story.
The Magikarp Story
What do you think when you here magikarp? Most people think there weak stupid pokemon. But what would you do if you were stuck with one as your starter? Most would say train it like any other starter some would say just kill themselves from the stupidity of raising one. But no one really knows what they would do unless there put into that situation. I was put into this exact situation and this is my story.
My name is Aron smith. When I was five years old, I had two friends named Ash Ketchum and Gary Oak. When I look back I realize that Gary really wasn't a friend. Because of the way he continuously abused me. I remember him beating me until I blacked out. But I was hopeful my life would get better. If I only knew how wrong I was back then.
On my tenth birthday the day I could begin my great pokemon journey with a great pokemon, the day I could prove myself, I awoke late. I scrambled out of bed
and rushed to professor oaks house I begged him for a pokemon, but the others had long since came and took them. Since I was so desperate for a pokemon oak informed me he had one left it was a magikarp. I was overjoyed that there was a pokemon left so I gladly excepted it. What I didn't know then was that magikarps are one of the worst pokemon. So I quickly thanked professor oak, and took my new pokemon partner and I headed for the next town to get supplies and head out on my journey.
Authors end note: so that is my first chapter. I think it came out well but I want to know what you guys thought of it. So please review and give me some constructive criticism, or just say you liked it whatever works for you.