AUTHOR'S NOTE:
Ok guys, this is my first Divergent fanfiction! No judging please, I know I'm not too great at writing. Classic storyline, the good old truth or dare, but hopefully I'll put a good spin on story takes place before Tris and Four get together, but they still like eachother. Will and Christina are dating and well everyone else is single ;) but not for long! Al is still dead, and Will is alive. I couldn't really find a fic where Tris and Tobias weren't together yet and the build up of the relationship so I wrote it! Read and review please lovelies x
A/N 16/09/14: So I have reread all these chapters and like, oh my god my writing was so bad! This was my first fic ah and yeah I'm horrified haha. So bear with me! The writing improves drastically at Chapter 15+ so bear with it! Don't give up after the first few chapters haha. They seem super short at the beginning but they got longer, so much better and it defintely developes more of a plot!
TRIS' POV:
"Hey guys!" Uriah yelled as he strode into Christina's room.
What was he doing here, I wondered. It was ten thirty, hours after dinner, and Christina and I were pretty tired. We were planning to go to sleep soon, after we'd finished talking.
"We're all having a massive party in my room, with you know, Will, Zeke, Marlene, Shauna, Four and everyone basically."
Four? Four's going to be there. Ok, maybe this party is sounding good. I don't know why but ever since I met him, there's just always been something between us, something I always feel. Some kind of tension, but I'm pretty sure it's completely onesided. I mean, he would never like me, I'm just plain old Tris. Not attractive, not beautiful, not smart. Just Tris. Normally I don't like parties, but I figure, what's the harm?
I mean it's just a bit of fun. Nothing's really going to happen...however how much I want something to happen.
"We should go, " I said, turning to Christina. She shakes her head slightly and screws up her face.
"Yeah come on Christina, don't be a pansycake! It'll be fun. We all know you'd just be making out with Will here for the whole night anyway after Tris has gone to bed," said Uriah with a grin on his face.
I made a face. "Ew!" I exclaimed.
Christina punched Uriah on the arm, "Yeah whatever. I guess we'll come. Should be fun."
Uriah punched the air. "Yes!"
"Now rack off so we can get ready," Christina laughed.
"See you ladies in half an hour, " Uriah said with a wink as he turned to leave.
"Oh and by the way PANSYCAKE IS NEVER GOING TO BECOME A THING!" Christina shouted at his retreating figure in the hallway.
"YES IT WILL!" Uriah shouted back at her, while he strolled off to his room.
"Oh whatever," Christina said rolling her eyes. "Come on Tris, we're going to get you ready before we head over."
I looked down at my outfit of jeans and a black t-shirt. "But whyyyyy," I whined. "It's so much effort!"
Christina walked over to her wardrobe and started pulling clothes out, right and center. She pulled out a tight black sequined tank top and tossed it to me. "Just do it! You'll look good. Oh and here's a camisole, put it on underneath," she said as she chucked me another top. I paused and looked at her.
"Why do I need two shirts under my jacket? It's not like I'll be stripping for anyone, " I said. She looked over to me with a guilty look on her face.
"Right Christina?..." I questioned her. "Seriously."
"Okay maybe..." Christina trailed off.
"Are you kidding me?" I exclaimed.
Oh god, I better not be taking ANY clothes off . I already feel self conscious enough in clothes, let alone with none on. I am not looking forward to this.
I peeled off my t-shirt, and pulled on the camisole reluctantly as I pouted at Christina.
"Well I heard Uriah mention that we would be playing Candor or Dauntless! So yeah, that's why I'm making you put layers on," quipped Christina, with a laugh in her voice. "And you should make sure you've got some sexy underwear on, especially if Four's there." She winked at me as she looked me up and down.
I started to laugh really hard at the thought of me looking sexy in underwear. "Christina you know that there is no way in hell I could ever look sexy. I mean look at me!" I half said half laughed while gesturing at my body.
I swear, I seriously had the body of a twelve year old boy. Flat. Like really flat.
"Tris shut up! You're totally hot! Don't you see the way Four looks at you sometimes?" Christina asked.
I started to blush. She must have been mistaken, there's no way he would ever look at me. I mean he was Four...the hottest guy like in Dauntless. He had girls flinging themselves at him everyday.
"You must be mistaken," I said with a laugh in my voice. She obviously was. "I'm not hot. Or attractive in any way."
Christina shook her head at me. "You're wrong."
"Wait what's Candor or Dauntless anyway?" I asked, changing the subject.
Christina winked at me. "Well you're going to find out when you get there."
"Can't you tell me now?" I pouted.
"No, we've got to get ready before we leave, we've got like ten minutes," Christina said excitedly.
She then hustled me to the bathroom. "Okay makeup time!" she said as she started to apply eyeshadow to my eyelids. She added a swipe of eyeliner, a bit of blush and bronzer and mascara.
"There! You look great," Christina exclaimed as she pulled me towards the bathroom mirror.
Honestly I have no idea how makeup is going to help. Nothing can help my face, like I know it sounds ridiculous but sometimes I really do feel like such a Stiff.
I'm no fun. I'm not exciting. I'm grey.
I looked in the mirror. I caught my breath slightly looking into it.
The makeup really made a difference to my face.
I looked different. And I felt different.
Hopefully tonight might bring out a different side in me.
Ok first chapter done! Please review and tell me what you think. Oh and if you have any ideas for any dares or etc, please let me know!
Ronia xx
