uchiha emmanuel
PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 6:06 am
Emmanuel was just a normal kid.
Since when his father pushed him in a volcano.
Because everybody in his clan was born with the will of fire
And his father thought he was no good
when the next morning emmanuel woke up all naked in the middle lava
he could not believe that he wasnt dead
then he heard a loud strange voice telling him that he was a special boy said the loud strange voice
you have a fire element hidden in your body
But your a level ahead than the power in your body.
for 2 years emmanuel trained with the loud and mysterious voice
after that he returned to the village.
he discovered that he could absorb fire attacks without taking damage
that's how its all began.
Emmanuel was still looking for the answer how he got that fire element hidden in his body
for 4 good years emmanuel decided to stop looking for the answer
and go after his father
Later that day he walked pas his clan corps
To ask them if they heard about his father
the people were shocked that he was still alive
People started asking questions about how did you survived? and all that stuff
but then emmanuel left the building
And then a old man called his name
Is it really you?Emmanuel
Emmanuel stared at the old man with a dirty look
"what do I want"
Listen i aint got money"said emmanuel
the old started speaking
Listen good "MY SON"
emmanuel looked at the man with devistated eyes
WHAT ARE, YOU THE B*ST*RD THAT THREW ME INTO THAT VOLCANO
it was a mistake my son please dont be angry
you were the only one who were'nt born with the will of fire
it was a pointless training you
But there's a other reason why i threw you in the volcano
So that's why i did it
why I pushed the volcano into you
But how come that your still alive
I dont really know.
while i was in the volcano a loud strange voice told me that i was special with a fire element hidden inside of me.
SO ITS TRUE THAT YOU HAVE SPECIAL POWERS"said emmanuel's father
so you wanna say you threw me in that volcano because i had special powers
Yes my son but dont get me wrong.
it was for the village safety
People thought that could'nt control the powers and destroy the village
THats everything i can tell you.
Well said emmanuel
I STILL CANT FORGIVE YOU, DIE!
*emmanuel draws his sword choped his father's head*
*emmanuel loses control*
aggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Chapter 2:the aftermath.
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Miyagi Aori
Joined: 01 Nov 2005
Posts: 2101
PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 10:17 am
Where to begin...
- You cannot start out as an Uchiha, bloodlines are applied for at genin level
-You start out as an academy student
-The name "Emmanuel" is no where near a japanese name.
-You do not start out with ANY jutsus
Quote:
Alliance:Milly,wawan,Huchiga Narockara,Uchiha Sasuke
No, no, no and most definitely NO. The first three names do not make any sense and Canon Naruto characters do not exist on Ninpocho
-Your history lacks proper spelling, grammar, punctuation, capitalization and sense.
Permanently denied for Leaf
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Glossary
uchiha emmanuel
Joined: 19 May 2007
Posts: 1
Jobs: Unemployed
Clan:None
Alliance:Milly,wawan,Huchiga Narockara,Uchiha Sasuke
Age:13
Gender:Male
Hair color:dark
gets all spiky yellow when he unleashes the fire element powers
Looks:Quiet,Nothing special
Height:1.75
Personality:Quiet,minding his own buissiness
Likes:Everyone who cares for him
Dislikes: The people that are trying to kill him
Crushes:milly
Ninja Class: Genin
Skills:
Fire absorbtion
Fire teqniques
sjuinjhekhi No Jutsu
Kawarmi No Jutsu
Specialites: To absorb fire attacks from the opponent and reflect it with even more power
Special moves: Fire reflector No Jutsu
Brief Summary of Character: Very High