a/n: I never really understood why Veronica killed off Tris, which, I guess is the whole reason I wrote the alternate endings. And… I guess… here's another one. Let me know if I should continue this story. I'll work hard to make sure this has as much detail as I can possibly get into it. If I get three reviews by the second asking me to update, I will. This is all in Tobias POV.
Tobias POV
The mission took less time than I expected, and we get back to the compound to find Caleb waiting for us. Wait. What? Didn't he go into the lab/
I run to the lab, my gut telling me that Tris is either already dead or dying. I am running out of time.
I run through the hall outside the lab, and push open the door, just as David fires at Tris. Blood pools from her neck, and I fire at David. Tris collapses to the floor.
Tris. No. She can't die. I begin to panic, but I still fight it off in a matter of seconds, and crouch in front of her. These are her dying moments. And I don't want her to spend them alone. She manages to groan out my name. and I know I can't leave her here.
"Hold on, brave girl. I'm going to carry you to the hospital. Just hold on. Just hold on. For me."
Tears stab my eyes as I lift her gently in my arms, and start running towards the hospital. Halfway there, Tris starts to lose contiousness.
"No. Tris, stay with me. Please. I need to see you are alive. I need you to hold on. It'll only be another second. Please, love, hold on."
a/n: let me know if I should continue. And please read and review my other fics. Thanks and see ya!
Emmabeth.