"May Prove a Beauteous Flower When We Next Meet"
A/N: Ashley is not going to be in on this one, this is my own idea, I just had to write a fic on Romeo and Juliet, I love it.
But it's so tragic sob (this may be why its called a tragedy)
I thought this could be interesting, it is written to be fun, so dont take it too seriously, im not really that great (especially with the thee and thou thingI'm only trying)and don't pretened to be,I just want to share an idea.
Just wanted to let you know this first chapter will be mostly (almost all) quotes in my own order, just to set up the plot. I do not pretend to be shakespeare, so give me a break. It all seems unoriginal now but just wait!
( ) are notes from me.
Disclaimer: I do not own Romeo and Juliet (If you thought so I'd be worried) It belongs to a dead guy Shakespeare (or at lest some relative, all that's important is I don't own it, that's all I' trying to say really if ya think about it).
Chapter one: A flower left to bud
We come in as Romeo is swearing his love to Julie in the balcony scene
"It is too rash, too unadvised, too sudden, too like the lightning, which doth cease to be ere one can say 'it lightens.'" It was hard to say through the sudden passion filling her but Juliet had a weird feeling it would be better for both this way. "This bud of love, by summer's ripening breath, may prove a beauteous flower when next we meet. Good night, good night! May sweet repose and rest come to thy heart as that within my breast!" Juliet tuned to leave, but stopped as the voice she so adored called out to her.
"O, wilt thou leave me so unsatisfied?"
"Yes I do as I see fit!" it angered her that he didn't trust her judgment, "Three words and good night indeed!" when Juliet saw dejected look on Romeos face she immediately regretted her words.
Seeking to give him hope she tried to tell him how she felt ,however sudden or ridiculous her new emotions where. "My love is deep but still new. I would but let it stand times test, and try your heart!"
As she finished this though a call came from within the house "I hear some noise within; dear love adieu!" Juliet herd a second call "Hold nurse I'll be soon! Sweet Montague, If that thy bent of love be honorable, be true. I will that we should meet again!"
A discernable and irritated call came from within "Juliet!"
"I come anon good nurse," leaving she called back, "a peaceful sweet good night my love!"
"Juliet!" Romeo called again, not yet completely secure in leaving her.
"Yes dear Romeo?" She called back happy he still wanted to see her.
"Bright angel leave me not, you go too soon! It is my soul that calls upon thy name, not another." He just wanted to hear her once more.
"I wish it where." Juliet replied sincerely wishing it "But I must go by and by, though parting is such sweet sorrow that I shall say good night till it be morrow!"
"And I shall stay to have thee still speak forgetting any other home but this!" oh how he wished he could.
"A thousand times good night." Juliet whispered urgently willing him to leave, she could hear the angry footsteps of her nurse approaching.
"A thousand times worse to want thy light." Romeo whispered withdrawing at the urgent sound in her voice, but still hesitating.
At these sweet words Juliet rejoiced and in reply quickly tossed a piece of cloth,which hadpreviously heldher hair up, to him. She turned quickly in hopes of preventing her nurse from finding Romeo by beating her to the door.
Romeo looked closely at the cloth favor and gently examined the hand stitched name and rose embroidered on the materialbefore carefully tucking it into his pocket. He withdrew, staring back at the place she recently stood until it went out of view.
A/N: So how was it? Review please! I know this one wasn't so original but what can I say? Can one pass up the opportunity to manipulate the beautiful words of Shakespeare to one's own will(however ineptly it may be)? Nay I say! I Promise more originality in the next chapter! likeI said this was just to set it up, I'm doing my best it will get better!For now adieu! Oh and review, or it may result in thumb biting!