Hey guys,
So if you got an email saying I updated this story, you are not mistake and don't have to check your email settings. I really am. I missed writing for this story, and re-read it over the summer, and realized that I honestly had a good story plot but it could have been better written, so here we go!
Keep in mind that this story takes place 3 years after the coordination.
Okay, this is the second version.
Setting: Mal's Dorm
Third Person POV-
Evie had just left to go study with Doug, and Ben had come over and they were talking about the next step in the realtionship, Mal knew she loved Ben, but she was worried. It's not that she wasn't ready, it was that she didn't want Ben to get in trouble, cause they are in Aurodon and she knew that they usually wait until marriage. And yes they have been together for 3 years, and that tends to mean marriage, but still the council would not be happy.
"Ben do you really think this is good idea?"
"Yes, don't you? I mean we have been together for 3 years now. Don't you trust me? That I wouldn't do anything to hurt you?"
"Well yes I do trust you and I do know that you wouldn't do anything to hurt me. I am just concerned for you, what if Evie walks in, and she tells everybody in the whole school, including Audrey, I mean she is still kind of mad at me for "stealing" you from her 3 years ago. Then the council finds out and they make you step down from the thrown. And plus I don't know if I am ready for this. I mean yeah I am a 19 year old girl but the way I was raised and the person who raised me still gives me some doubts."
"First of all, I don't care what school thinks. Second of all who cares what the council thinks of me. I mean I am pretty sure that they still I am crazy, cause yes you worked out, but what about the group we had to send back? So I honestly couldn't careless. Third of all, we can wait if you are not ready."
"Thank you. (Walks over and gives him a kiss on the cheek) So... I was wondering you know that school ball that is coming up?"
"Yeah. Why are you asking about it?"
"Well, I was thinking that because I am the kings girlfriend would I have to come to this sort of thing?"
"Yes. Why you don't want to go?"
"No, it's not that I just don't think I will fit in. I mean sure it has been three years since I came here but there are some people here who still hate me."
"I know but it will be fine. I mean all the princes and or princess will be on their best behavior at this ball because their parents are going to be there and they don't want their parents to know they are stuck up, snobby jerks, when they aren't around."
"That is true. Okay, I will go. Now if you'll excuse me I have to go ask Evie if she will make a dress for me."
"Okay, Bye. I'll see you tomorrow."
Setting: The Hallway
"Hi BennyBoo."
"Oh... Hi Audrey. And we have been over this... I am not your boyfriend anymore, so you can't keep calling me BennyBoo. Not to mention, I hate it."
"Oh... sorry. So I was thinking you know how we are the president and vice president of the school council?"
"yeah?" He responded rasing an eyebrow.
"Well, why don't we go to dinner and discuss what we should do for the school ball next month?"
"Is this another one of your tricks make me think we are going out to dinner to discuss something professional, but you try and make like a date? Because if it is.."
"No, it's not. I gave up on this tricks months ago."
"Good..okay, I guess. I will see at King's restaurant tonight at 7:30pm?"
"Sure, see you then. Well, I have to go to a dress fitting for the ball next month. So I will meet you there. Bye Ben."
"Bye Audrey." 'What was that about?' He thought as he walked away.
Setting: Mal and Evie's Dorm
"Hey Mal." She stated as she walked in and closed the door.
"Hey Evie. So... I was wondering if you could design a dress for me for the ball next month?"
"I would love to! So does this mean that your going to the ball for Ben?"
"Yes, you know me so well."
"Yeah I do, don't I?"
"So I am going to need the dress a week before the ball. Are you going to be able to finish it by then?"
"Oh... please I could finish the dress by next week if I had to."
"Okay. Well, I am going to study for the biology test tomorrow in the library."
"Okay. But do me a favor when you come back? Nock on the door when your ready to come in so I know and I can hide the dress. I don't want you to see it just yet."
"Okay, bye."
Okay, so that is the first revised chapter for now, I can't really change the first chapter too much, but the other chapters you can expect a lot of changes. Man I can't believe how much my writing has changed in just over a year..
So tell me if you want to see something that didn't happen in the first version. And I will see what I can do.. Wow. It feels really good to be writing for this story again.
Until Next Time,
~Bella
