( hey people me kc uuumm this is my first story so tell me what you think try not to be too harsh but be honest)

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FANG'S P.O.V

Eyes open head up just five more minutes and it's iggys watch man for a blind kid sure gets around like he's not. My eyes hurt i have'nt sleep yet, i have been up a long time and

the second shift is always the longest. Max had the first her beautiful lond dark brown hair covering halve of her face the other halve liten from the moon-light she was so beautiful

how could she not know it. I wished she was closer so i could hear her breath, and watch those perfect breast of hers rise and fall as her breath travaled throgh her body. Man

she was stuborn and tough i shifted my body on the ground i rememberd when she kissed me at the beach and in the cave then flashes of her perfect body on top of mine after ari

kicked my ass all over the beach. I got up walked toward iggy tapped him twice on the shoulder teling him it was his shift. Max put her head into her hands i walked over whats

wrong she looked back at me. Can i show you something i took her hand thrusting my wings out it felt good how the wind brushed throgh the tips. I loved that her body was

once again close to mine and how me and max were flying as one. She had to ruin the moment there she was bossing me around telling me to let her go that she could fly by

herself. I know i answerd back but i like it better with you close to me. She blushed shaking her head making her hair fall in front of her face trying to cover her cheaks even

though she knows i saw her blush. But i tried to give max what she wanted i only argude when i knew someything was wrong or when i would try to flirt with her and just end up

pissing her off. I landed at the top af a cliff i sat down on a fallen tree log i put my hand on one side instructing her to sit next to me she did. Look max we have to talk about

what happend at the cave tilting my head to the floor trying to avoid eye-contact with her. Then before i could say another word she pulled my head in and kissed me what was

happing was this real was, it her clone was, i,dreaming my eyes halfe lite with lust. She stood up i hope that answer you question she said walking to the edge of the clif,

unfurling her wings and diving of the cliff grabbing air current and flew back to camp

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