Fullmetal59: Ok I've been thinking about this story for some time now and it won't come out of my head. So please be nice.
Through Lucifer's Eyes
Ch. 1
We Had A Deal
He tossed and turned through the night.
' huh, where am I?' All he could see was fire. Fire surrounding everything. ' Hello Edward.' He turned around to see someone or something watching him. ' You? But why?'
' You forgot already Ed? You're part of me now.'
' What are you talking about.' Ed heard the thing sigh. ' Remember, we had a deal.'
He screamed. He looked over to his clock on his nightstand. It read: 7:30 A.M. He sighed and walked to the bathroom. He grabbed a small towel from the pole and wet it down. Hot beads of sweat mixed with the cold water as it ran down his face. He took a long look at himself with the towel covering half of his face. There was a soft knock on the door. He heard Al's voice on the other side. " Brother, are you all right? I heard you scream."
" Yeah, I'm fine." Ed walked out the door and into his room, completely ignoring Al's question about the water on his face. He went to his dresser and put on a black longsleeve shirt with white trimming, a button up short sleeve red shirt over it, and black cargo pants.
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She woke up bright and early for her first day of school. She was so excited. She headed straight for her dresser and put on a green and white shirt with blue jeans. She heard her mom call from downstairs, " Winry! You're gonna be late! Hurry Up!" She looked at the clock and saw it was 8:30 A.M. She grabbed her backpack, her book, and ran out the door.
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Ed walked through the doors to Sanford High School. He squeezed through the busy hallway until he reached his locker. " Man, these halls are way too crowded," he said as he put in his combination. " Hey look it's the freak." Ed looked to the side only to see Russell. " Don't you have anything better to do Russell?" Ed said annoyed. " No, not really," he replied putting in his combination. Ed put his combination a second time since it didn't seem to be working. He kept on hitting the locker. " What's wrong loser?" Ed just ignored him and headed for the office.
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He walked through the office door. " Umm, excuse me sir?" The name plate read: Maes Hughs. " Ah, Edward, what seems to be the problem?"
" My locker combination isn't working."
" Well that's weird. Why don't you try again?"
" I tried three times already."
" Well then try again." Ed sighed and walked towards the door. As soon as he opened the door he ran into someone. " Sorry!" She said. He noticed she dropped her book so he bend down to grab it. " It's alright." They both stopped when they pulled up there heads to look at eachother. They both blushed and Ed handed her the book. " Um, here you go."
" Thanks. Oh yeah, Mr. Hughs, I can't find my locker." Ed started walking out the door only to be stopped again. " Oh, Ed, I know why your combination doesn't work." He turned around. " Why?"
" Because it's her locker now." Ed looked at her and she looked at him. " Oh, well then, where's my locker?"
" Don't worry, it's not like on the other side of the hall or anything. It's next to your old locker."
" Oh ok." He started to walk away but was stopped once again. " Hey Edward, can you show her where her locker is, and her classes?"
" Um, sure, why not? C'mon," he said gesturing her to follow.
Once they were out the door she said, " Hold on." He stopped and turned around. " What?"
" I'm Winry Rockbell," she stated sticking out her hand. " I'm Edward--" Once he touched her hand, for a split second, her hand looked like the brightest light he ever saw, while his was a dark crimson red with fire surrounding his hand with long nails. He quickly moved his hand away. " --Elric."
" Is something wrong?" She asked concerned. " No, I'm, uh, just a little shy. That's all." He laughed nervously. " You sure?"
" Yeah. So c'mon, let me get you to your locker."
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