CHAPTER 1
Well oh my god, it's the First Chapter!
I would be absolutely STOKED to get any reviews at all on this.. 0 is fine. I remember reading many stories and not giving ONE review until the last chapter that they wrote just complaining and asking WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE?
FYI'S:
:.:Hayama's thought bubbles:.:
Actions/Noises/Feelings
+Sana's thought Bubbles+
(Babbit! Me!)
THE HAYAMA'S
BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP!
6:00 A.M.
Hayama's eyes shot straight open and he got up quickly. He made a swifter then Sailor Moon outfit morph into his Karate Gi. He was preparing for his routinely morning practices. He quietly creeps downstairs, opens the screen door to his backyard, cautious not to wake anyone up. Then for a half an hour all to be heard were the early morning chirps, the slight sway of trees and some "Ah's; Oh's and Hya's!" coming from Akito.
:.:There's only one week of summer left:.:
:.:No way am I getting up this early when school starts:.:
He stopped for a moment just to reminisce (remember) his best friend, Sana Kurata's, sleep schedule and how she was ALWAYS sleeping in and late for class. He got back to practice almost as soon as he stopped though.
SHLLLOP
Akito Hears the screen door open, he sees his father is up early today and stops practicing again.
"Ohaiyo, Akito."
"Yo," (when he says 'yo', it's very calm, not like YOOO what's up---? You know? The Hayama-Japanese way)
"Still practicing, are you?"
nod
"You've done very well, I am proud to see you've made it very close to black belt. What keeps you going, son?"
stare
"There are higher ranks then black belt, Oto-san."
"Ah. I see. Well good luck with that. Father has to go to work early today but that also mean he might have an earlier return, maybe around four or five. Remember, I have a business trip for the weekend so you should talk to Natsumi to discuss what plans you have so she can know in advance, alright?"
nod
"Good then, see you later."
nod
It was useless now, Akito couldn't concentrate on practicing, and he didn't even have any important Karate meeting for a while. He snorted at his father's earlier statement: 'Tell Natsumi your plans.'
:.:Natsumi will be way too busy to listen to me for that.:.:
:.:I wonder how Kurata is doing..:.:
Then he quickly dismisses the thought from his mind. It's 6:27; He decides to take a shower. The thought quickly comes back.
:.:She's doing a commercial today, isn't she.:.:
:.:Sounds like I won't be able to see her:.:
sigh
When finished with his bath-like duties. (Yum-yum had to say it) He was freshly brushed, pampered, smelled good and all that jazz(including eating breakfast)(and he was NOT naked while eating it). He walks back into his room and puts on a black T-shirt, a Blue sports jacket with white sleeves and khaki pants (the style is your choice --;)
That's about when he notices that the A button on his Burrucha was lit.
:.:The HECK:
:.:Not in all my time of knowing her has she EVER been up so early.. Unless there was an emergency…:.:
The Kurata's
What the heck, I beeped him forever ag-+
"Yo!"
"Hayama! You made it!" (in record time)
"Yeah I realized, what do you need, where's the fire?"
"There's a fire?"
--
"Well never mind about that; Hayama!"
"Ah?"
"Would you.. Like to come with me to my commercial shoot today? Pretty please, Rei will take me there but he has to leave early on a date with Asako and I don't want to be all lonely'n stuff.."
"Do I have to?"
"Awww come on, Hayama you know you were bored out of your MIND's wits without me. ("No I'm still pretty bored,") You were completely lost until you came here. What did you just say..?"
Sana: Grin
red mallet prepared
"Betsuni."
"Ahh, I thought so," spots Rei "Rei-Kun! We're ready to go now!"
Rei walks through the front door.
"Hai, Miss San—"
Rei thinks: Ahh, Hayama Monster is here!
Akito: "Yo."
Rei thinks: Him and his sly ways of being polite, he's just doing that to impress Miss. Sana isn't he? He is a really creepy kid.
"Well it's a bit of a long drive from here, so we should get going.."
"Haiii!" :D
nod
THE HAYAMA'S
8:30
Natsumi wakes up! (Fwooshaaaa!)
After preparing breakfast she calls the family down for it.
"Oto-san-! Akito-!"
7 minutes go by
"Nani, nani?"
Natsumi walks over to the message board.
(You know, one of those boards that kind of look like they're made of out the same material that cork-screws were made out of that you put thumb tacks in for misc. purposes)
She sees:
Be Home around 5!
Be back when I feel like it.
-- "And just what am I going to do with three servings of pancakes, eggs, bacon AND watermelon. That's not easy to come by and now it's all ruined!"
random figure bursts through kitchen window
"Yo Natsu-!"
FRYING PAN TO THE FACE! (still hot too!)
"Oro, oro? Yoshi-? Ahhh! Gomen!"
Yoshi: still unconscious.
(confused? Natsumi's new boyfriend!)
BACK IN REI'S CAR
8:52
"Don't worry, we still have plenty of time, the shoot doesn't start until 11:00 so I'm going to make a quick stop at my friend's house."
At in sync times
"Don't you mean girlfriend?"
:.:Don't you mean girlfriend:.:
stares at Sana
:.:w/e:.:
"Oh well um," Blush "yes I guess you could say that."
"Rei, don't tell me you're still fidgety over her.. You're an adult you should be used to her, don't you still love her? Did she break up with you?"
:.:shh..:.:
"Oh no, no, nothing like that. It's just a little strange since she's always so busy. It sometimes doesn't really seem like we're really a couple anymore."
a little gloomy
"But that's alright because today we're going on a date, thank you for letting us do this, Sana-Chan!" glee
:.:whatever happened to miss. Sana:.: (it'll differ the (proof, no capitalization)lazier I get, Ha-ya-ma-kun.)
"No problem, Rei-Kun!"
:.:eck:.: (burrrn)
Rei: "That also means, Hayama-kun, that you must treat Sana as first priority while I'm gone,"
:.:eh:.:
"Aah, I mean.. Yeah, sure."
"Really Hayama-kun I mean it, one single strand plucked from her little head!" protective dad mode
Rei.. 3+
:.:You don't have to tell me twice..:.:
pride somewhat hurt in a way
At around 9:20 they picked up Asako from her apartment complex and made their way to the studio. Things were a little uncomfortable when Ms. Kurumi got in the car. It even made Akito's cheetah nature die down a bit.
I hope nothing bad is happening between those two..+
AT THE STUDIO
10:15
"OOOH Sana-chan 3! I'm so happy for you; you're finally getting into some big commercials. Next thing we know you'll be in PG-13 movies and a Broadway classical! Ohh Sana you've grown up so much!" tear
(if you don't remember this is Sana's regular rather fruity sounding hair dresser whom I think has a crush on Rei)
"Wh-why thank you Suzi-san! But I don't think I am going to get into anything…too major anytime soon."
sitting at a nearby table
:.: hopefully:.:
Sana's finished look: Her beautiful reddish-brown hair was put into a bun with a few locks left out and three of them were high-lighted white. She was placed in an old-fashioned farmer girl plaid pink(the other color to make the plaid work is white) dress. A golden locket rested just above her collar bone, her shoes were some rather boyish but adorable with the outfit, black boots with laces (NOT like rain boots!)
Hayama just stared at her fixedly.
"Well Miss Sana, it's about time we, eh, Asako and I got going, so I'll be back around... let's say 2 o'clock? Would that be ok? Incase you finish early here's some money for you two just to go around town, if you do finish early make sure to buzz me by 2!"
"Hai Rei-Kun!" big hug
:.:just leave:.:
"Ok, ja-ne Sana, Hayama."
S:D
A:/
"Hayama!"
"Nani?"
"Remember, You have to keep track of all my feathers or else!"
o0
:.:did she mean her hair..:.:
"Ahh I got to go!"
"Ah."
:.:I'll look after you..:.:
(not too corny?)
'COMMERCIAL TIME--!'
Director: "Ok, this is how the whole productions going to go, don't worry, there aren't any lines just do as I say."
Everyone, especially Sana: "Hai!"
Director: "All right this is going to be a preview for the movie based on a best-selling novel "Kowai no Iinazuke". The actress playing the part that Sana is in the movie couldn't make it here today so I apologize, Ms. Kurata for making this so last notice."
"No program!"
ah problem, whatever+
"Eh sure, now let's get started people. Come on out Kisho!"
From behind Sana came a boy with plain brown hair and crystal beautiful blue eyes. His hair style was very similar to Akito's, almost a mirror image. His face and hair looked very clean and well kept though it had been rumpled around with to blend with his role. He looked about 18 or 19 years old. He had a mostly white with dark blue lines plaid, shirt, a little open at the top and tight blue jeans. He was very handsome.
Sana didn't seem to notice this. She just smiled.:D
Kisho slightly blushed, she had a pretty smile, but then soon got over it.
"So I finally get to meet the Sana. What a fine shoujo."
Hayama: not taking this well
:.: Where do you get off saying that to some girl you've barely just met, if I hadn't promised not to cause an--… Promises:.:
"It's a rare site, something so lovely and innocent."
he bends down to give her a kiss on the cheek
Hayama puts his hand in the way and that's where the kiss lands DENIED! (AND to make it clear not everyone is watching them, they're all getting the set ready)
Kisho seemed unaffected: "Excuse me," Hayama's hand still in front of his face.
"No, excuse me. I apologize but you see, I am Sana's temporary bodyguard and am instructed to protect her from anything, especially anybody." (Chyea right!)
Hayama...+ doesn't really want dramatics right now
"Oh I see. How rude of me, then MAY I place a kiss upon this fine maiden's lips?"
:.: Oho, lips now:.:
What+
"Fat chance."
"Then let's take that chance."
The fight seemed to be more a conflict over to show who, who's who (;) rather then protecting Sana.
Hey who wants to know MY opinion+
"I see. What did you say your name was?"
HEY+
"I didn't."
Sana runs forward.
"Hayama!"grabs onto the back of his shirt with both hands
"Uh?" (tee-hee)
"It's ok Hayama, he's just really friendly and outgoing."
Psst: "What if I don't like friendly and outgoing?"
"Deal with it."
:.: I think more around the lines "flirtatious prick.":.:
Kisho gave Hayama one last smirk before they were all (except Hayama) called out to the stage. The stage was fully set now so it was time for the Director to tell them what they were about to do.
I don't REALLY think he's such a bad guy+
"Alright, most previews are made after the movie is fully filmed but these two characters," points to Kisho and Sana "Have their own exclusive scenes in the movie apart from the other characters so it's ok to tape it separately from the movie and finishing some things before the movie make it just that much easier."
At 11:30 they started the filming. The smell of new plastic and the heat from all the fluorescent lights, this was a studio. In no time they taped a few scenes of them running away from something, sitting on a grassy hill in the sunrise. A night scene where it was cold outside so Kisho gave his jacket to Sana, then soon wrapped his arm around her. Everyone in the room made quiet 'awws' so not to disturb the film but one person looked so concentrated angry he looked like he was being forced to keep a porcupine down his pants. Akito. (Duh.)
"1… 2… and— CUT! Great job you two, I can't believe it, and every scene only took one try! This is great we're going so much faster then planned. Obviously it's due to Kisho's and Sana's combined acting skills. You two sync so well!"
Kisho: stares at sana
Akito: not appreciating it
I think we could really be good friends, Kisho and I. Like me and Naozumi……… I miss Naozumi+
Sana: big smile at Kisho
(I think Akito might implode.. ;)
Director: "All right, now for the last scene of the preview commercial! The kiss scene!"
Sana: Freezes up
Akito..+
This looks sort of necessary so
Hai- Yes; Gomen- Sorry; Kisho- One who knows his own mind
Kowai no Iinazuke- A scary or the scary Fiancée
Implode- an inner explosion
Shoujo- a BEAUTIFUL girl
Ohaiyo- Hello; Good Morning
If you're reading anime fanfics you should know all this!
Also.. I think I might get my ass chewed out because my format is so confusing! Well don't blame me! Fanfictions won't let me have the star or the squiggly line icon which is what I am SO used to using! Well hopefully as the chapters go along, you'll begin to understand.
