Okay my first Ratchet fic. I hope you guys enjoy!
Chapter 1
Medical Attention
"Hey Allison!" yelled a female's voice. Allison turned around and found her good friend Brenda running towards her.
"Hey Brenda…what's the matter?" she asked.
Brenda looked at her and said, "We're going to the fair tonight and was curious if you would like to come."
Allison looked at her and said, "I don't know…I sorta had plans tonight."
"Oh come on! We'll have fun! A lot of fun, you know riding on the Man of Steel!"
Allison loved the fair, but…her grandmother was sick and she wanted to be with her at all times to make sure she was okay. Of course everyone else was with her grandma, but…she felt the closest to her than anyone else she had met. "Brenda…as I said I have plans."
Brenda just stood there and watched as Allison walked towards her home. She let out a sigh…She's got to have some fun in her life…I mean…she's been hanging around her grandma for months. Brenda shook her head and started walking the other direction.
Allison made it to her grandma's house and saw her walking around. "Grandma?"
"Hey deary, how are you?" her grandmother asked.
"I'm good…are you feeling better?"
"Oh yes. A new doctor came by today and did some really weird stuff and he told me that I would be able to walk soon enough. And now here I am. I'm walking perfectly!"
Allison smiled at her grandma and hugged her. "Now deary…you've been watching me all this time I think you should go to the fair and spend time with your friends. They must miss you terribly."
"Yeah you're right. Brenda had asked me to go to the fair today."
"Well then go dear. You'll have so much fun."
Allison smiled and hugged her grandma again and then asked, "What was the doctor's name?"
"Um…He said he went by Doctor R."
"That's it?"
"That's it I'm afraid….I don't know how he knew me or how he knew I was sick, but I wouldn't mind having him as my doctor again."
Allison smiled and walked out the door and just ran into her friend Brenda. "Hey Brenda…I was curious…could I still come with you guys to the fair tonight?"
Brenda started laughing and said, "I had just came over here to talk to your grandma about that."
"Well she's much better now a new doctor came along and healed her."
"Really?"
"Yeah…it really was amazing. I had never seen her that happy in all my life. Whatever that doctor did he saved her life."
Brenda started laughing and said, "Come on let's go."
Allison and her friend walked to the fair and met up with all their other friends. They hadn't seen each other since they graduated which was around two years ago. College had been taking most of everyone's time. But since no one was taking any summer classes it was the perfect time to meet up.
"So how's college treating you Terrell?" asked Allison.
"Ah…not bad Ally. Not bad at all. You?"
"I'm actually studying abroad….I'm going to America."
Everyone stopped what they were doing and said, "America?"
"Yeah. I've always thought it would be cool to go over there, plus I have a cousin working over there."
"Maggie?"
"Yeah…I would really love to see her since I really haven't had time in the past. I'll be living at her house and going to go to college not far from there."
"Interesting…you better keep in touch." Brenda said point at her chest.
"I will, don't worry."
After that was said all three of them went on rides and rode the night away. "You ready to go on the Man of Steel?" exclaimed Brenda.
"Yeah!" Brenda yelled out.
When the ride ended the two went on. It was their turn. They started flying around and around, "Hey!" Terrell exclaimed, "Let's see who cane lift themselves up the farthest."
"You're on!"
The ride slowly started and when it sped up the friends tried to pull themselves up. Of course it was nearly impossible to do. When the ride ended they jumped off and saw a new ride. It went round in circles. "The dragon." whispered Brenda.
"Let's ride." whispered Terrell.
All three of them ran to the ride and waited in the short line. Once they were able to go on they all screamed as they went upside down. But then something happened. Everyone heard a crack of some sort. They all looked around and looked at Ally. Her eyes were big. "What's the matter?"
"I just broke my arm."
Both Brenda and Terrell pulled up her shirt and saw the bone peaking through the skin. "Oh my."
Ally started hyperventilating and started screaming from the pain. The ride quickly stopped and the man who was running the ride said, "We need a medic!"
Quickly a medical hummer came drove over and a young man walked out. He came over to her and saw the arm. He filled up a vile of anesthesia and injected it into her. She quickly fell asleep and the doctor push the bone back in place.
"Why aren't you taking her to a hospital?" asked Brenda.
The man looked up at her and said, "Because…I can actually fix it here. I see everything that needs to be done."
"American…all of you are the same." spoke out.
The doctor looked up at him and said, "Do you want me to help your friend or not?"
The two went silent and he quickly fixed her arm. He did a scan on the rest of her body and said, "Well…help me bring her in the back of the hummer."
"I have never seen one of these before."
"And this will be the only one you'll ever see. I got it custom made." With that they hauled Ally into the back and the man closed the door. He let out a huge sigh and said, "You humans ride dangerous rides and get hurt. I don't see why."
He then started doing other scans on her body. She had dislocated her shoulder too. This one did major damage to her body. He pushed the shoulder back in place and a few minutes after he did that she started to awake. "Stay down you're still injured."
"Who are you?"
"My name is Doctor Ratchet…what's your name?"
"Allison White." she replied.
"Well Miss White it seems you have done some stuff that made your arm break. The ride was the thing. I wouldn't advise going on it again."
"Believe me I won't…I'm going to have to go to America soon anyways I can't afford any more injuries."
"America huh? What for?" he asked.
"Studying abroad."
"Interesting. Well I hope to run into you over in America then."
"Where do you live in America?"
"I live in Nevada close to California." he opened the back and helped her out. "Until we meet again Miss White."
With that said Dr. Ratchet got in the hummer and drove off. "Wow…That doctor from America was so hot…are all of them like that I wonder." thought Brenda out loud.
Well there you go. Now you decide if it stays up or not. I really didn't feel comfortable with it, but Hope you guys like it.
