Chapter 1: How I was born (updated)
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(Chapter 1 edits: the "large text" was spaced out so it's more clearer, minor text corrections)
~ Author's note ~
Before you all read this chapter, i just wanted to say that thisis my first time writing a story so if you guys know how i can improve for the for future chapters and stories, you can tell me with a review or you can pm me! I won't take up anymore of your time so, Enjoy!
[Edited] I've edited this chapter so there will no longer be as much errors as there used to be...
Jolty: so Ana how long do you think it'll be before they hatch?
Ana: Well it's been a week so I assumed they will hatch soon... And we still need to think of a good name for them.
Jolty: well, I think that we'll have a male and a female so I assume that we should call the boy; shadow and the girl; sandy, what do you think?
Ana: Well, someone's been thinking.
Jolty: Yeah, well it's the first I'm a father so I want to make sure they're happy with us...
Ana: ...It's okay, you worry too much. I'm sure you'll be a great father.
Jolty: I guess so.
Ana: I'm lucky to have a Jolteon like you as they're father.
Jolty: And for a glaceon, you do care about others, especially for your family.
Ana: Well, I want live like an average happy family with you *nudges Jolty*
Jolty: well I guess we do make great parents...
*an egg cracks open*
Ana: *hugs jolty tightly* Jolt, they're hatching!
Jolty: Can't... Breathe...
Ana: Oh sorry, * let's go off Jolty* I guess I got a bit excited...
Jolty: It's okay, anyways looks like we got a male eevee so I'll call him shadow
Ana: Ok... So what made you come up with that name?
Jolty: I don't know it was the first name I thought of...
Shadow's POV
The first thing I notice after opening my eyes (and hearing them talk) were two other pokemon, one of them was yellow and the other was a light blue color. I gave them a confused and said
"Mom? Dad?"
And then one of them said
"That's right, I'm your father Jolty and also a Jolteon, an electric type. And the one next to me is your mother, Ana and she's a Glaceon, an ice type and we're both your parents", said in a proud voice.
So turns out that my dad was a Jolteon and my mom a Glaceon, but why do they look different then me?
"Dad, if your my parents, then why do you look different then me?", and my dad replied
"Well a long time ago I looked a lot like you, until I evolved",
" evolved?" I said in a confused tone,
"yeah, when it happens your appearance changes and you get a bit stronger",
"sounds like fun!" I said in an excited tone, just then I remembered what they were talking about earlier so I decided to ask them "mom, dad what were you talking about earlier?", this time my mom was talking
"oh, we were just talking about what were going to call you, and you dad said that your name is going to be...", until she was interrupted by my dad, "shadow",
shadow? That's a cool name they gave me! "Wow that's a cool name!", then I heard my mom say
"you sound just like your dad, your dad is cheerful almost all the time just like you are now!",
"wait I have I always been so cheerful?", said my dad
"yes, ever since the day I met you Jolty, you've always been so cheerful and that's what I like about you"
"well, my mom said the same thing about me when I was an eevee" and the next thing I saw was them kissing each other, yuck, that's gross, I thought, while they were kissing I decided to explore the den a bit and well it wasn't that small, the entrance was big enough for an ursaring to enter and it lead a bit towards the back towards an entrance towards the small room we were at, except the entrance was hidden from the outside that could only be seen if they came towards the back of the cave, my thoughts were suddenly interrupted by they sound of cracking and I looked back towards were my parents were as I saw another egg, which I realised that I didn't even noticed it, I ran up next to my parents as I heard them say,
"Jolty, look the other one is hatching!", the next thing I saw was the egg break and I saw another Pokemon look just like me, except it was a bit smaller then me, and it opened they're eyes and it saw me, then me dad said
" yep, just as I thought it's a female so I'll call her sandy!",
"Well looks like you were right Jolty"
a female? So it's a she? I saw her look at me for a moment with a smile on her face until she said
"hello"
her voice was higher then mine, I responded "hello?", I didn't know who she was so I looked towards my parents with a confused look and she did the same thing
"Jolty, you may want to explain it to them"
"Right, well shadow let me introduce you to your sister Sandy, Sandy this is your brother Shadow, I'm Jolty a Jolteon and also you father, and the Glaceon beside me is your mother Ana"
the next thing she said was "hi mom and dad!"
Well looks like she sound happy with our parents, then she turned towards me and said
"hi brother" brother? Never thought I had a sister to look after
"hey sister" she giggled as soon as I said that, then she went to hug mom as she returned it...
#TheRedUmbreon: I'll end the chapter here since it's already midnight (I've edited the chapter the week after I uploaded it, so hopefully there arent any mistakes) and I wanted to start this story before I go to sleep so since I've finally started it I can finally go to sleep *falls asleep in chair*
Shadow: *smirks* Sweet dreams, I'll take it from here...
#TheRedUmbreon: *snores*
Shadow: Since the author's asleep I will finish writing this part of the story, what he wanted to say was "if you have anything to say that will help the author improve for future chapters make sure to tell him with a review, Thanks" and with that said, I'll write the end with how red umbreon would like it... meanwhile I'll go find a towel and see how many towels will fit in his mouth andways, peace.
Thanks4Reading
#Shadow (the one writing since the author is asleep and was pushed of the chair by me and is now on the ground with towels in his mouth...)