This is my first fanfic so constructive criticism would be nice.
3rd Person POV
Central Park, Battle of Manhattan
Percy Jackson had just kicked Hyperion into place when all the satyrs took up the tone Grove set and the eyrie melody flowed through Central Park.
The bark started growing around Hyperion's ankles while he screamed bloody murder.
"I will kill you all, I am Hyperion you can't trap me in some useless tr-"Hyperion screamed
Right before the bark covered his face Percy ran up and stabbed riptide through the tree right where Hyperion's heart would be. The last they saw of Hyperion was his face contorted in pain.
"Percy was that really necessary?"Grover asked
"No but it was payback for throwing me into a building"Percy replied
Time Skip
Olympus throne room, battle with Kronos
Luke had just retaken control over his body and yelled to Percy.
"My Achilles heel is in my armpit, quickly before he retakes control"Luke yelled.
He undid his strap on his armpit revealing his Achilles heel.
"Are you ready?" Percy asked while positioning riptide on Luke's armpit.
"As ready as i'll ever be" was all he said
Percy thrust riptide into his armpit earning a howl from Luke and he started glowing very bright like a supernova, but strangely Percy didn't feel the need to close his eyes.
After the light dimmed down Percy looked around for the scythe so he could give it to Hestia to melt down but he couldn't find it anywhere he looked.
While he was looking Luke, Grover, and Annabeth were having a nice heart to heart conversation.
Time skip
Mt. Olympus, Greece, battle with Gaea
The Gods had just arrived via riding their chariots from the skies and Percy engaged Polybotes with his father.
"Wonderful day to kill some giants eh dad?"Percy asked.
"There's never been a better one son." Poseidon replied.
Percy got into a rythem of jump, dodge, slash, parry, jump, stab, and so on.
Eventually he got a strike in the giants heart and Poseidon stabbed the heart from the other side and Polybotes crumbled into dust.
"Dad go help Leo and Hephaestus!" Percy yelled.
While Poseidon ran off to help Leo and his dad Percy ran up to help Apollo with Leon.
"Hey cuz thanks for stoppin by to help me with this guy" said Apollo.
"No problem man" Percy replied
This giant was much easier for Percy to help Apollo kill because he just had to get in close and stab him while Apollo shot arrows. Eventually Percy got a good hit in and three arrows went right into Leon's brain and he disintegrated.
At this point was when Percy heard a scream and a yell at the same time. He saw Jason with a long gash down his arm and Annabeth was unconscious with a broken nose. Their blood dripped to the ground and it rumbled. Gaea woke up and formed a solid form the size of a normal human being.
Gaea started walking towards Annabeth to finish her off but Percy vision became tinted with red. He seemed to be generating light and time seemed to slow down for everyone but him. He laid waste to the monster armies and got in front of Gaea before she could reach Annabeth.
"GAEA, you have killed my friends and family and you just tried to murder my girlfriend, so I Perseus Jackson challenge you to a duel"Percy yelled.
Gaea was obviously surprised at this but then smiled deviously and said,"I accept your offer Jackson" and summoned two katanas made of Earth.
Percy and Gaea battled for an hour before the giants were defeated and people started coming to watch. Apollo then shot an arrow at Gaea but it was blocked by Percy.
"No interferences Apollo, This is a fair duel" Percy yelled
While he was distracted Gaea took the opportunity to slash at his neck to try to decapitate him but he blocked and jumped over the other sword while simultaneously slashing at her arm. It got nicked and Gaea screamed in rage which made her attacks slightly easier to dodge because she wasn't thinking as much. She slashed both swords at his chest but he let them hit and just thrust riptide right through her heart. She look down at the sword going through her chest and smiled.
"It's been a good duel Jackson, but I believe you've won" said Gaea before she disintegrated
Percy just stood there for a few seconds, then dropped his sword and yelled "WE DID IT WE WON THE WAR!"
Everyone cheered and some people just sat down on the ground because they were tired while the gods all summoned seats for everyone. After s\just resting for a few minutes and letting it sit in that they won the gods flashed them to the throne room.
Zeus started his speech but Percy just zoned out.
Li/ne
"Nico Di Angelo!"
Nico walked to the front of the throne room and knelt before Zeus.
"Nico Di Angelo for your efforts we offer you minor godhood and the position as your fathers lieutenant and heir. Do you accept?"
" Yes Lord Zeus"
Nico walked over to the side to wait for any others that accept godhood.
"Hazel Levesque, Frank Zhang, Piper Mclean, Jason Grace, and Leo Valdez!"
The five that were called followed what Nico did and knelt before Zeus
"You five for your efforts we offer you minor godhood and miniature thrones in the throne room as your parents advisers, do you accept?"
"Yes" they chorused.
They went to go wait with Nico.
"Annabeth Chase" Athena called.
Annabeth walked up and knelt before her mother and then walked and knelt before Zeus.
"Annabeth Chase for your efforts we would like to reward you with partial immortality and the ability to create New Greece inside Camp Half-Blood."
"Yes Yes Yes Yes and Yes" She yelled.
She ran over to the others already thinking about designs for buildings.
"PERSEUS JACKSON"Poseidon yelled at max volume. All whispering and chatting stopped at that moment.
Percy went up and knelt before his father and then Zeus.
"Perseus stand up I know you're uncomfortable and since I know you won't accept godhood, what do you want?"Zeus said.
Percy stood up with a look of surprise before starting" okay first of all you need to release the peaceful titans like you promised last time, I want Hades and Hestia back on the council, and partial immortality like Annabeth."
"All in favor of Perseus' wish?"Zeus called. 12 hands rose into the air.
"Welcome back to the council brother and sister" Zeus said clapping his hands making two new thrones pop out. One was made of shadows and bones while the other was made of pure fire.
Hades went up and patted Percy's shoulder while Hestia full on tackle hugged him in her eight year old form. Nobody noticed but they both gave Percy their blessing and withheld the physical effects until later.
"Hermes go and get Leto and Rhea so he knows we won't break our promise this time." Zeus said
When Hermes arrived back with them Apollo and Artemis in 6 year old forms tackle hugged Leto and the Rhea's children did the same to her.
After everyone calmed down after ten minutes Poseidon noticed something.
"Brother I have realized something, we haven't given Percy a gift." Poseidon said.
"You don't call this a gift!" Zeus thundered.(ha get it)
" No I mean this all benefits others, nothing benefits him."
"ah, I see, Perseus we are going to give you a gift, either you can choose it or we will choose it for you."
Percy stood there surprised and started thinking."Uncle I have a few idea but for my idea to work I need them all"
"OK nephew what are they."
"Well firstly I would like Athena's, Hephaestus', and Hecate's blessing so I can draw building plans, then build them, and enchants things or use the mist and secondly a backpack with one pocket being a bottomless storage dimension to store personal items and monster spoils and the second pocket like Leo's tool belt so I can get supplies to build the stuff on my plans."
"Why would you need to build things nephew?"
"Well I was thinking of setting up hideouts across the country in case I need supplies or I need a place to rest while on a quest or rescuing a demigod or something."
"I understand now and your wish shall be granted, Hephaestus, Athena you know what to do and Hermes please go get Hecate."
Everyone was suprised because normally if a demigod got this much power Zeus would kill them. When Athena blessed him he felt his mind expand and battle plans start forming. When Hephaestus blessed him he felt lots and lots of forging knowledge enter his head, almost as much knowledge as Athena's blessing. After a few minutes Hermes returned with Hecate and received her blessing, when it happened Percy felt a subtle shift in his mind and he felt magic at his fingertips.
"Thank you uncle"
"No problem nephew"
Percy went to stand by the newly immortalized demigods but a blast of light hit his back causing him to almost trip.
"Even if you didn't ask for my blessing you deserve it cuz" Apollo said.
"Thanks Apollo" Percy replied.
"Well now that the rewards are over with IT'S TIME TO PARTY WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" Zeus yelled.