(hey guys this is my first fanfic so im very excited to see how it goes ! i love divergent and i really wanted to develope Hector in it more so the story is based on my OC Kiley (i wanted to spell it differently the Kylie) who is the daughter of Jeanine Matthews and is in erudite. Kiley and hector will meet in the story and might develope more then a friendship ;) The story takes place one year after Tris joins dauntless and the story will also have other characters such as four,Lynn,Shauna,Zeke,Christina,peter and some of my own characters! Please review i would love to know what you think and if i should continue with the story or not! Thanks ;) xx)
Chapter 1: Aptitude test
Kiley P.O.V
I wake up before me alarm goes off,the sun spilling through the window,my blonde hair scattered across the pillow as I lie on my back gazing up at the ceiling its the only part of my room not covered up with biology or chemistry posters or interesting facts on the history of the other factions.
I sit up and run my fingers through my waist length hair and look around my room,most of my belongings in my room are blue as it is my factions colour main colour. I look over and my study desk that is pilled high with sheets of paper and textbooks.
I get up and stretch out my arms and let out a yawn. I suddenly feel the nerves building in my stomach when i remember what day it is,how did i let it slip my mind even for a second,today is the day i take my aptitude test. I know that if i dont get Erudite my mother will be furious,everyone expects me to take after her and take over being leader of Erudite when she becomes tp old. Yeah that's right Jeanine Matthews is my mommy and i am her only daughter Kiley Matthews. Its not something i like to brag about. I dont wanna be the new Erudite leader I don't fit into Erudite,then again i don't know wear i fit in.
I walk over to my wardrobe and open it up revealing row after row of different shades of blue and some black and whites to leave a bit of variety.I select a black skater skirt and a blue long sleeve netted top and my favorite pair of blur converse i put on my clothes tucking my top into my skirt which hits around my mid-thigh. I brush my hair free and part it down the middle clipping some of the shorted bits back out of my face. I like leaving it down it means i can show of my electric blonde hair which is probably the only thing i inherited from her.
I take a look at myself in the mirror and i have to admit i don't look that bad. As always the blue makes my piercing blue eyes pop I out line my eyes with black liquid eye liner and colour my lashes in with mascara. I put on my glasses,over all im quiet pleased with my handy work i give one last look at myself in the mirror and with a grin i walk out of my room,closing the door behind me.
I brush my teeth and run down three flights of stairs,the house is so peaceful with my mom already gone to work. I walk into the kitchen and grab an apple and my book bag and skip out the door slamming the door behind me and locking it.
I don't feel so nervous anymore now that im outside. My best friend Taryn is just coming out her front door she is wearing a white and blue dress her short chocolate-brown hair is also down,she has her glasses on and her book bag is on one shoulder. She greets me with her warm smile
"Morning Ky! all ready for the test ?"
I grin "Yeah feeling a little nervous what about you?"
Shes walks beside me looking down at her feet she is silent for a few minutes before she says "yeah im terrified..."
I give a nervous laugh and we continue on towards our school were the tests are being held we walk in silence we both have a lot to think about.
We arrive at school and when i push in the door a wave of nerves hit me this is now so real. We walk into the hall and i can sence Taryn in scared aswell. I look around at all the colours i see the grey abnegation sitting silently together looking down at their hands i definitely wouldn't fit in there i think to myself.
Beside abnegation is amity in red and yellow who are always smiling and so lively playing music and singing to peaceful for a girl like me i think
Beside amity is candor in white and black who are all laughing loudly and talking spreading gossip as usual and then i see them, laughing and messing sitting on tables talking and teasing the dauntless in black i think to myself they look so free and alive I watch them in awe. I feel Taryn pulling on my arm I look away from dauntless and look at my friend
"Come on Come onnnnnnnnnnn! Adam and Jake saved us seats"
I shrug and begin to walk over towards the sea of blue all with their heads stuck in books or newspapers. Many are to ingroced in what they are reading to acknowledge us but some give us a nod or a smile. I sit down beside Adam who gives me a huge grin and looks at me with those big green eyes
"Hey kiddo! how are you feeling?"
I laugh "First of don't call me 'kiddo' okay gumdrop? and second im terrified!"
He laughs and smiles "Sorry sugarplum! yeah same here we will be okay"
He nods as if also reassuring himself. I roll my eyes and smile at him. I look across the table at Jake I give him a cheeky wink and a grin I can see him grin he flicks back his dark blonde hair out of his blue eyes to give me a dazzling smile. Taryn and Adam laugh,I don't know how im going to be able to leave my best friends behind.
A young woman dressed i gray from abnegation walks into the room she call out two girls from abnegation,two girls from candor,a boy and a girl from amity,two boys from dauntless and Taryn and Adam from erudite. I wish them well and hug them both before I sit back down. I look back over at jake who i dont even think noticed Adam and Taryn leave he has his head stuck in a geography book I look at him in awe hes so smart and loves learning i have no doubt in my mind he will stay in erudite.
I take out my english book from my bag and try to concentrate or at least look like im interested in reading it i look over the top of my book at the amity a group of girls braiding each others hair with out a care in the world. I take a look at the group of girls in candor all gossiping and chatting. I envy these people I look at my faction not quiet in disgust but close enough to it they all sit their reading books and papers not even lifting there heads to admire the world around them. I'm the complete opposite of my faction, I crave adventure and danger,these people crave knowledge they live of facts and will ask anything to receive more information.
"Kiley Matthews, Erudite!" I sit up straighter when i hear my name,Jake was called in the group before me. This is it time to see where i belong. I get up and begin to walk towards the woman in red and yellow. As im passing a group of dauntless i hear one of them say
"It's a pity she's erudite..."
The other dauntless laugh and cheer on the boy. I blush and turn around i decide to give the boy a wink and smile. This makes the boy blush and the other dauntless boys cheer and whistle. I laugh and walk over to the woman in red and yellow still smiling.
As I wait to go into the testing room i think about the boy with sandy blonde hair and warm brown eyes that would make any girls heart melt and that smile oh my god...
I am woken out of my day-dream when the woman tells us we can go in. I walk into the dimly lit room with just a chair and a few computers and machines around. The woman by the chair greets me with a smile
"hey im tori i will be monitoring your test today"
I smile back "okay dokie"
Tori laughs "I never thought id hear an erudite say 'okay dokie' before"
I laugh thinking to myself some of us arent meant to stay in the faction we were born in for a reason
"Here drink this! don't even bother asking questions because i wont answer just drink it please!"
I drink down the clear liquid in one go and relax my head back closing my eyes
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I wake up and look at Tori who seems a little worried
"uhhhhh Tori is everything okay?"
shes shakes her head violently "NO no no no"
"WHAT ?"
She looks at me "your results were inconclusive!"
"Tori ? what do you mean my results were inconclusive?" i begin to feel worried
"you got four different results Abnegation,Erudite,Candor and Dauntless you don't fit into a catagory...they call it Divergent"
I sit there shell-shocked I have heard my mother talk about divergents before and i know she wants them dead
"KILEY! KILEY! listen to me no one can find out about this! ill put erudite into your results record. It's not safe for you in erudite you can't stay there"
"OH MY GOD TORI THERE GONNA KILL ME!" I Scream
"SHHHHHHH! NO there not no one is gonna kill you okay kiley i want you to be brave..." she gives me a serious look and i know what she means
"okay okay thank you for your time tori"
shes laughs slightly "Your abnegation is showing...kiley dont let your mother find out..."
"Dont worry i wont trust me" I nod and smile and leave the room only to bump into my brown eyed dauntless boy.
(Thanks for reading! please review so i can no if i should continue or not and any advise you have will be taken on board! Oh and sorry for the spelling :/!)
