28/4-2012
I'm starting to go trough this story's grammar and make it flow better. I'm going to revise this story's chapters slowly since I don't want to push myself too hard on getting the chapters done quickly since I want to take the time I need to correct them. Hopefully they will be a lot better than they were (almost) three years ago. Time sure flies by :D
Ocean of Secrets
First chapter of my new story Ocean if Secrets. Took me 2 days to write this chapter. I put my imagination to test to see what I could accomplish and here is the result. Remember I don't own Yu-Gi-Oh or anything of it this (points down) is just a fanfic.
Enjoy!
Chapter 1: Imagination or not?
A shiny summer day in middle of July it was 35 degrees. The wheater man pronounced that this day was the warmest day in over 20 years in Japan. Almost every people in Japan were on the beach even a certain blue eyed CEO was on the beach with his little brother. The great CEO was sitting down and was typing on his computer that involved his company. The ocean in front of him was glittering but he didn't even look at it. Now his brother had enough he walked in front of the CEO and pushed down the computer screen with a click.
"Mokuba I was working on that" the CEO opened his computer screen again but Mokuba pushed it down again and took it from him.
"But that is what you always do Seto. You need some rest before you kill yourself with too much work" Mokuba pointed out and held Seto's computer protectively with his hands.
"Mokuba I run a big company and it is my job to keep it running" Seto crossed his arms over his chest.
"But can't you take this day off? This only single day?" Mokuba did his famous puppyeyes that no one could resist. Seto looked at his little brother and tries to resist those cute eyes. Inside of him he was mentally kicking him to not fall into those eyes.
"Fine" Seto lost this time. He stood up and takes off his shirt and was now standing only in bathing shorts.
Mokuba put down his brothers computer and took a god grip of his hand and drags him down to the water.
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At the ocean bottom a blond boy with honey coloured fin laid down on the sandy bottom staring at the surface above him. He wondered what was there. He remembered the stories that the creatures above the surface has captured and killed his people. Something up there was calling him, begging him to break the surface to enter the forbidden world.
"Hey Jounouchi are you all right?" The blond boy named Jounouchi turned his head and looked at his friend.
"I'm fine Honda" he replied
"You were dazing away"
"So?"
"I got a little worried about you that's all" Honda leaned back and was now also facing the surface.
Jounouchi closed his eyes and fell soon asleep.
"Jou... Jou..."
Jounouchi opened his eyes and he quickly sits up and looked around him. All he could see was sand as far as his eyes could reach.
"Who's there?"
"Over here"
He looks up at the surface and sees that there is someone above him. Slowly he began swimming up and reaches his hand to this someone. It reached its hand to Jou and blue eyes stared at him...
"Jou" Jounouchi opened his eyes and stares at Honda
"What now?" Jounouchi sighed and put his arm over his eyes
"Well we should have been home about 20 minutes ago" When Jounouchi realised this he quickly got up and took a hold of Honda's hand and pulls him up. Then he swam as fast as he could home.
"Why am I having the same dream over and over again? I don't get it" Jounouchi thought to himself.
Halfway home Jounouchi realised something and halted while turning around.
"Jou, where are you going? Home is that way" the green tailed boy named Honda pointed in front of himself.
"I forgot something, I will come as fast as I can when I get it" Jounouchi yelled back at Honda and swam away without his friend.
"Okay but don't be too late you know the rules" Honda yelled back to Jou and then he swam to where his home is.
Jounouchi reached where he and Honda was before. The boy swam to the bottom and picked up his necklace that held a honey coloured stone tangling on it and he put it around his neck.
"Jou..Jou"
Jounouchi heard this voice and searched with his eyes where the voice came from "The surface" Jou remembered. He looks up and starts to swim there. The only thing that went trough his mind was that the person calling him could be the one who called his name. He weren't thinking what could be up there could harm him. As he reached the surface the water became clearer and clearer and when he was just below the surface he stopped. He took a deep breath and broke it. He was now on unknown territory. Jounouchi began searching the area around him and then he saw land. He went back to below the surface and started to swim towards the land he just saw. It didn't take very long time when he was really close to it.
"Maybe this wasn't a very good idea" Jou thought and stopped before he reached land. Then suddenly a shadow went past above him. He looks up and stares at where that shadow came from. The thing that was there wasn't very big. But what caught Jou's attention were the blue eyes he saw. A brown haired boy sat there with a smaller boy that looked almost like him.
"He looks just like me" Jounouchi spoke out quietly without taking his eyes of the blue eyed boy. Then Jounouchi looked closer at the boy.
"Well almost, except for the legs" Jounouchi thought
"Legs?" At that point Jounouchi's eyes went big when he realised what he said. He swam to the bottom and hid behind a big rock. He peeked at the boy in the surface behind his rock.
"He's a human" Jounouchi gasped "Weren't they supposed to be a legend of my people but there is two of them above me" Then the blue eyed boy looked down and tried to reach something. Jounouchi looked what he tried to reach and saw something slowly gliding thought the water. He looks up again at the boy who was now staring back at him. Jounouchi pushed his back hard against the rock and hoped that the boy didn't see him. Slowly peeking over the rock he sees the human shaking his head as they the floated away. Jounouchi let out a sigh in relief.
"That was too close" He said and started to swim back home but then his eyes spotted the thing that that boy dropped. Jounouchi picked it up with his hand and looked closely at it.
"It's a ring" it was a silver ring with blue dragon on it. Jounouchi took of his necklace and put the ring on his chain. The ring was now hanging in the chain with Jou's honey coloured stone. He put it back around his neck and started swim back home.
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"Just my luck" Seto muttered as he and Mokuba are pulling their boat back to the shore.
"I'm sorry about the ring Seto" Mokuba said to his older brother
"Don't worry about it. It was just a ring" Seto put his hand on his little brother shoulder to let him know it was okay. Mokuba nodded and they packed their stuff and on their way to the car Seto thought what happened when he dropped his ring.
"What was down there when I dropped my ring. I think I saw something. A pair of honey coloured eyes, where have I've seen those before and did it have a fin?"
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