Equestrian Revolution: Return of the corruption
-Sequel to 'Equestrian Revolution'-
DISCLAIMER: I do not own My Little Pony, Friendship is Magic. It is owned by Hasbro. This story is based on the show, and it does not reflect my opinion on any character. This is just an idea I came up with, that I thought was interesting. Enjoy!
[This is still a work-in-progress, so I probably have some corrections to make. If you see any, please let me know via PM. Also, if you have a suggestion for the story, let me know :D
PART I
2 months after the Equestrian civil war ended, the damages to the land and cities have been almost completely repaired. Valrek had kept his word when he promised that. He had also began construction of a new city- with Amelioration at its center. The city is named after the city, similar to Canterlot. The construction was fast, yet sturdy and efficient, for the best builders of Equestria teamed up with the reformed Royal Guard and Vanguard. Since the city was in the middle of the Everfree forest, the trees and animals had to be relocated. There was an area to the east that was clear, and most of the trees and animals were relocated there. The city was almost complete, the only incomplete areas were a few houses. The castle, now commonly referred as Inner Amelioration, has been built on the surface as well. It now towers over the city, a modern and strong.
"So why does Valrek want to meet with us?" said Rainbow Dash. The six ponies were on a carriage, going to Equestria's new capitol, Amelioration. "The letter said that he wanted to meet us personally and discuss his plans for Equestria's future. I think he said that Princess Luna will be there too." said Twilight Sparkle. "Well, this doesn't feel right. Just a few months ago, we were trying to hunt him down.". Twilght Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Applejack were a part of the Equestrian Armed Forces, and were on leave. Since there was no threat to Equestria, all armed forces were to be on leave (Called to training on a regular basis though) until needed. The only on duty military was the Royal Guard. When the carriage got to the city, they were amazed at the sight. They expected it to be plain- looking, due to the speed of which it was built. But instead, it looked strong and the architecture was amazing. "Just look at these buildings... Who would have thought that in such a short time, this city would turn out to be a rival to Canterlot! Even look at the fasion! Such a variety!" said an exasperated Rarity. "Yeah, well I am more interested in seeing the castle." said Rainbow Dash. "Why the castle?" asked Twilight. "Mainly because I want to see what Valrek was hiding in the whole time.". "Well, he wasn't hiding the whole time," said Applejack "he actually was a part of some battles. You should know that, because you actually fought him.". Rainbow nodded. During the invasion of Cloudsdale, she had fought Valrek. She had not expected this, and it was on the last day out of the battle, which lasted two and a half days. "How did nopony ever find THAT?" Rainbow said when they looked at the castle. "It sticks out like a sore hoof!" she continued. "I have no idea..." said Twilight as she stared in confusion. When they arrived at the castle, they were escorted to the main room, where Valrek and Luna were waiting. "Ah, you are just in time! Welcome to Amelioration. What do you think of it so far?" said Valrek. "How did you hide this the whole time? I didn't even know this was here." Rainbow Dash said before any of the others could say anything. "Well, the whole thing was underground during the war. When we began construction of the city, the surface portion of the castle was built. The whole thing is actually twice as big as you think, because the underground area is still in use." Valrek answered. When they finished talking about the city, Valrek said "Now, to business. Follow me.". He led them out of the main room, and down the hallway to a discussion room. When they all were seated at the table, he said "Now, as you all know, I have called you here to discuss Equestria's future. I am going to allow us to progress technologically and societally. Now, because Celestia has kept us at a standstill for so long, I believe that there will be a massive leap in advancement. I want to feed that, and only restrict it to prevent negative effects, for example: environmental harm.". The others nodded, agreeing that it sounded good. Then Luna spoke up "And how will you govern Equestria?". "Thank you, Luna, for bringing that up. I want to appoint representatives for every region of Equestria. They will tell me what that region needs and wants, and they will have some leading power. But, since I am king of Equestria, I get the final say. Don't get the wrong idea though, for I understand that the citizens of Equestria are not just citizens, they are Equestria." Valrek said. They were all surprised, for this was a very different wiew of ruling. "And Luna, you will rule over Canterlot, and be its representative, as I promised.". Luna smiled, and thanked him. When the meeting was over, the six ponies were escorted to their rooms, and they went out in the city afterwards. Valrek and Luna stayed in the discussion room, for Valrek wanted to ask her something in private. "Luna, how are you feeling?" he asked. "I feel fine, why do you ask?" she answered. "I was just wondering. And how are things in Canterlot?". "The repairs are almost finished, and everything is almost back to normal. Well, about as normal as it can get without Celestia and with a new leader. But I am getting used to it." she said. "It is good that you are getting used to the changes, and I hope things settle down soon.". They both left the room, and Luna left Amelioration to return to Canterlot.