okay hey first before i begin this story i just
want to say happy aniversary Karma on your
story and genrally just thank you for being
one of the best fanfic writers i have ever read
any thing on that website. you also are one of
the main rasons why i love fullmetal alchemist
so much as your protrayl of the characters are
spot on and your own characters, you and your
friends if i remeber correctly, are just so
enjoyable i can eaisly say they are just as good
as the characters in the manga and anime.
sorry if i don't get them right on the dot.
from your early work to what you do know you
are consistently awesome.

sorry if i get you guys wrong

AU STORY(every one is 15)
An Encounter With Between Karmyn And Terra.
...

We enter this story following a young tanned teenager,
wearing a cheap white hoody, slightly torn trousers and
white trainers walking down the street to hopefully
be the first in line to buy the new fullmetal alchemist
ova movie; THE SACRED STAR OF MILOS from HMV.

He picked up his stride as he saw the purple sign
appering in the distance.

'yes it's time'he thought excitedly,his feet
gaining a slight bounce as he begaing visibly
bouncing towards the store.'after so much
work getting that the money to buy it on day
of release'

But disaster struck as he saw a small line outside the store
with two girls stod at the back aruguening about not
coming earlyer to the store.

'pretty much summing up what im thinking'he thought as
his speed marginallly slowed down but not before
a slight misjudgement in foot placement an a jagged piece
of tarmack had him falling face first into the ground

the two girls in the line were quick to react one of them
exclaiming "whoa you okay there?!" she exclaimed rushing over
quickly to check on him while the other gave him a hand up

"damn yeh yeh im good"he grunted out as he was being helped
out. he decided to get a quick look at the two girls
one was defintly tall towering over him making him slightly gape
at the diffrence in hight, she had long dark har with a couple of
multicoloured streaks in it, she was wearing a dark blue
shirt with a logo telling people 'to look but not touch' on the back
with dark jeans and brown sandells. tearing his gaze from the now
called giant in his mind turned to the other girl stood her height
much closer to his, she had dark hair as well but had no streaks in it,
she was defintley here for the dvd as she was wearing a t-shirt which
displayed some of the characters of fullmetal decorating the top in
a design simmilar to the star wars film a new hope, she also had
light blue jeans and grey ballet in all a single word
to describe them would be...cute yeh thats a good word

"you sure your okay?"the shorter one asked

"yeh im good thanks...?" he trailled hoping to gain there names

"ah yeh im Kathy and this is Kai you"the tal- Kathy answerd she said
pointing at each as they said there names

"Terrance friends call me terra" he replied shaking ther hands
"so you two here for the fullmetal film"

"yep it's going to be awesome"Kathy replied

"yeh its a whole new story with orginal characters to the film plus
more of the elric brothers is alwas a good thing"Kai continued

They all chatted about fullmetal and its lore and characeters
as the line slowly moved forwerd until they made it inside and each buying
the movie and then the trio exchanged contact info so they could hang out
another time before parting ways with two brown haired green eyed brothers bought the
movie also before heading out just behiend the trio

"seems like Himori made a new story about us brother"the taller one said
"yeh al seems so hope it'll be intresting"the smaller one said smirking

this was one of the many times the elrics just missed meeting the people who would
help them return home but they are destined to meet again.
...

that was so bad but as a first attempt at fanfiction that wasn't just oc
creation im happy enough with it.

sorry for any spelling mistakes