A/N: Hey its me with a rewritten version of my story
I own nothing except for my wording or the plot and Dawn the rest belongs to:
Jeff and Danny :PnF characters and Places
IzzieGS: Midnight and the kinda plot
DDsweetieMCR: Dusk and Bane
Enjoy the story!
Prologue
My name is Dawn Star I'm your normal 14 year old girl, well...sort of. I have bright red wavy hair that falls to my mid back and emerald green eyes. I am in love with music especially my guitar it's black with a really cool red dragon on it. People say I have a fire burning in my soul I say I just don't like those things people call manners or being exactly a proper woman. My parents died when I was 8, my parents sent me to England to live with my gran and gramps Star at age 9. My uncle got my younger sister Midnight and my brother Dusk was sent to Canada to live with my mom's parents. I come from a strange family you see we have these "gifts" and each one is unique. I can control fire, my brother can shape shift , and I'm not sure what Midnight can do but maybe I'll get the chance to find out some day. Anyway I haven't been able to talk to Dusk since he moved to Canada . The only way I even know Midnight is a picture I keep with me wherever I go especially when I travel it's a family portrait that was taken not too long before my parents died. My life is great even though I barely know the rest of my family. I met this really nice girl and we became friends immediately even though she's older than me her name is Eliza Fletcher. She tries to make me a bit more proper (she usually fails) and I try to get her to help me start a band but she usually says no. We have very few similarities but we get along just like sisters.
Chapter One
"Eliza why did you have to call so early?" I complained I was already awake but I hated how she called at 6 o'clock am.
"Because"she replied "i have to tell you something super exciting!"
"Well it better be good cause I'm about to start practicing my guitar"
"Alright you see, I'm going to visit my cousins in America and you are coming with
me!"
"OK" I replied not knowing why that was so exciting about that
"Come on please act excited the only thing that ever excites you is your guitar" she whined
"OK fine let me try this again" I said "OMG I get to go with you to America Yay!"
"Much better" she commented " Anyway we are leaving in two days so I'm coming over later so we can go shopping for new clothes and to start packing"
"OK fine whatever I'll be ready in an hour if its OK with you for us to go shopping kinda early today I have tea at twelve today for my gran's birthday
That's fine tell your gran I said happy birthday!"
Just as I hung up the phone my Gramps called me down for breakfast
Eliza showed up exactly an hour later ready to go while I still needed to finish my hair.
"Eliza oh Eliza you are so on time why don't you sit while I do my hair." I sung while strumming my guitar
"I thought you said you would be ready to go in a hour and you hung up at 6:15 and right now its 7:15" she complained
"I had to do some other stuff for later" I explained.
As I finished getting ready she told me a bout our trip and what kind of things wee may need to bring with us. Then we headed out on our bikes toward some of the best shops in town. I got a few new pairs of shorts and some new tank tops. At the same time Eliza got some new pants. Then we headed to a great store to get some shoes to match our new clothes. After that we headed home to start getting ready for our trip
Thanks For reading now see that text box thing right below my A/N use it to tell me what you thought! did you love it? Did you hate it? was it mediocre? or was it so bad i should go die in a hole? These are the things i want to know!
'Till Next Time
Haley!