I first posted this the day after monty died may his soul rest in remnant I ended up talking to a couple of friends who have experince in writing stories and know abit more about RWBY so after a week of depersion I took down the start of the old one and started again to fix some things that would have been a problem in the future I do have a couple ideas for near future chapters now because before I was having some writers block on the first chapter and now i know how to fix it. This is my first fanfiction I have ever wrote so please if you have any ideas or advice please put them in the comments and I will go through them. Also if I find any flames you will be burned with said flames. So to start the story I will start give you the bio for my first OC character. Also if you have ideas for the names for the scythes and gun please put them in the comments.

Name: Chris Willams

Semblance: Shadow control. This power allows the user to control shadows in many different ways such as Shadow Traveling and being able to create things such as shadow spikes and words

Likes: Friends, nice people, food, weapons, good times, music.

Dislikes: People who think they are better then others, Bullies, Fish, bad people

Species: Dragon faunus

Age:16

Aura color: Dark green

Weapons: New Dawn: A Golden Bow that shoots arrows of light and can disconnect into two medium scythes for duel combat. A revolver that makes ammo out of the users own aura.

Appearance: Wears a black hoodie with six pockets a skull shirt and a dark pair of jeans. Chris being a Dragon faunus has a 3 foot long tale with a kind of spear head at the end can be used as a weapon. Chris being slightly different from other faunus has wings with a spike on each wing that when spread can reach a wingspan of up to five feet. Chris has brown eyes and short curly dark brown hair with white skin.

Back story: Worked as a mercenary for about 8 years of his life killing grim and fighting the wight fang. At the age of 6 he lost his family to a fire started by the white fang because Chris's family would not support them saying how there would be more peace with the humans if the white fang disbanded after the war. Chris was the only survivor of the fire his father and mother did not make it. For the next 2 years until he became a mercenary he blamed himself. To this day he looks for the people that caused that fire.